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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I get home from class and what do I find? Two brand new chapter waiting for me! I loved those now that all the emotionally deep stuff in coming to the surface. I love that crap! Can\'t wait for the next part. Wow, you got almost 60 reviews. I am so jealous! ;)
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!
You\'re SO kind!!!!(sob).
Goog story! Keep up the good, no great work!
You\'re SO kind!!!!(sob).
Goog story! Keep up the good, no great work!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the opening paragraphs of Chapter 11, explaining about Yamcha and Bulma and Goku \'marking his territory\' but when I got to this --- \"Gohan had wisely decided to stay as far away from the house as he could while still being on the same planet.\" --- I lost it completely...funny stuff :-)
What to say about the following scenes, where it all culminated in Vegeta flying off and leaving a very unhappy Goku in the upstairs hallway...one word - Brilliant! Vegeta\'s \"You will not!\" was very true to character and I can even see him saying the other stuff as well, even though he would regret it later. I can understand his panic, yet completely sympathise with Goku\'s despair at his words.
Canon couples: Hmmm, not a problem for me, but I am glad that it\'s only to be a one off...Vegeta & Goku are so right together in this fic :-)
Errr...what did Vegeta mean by Kakarot being something that he could never be...because, no-one is more proud of his Saiyan heritage than Vegeta is...have I misinterpretd the paragraph?
The lemon was so sweet...Vegeta needed to show Goku what he meant to him and he did it well. I\'m deeply touched by this scene.
What to say about the following scenes, where it all culminated in Vegeta flying off and leaving a very unhappy Goku in the upstairs hallway...one word - Brilliant! Vegeta\'s \"You will not!\" was very true to character and I can even see him saying the other stuff as well, even though he would regret it later. I can understand his panic, yet completely sympathise with Goku\'s despair at his words.
Canon couples: Hmmm, not a problem for me, but I am glad that it\'s only to be a one off...Vegeta & Goku are so right together in this fic :-)
Errr...what did Vegeta mean by Kakarot being something that he could never be...because, no-one is more proud of his Saiyan heritage than Vegeta is...have I misinterpretd the paragraph?
The lemon was so sweet...Vegeta needed to show Goku what he meant to him and he did it well. I\'m deeply touched by this scene.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*kills ChiChi and Bulma* then *smiles* Ahh....I was laughing so hard until I came to the sex part and then I wanted those women to die, and I like Bulma, but at the moment she needed to die!!!! Especially for calling MY OUJI dog sh*t!!!!! But I still love the ficcie. How could they do it to other ppl??? *cries* My poor Veggie never willing to submit....damn the princely pride!!! I know I should have taken your advice and not read the fic in class...uh...but I didn\'t, so once again my classmates think I\'m loopy b/c I\'m over here going crazy!
But what can I say...I\'m addicted and I really liked this chapter it had the surprising twist of het sex that I truly never suspected. So now I know you like to keep the reader\'s on their toes.
Gohan did make me laugh when you said he stays as far from the house as possible while still being on the planet! *shakes head* That was just too funny!
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But what can I say...I\'m addicted and I really liked this chapter it had the surprising twist of het sex that I truly never suspected. So now I know you like to keep the reader\'s on their toes.
Gohan did make me laugh when you said he stays as far from the house as possible while still being on the planet! *shakes head* That was just too funny!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was so rad, it was radalicious *sobs* That lemon was so sweet. *hugs Vegeta* He finally let Goku be on top, I\'m so proud of him!
^.* Keep up the awesome chaps!
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^.* Keep up the awesome chaps!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuck! Sorry, but reading about v/b and g/c makes me vomit. Literaly.
PLEASE post another chapter today. I\'m all depressed. Thats not a good way to start the day.
PLEASE post another chapter today. I\'m all depressed. Thats not a good way to start the day.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read it again.
Did you just create Trunks and Goten?
PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER TODAY!!
Did you just create Trunks and Goten?
PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER TODAY!!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O....................Both new chapters.......gods.....*mouth hanging open*Really I have nothing against chichi or bulma and usually prefer to see them get together after goku or vegeta leave them.....That was....*eyes wide and drooling*Continue....
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Hey…AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! MY eyes!” ROTFL! Love Yamcha in this!
Ah Gods, poor Vegeta...to wake up to such attention, only to have it all stop as soon as he became aware enough to fix breakfast...Goku is soooo cruel.
Loved the picture you presented of Vegeta and Goku in the kitchen...Vegeta all mussed up and clanging pots and pans, whilst Goku \'innocently\' played with his tail whilst he waited for his food. I\'m beginning to suspect that the Earth Saiyan has a very cunning mind :-)
Loved it when Bulma was berating herself by saying thhe whe was not going to get between the two Saiyans and then realised what an interesting thought that actually was, LOL ... although if it were me, only Vegeta would be getting my attention...pleased to note that she took time out to watch his tight little butt.
Vegeta\'s got to keep a real sharp eye on his lusty mate from now on...poor bastard\'s not going to get any sleep is he? LOL Vegeta\'s possessive claim of \"Mine\" to Bulma was a real treat, love it when he does this.
Goku feeling dominant? Oh dear...strange, normally I\'d be yelling \'Go for it Goku\' but now I\'m torn between wanting to see Vegeta writhing around in sheer pleasure under Goku\'s touch and wanting Vegeta to remain dominant. What a dilemma.
This is wonderful reading :-)
Ah Gods, poor Vegeta...to wake up to such attention, only to have it all stop as soon as he became aware enough to fix breakfast...Goku is soooo cruel.
Loved the picture you presented of Vegeta and Goku in the kitchen...Vegeta all mussed up and clanging pots and pans, whilst Goku \'innocently\' played with his tail whilst he waited for his food. I\'m beginning to suspect that the Earth Saiyan has a very cunning mind :-)
Loved it when Bulma was berating herself by saying thhe whe was not going to get between the two Saiyans and then realised what an interesting thought that actually was, LOL ... although if it were me, only Vegeta would be getting my attention...pleased to note that she took time out to watch his tight little butt.
Vegeta\'s got to keep a real sharp eye on his lusty mate from now on...poor bastard\'s not going to get any sleep is he? LOL Vegeta\'s possessive claim of \"Mine\" to Bulma was a real treat, love it when he does this.
Goku feeling dominant? Oh dear...strange, normally I\'d be yelling \'Go for it Goku\' but now I\'m torn between wanting to see Vegeta writhing around in sheer pleasure under Goku\'s touch and wanting Vegeta to remain dominant. What a dilemma.
This is wonderful reading :-)
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very funny! I can\'t believe I didn\'t see it! I never even noticed that new catagory up there for yaoi! I must be blind! I have been missing all the yummy goodness! but at least I found it now and I love it! great story!