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.........You made him a girl.......?

Rad! that was great!!! Goku is just so cute!!! I love the way you write the relationship of these two! Very good!!!!
Oh and Getarian put up some very cool names I like Takashi, Isamu, and Nibori, those are very rad names!!!
Great chap, keep it up!
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Goku with breasts. Tee-Hee, thats funny, and more then a little arousing. I have found that it is really HARD to change ones underclpthing when they are reading this on your schools computer durring english class.
Do you have any ideas?

*falls over anime style* First just let me say, I am at my University right now...in class...and I am certain my classmates probably think I\'m having a spastic attack, I died, fainted, and laughed so many times when I read this! I just looovvveee it! I\'m gonna have to agree with Bulma when she says the sight of Vegeta\'s neck and back make her horny..HELL YEAH!!! what an awesome sight to behold. And when Vegeta said \"Mine.\" Ah...that was die worthy.

But poor Yamcha...*laughs and hugs the former desert bandit* Ya just gotta love the guy, he goes through so much, that was soooo funny! So Goku is thinking of becoming the dominant male? Or is it all part of this lust cycle? I am not complaining b/c I love the Ouji under Goku....but I also have come to love the dominant Veggie you have created here, but if they take turns, that wouldn\'t be ad. ad. GOSH, seriously I just can\'t resist Goku on top of Vegeta...so when he gave him that warning lick, I nearly died...ooookkkkk I\'m rambling...

To Getarian thanks for liking my stories!!! yaysies!!! and Your welcome for the compliments!

Ladylupin-I am in total agreement with you, it is hard to change your underclothes while in class...-_- ideas to do that would be nice....

but this wonderful story will do that to ya!!
I love it!!! *hugs CardDragonBall * thanks for updating everyday, that is beyond cool of you!
I\'m off to read your other ficcie!
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Ok that was hot! Vegeta is damn sexy. I could just picture him in that kitchen ::drools:: This story is great and also very hilarious, you are a very funny person! Goku is going to fight for dominance after the kids are born? I\'m kinda confused about that part. oh and Yamcha I was laughing so hard when I read that, poor guy. You really have me hooked to this story considering I am in school right now, and my teacher just walked by with a warning look on her face! Oh well.
Update soon..err..you update everyday..so uh just keep up the good work!

Another wonderful chapter. Vegeta is really shaping out to be the family man, thank-you for showing this side of him...DBZ never really did him justice in that area, yet it was obvious that Trunks loved him so very much, have to be a good dad for that :-)

Poor ol\' Goku, nothing to do but eat and watch everyone else spar, ya gotta feel sorry for the guy...guess that\'ll teach him to put more thought into his wishes...poor bastard. LOL!

You know something? I really like seme Vegeta in this story, he is so caring, from the tender scene in the kitchen, with the calming trilling noises and his hand on Goku\'s stomach, to seeing to Goku\'s obvious needs in the bathroom. I stileferefer uke Vegeta in the main (I think it\'s because I just want someone to love and care for the man)...but if it\'s done well, as this is, I can really get into seme Vegeta as well.

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

P.S. I\'m glad I was of help with the names, whether any get used or not, I\'m still pleased to have been of assistance. It\'s the least I could do, after you put so much effort into providing us with such wonderful entertainment :-)

*Blushes* I just noticed your review Mechanical Butterfly (another author whose stories I enjoy very much) and I thank-you for the compliment. I\'m pleased you liked some of my choices :-)

Muhaahaaa! Poor Yamcha! That was funny. I love your Goku. He is a damned sneeky little bastard. I always knew that he was waaay smarter than he put on. The lust cycle is in full effect. Poor...everyone. :)

*drools*Oh lemony goodness!*sips lemonade*Continue.

What a wake up call for Vegeta huh!
Guess it\'s preferable to an alarm! ^-^

\'The mental image of the two overly-muscular, overly-dominant, sexy Saiyans going at it was enough to make her envious.\' - have to agree with Bulma on that! ^_^

And I was LMAO with Yamcha\'s unfortunate luck! ^_~
And Goku\'s fighting for dominance now... this ought to be interesting! Poor \'Geta U_U

The last episode of Nip/tuck I watched was really sad, Christian Troy was crying *sniff sniff* We\'re only on episode 8 where I live (England) no fair U_U

...Well I think I\'ve babbled enough! ^^ Can\'t wait till the next chap!!! ^_^