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person Luna
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snickers*Continue!It\'s so cool.NIICE lemon.Not a graphic as others but still.....
person Hecate18
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I watch Nip/Tuck too!
It\'s great!!! ^-^

Anyways... that was a great chap, it delved deeper into Goku\'s pregnancy, (lt klt kind sorry for him!) U_U
Ahhhh! And now the Lust cycles gonna start! - good research you did on it, its the sign of a good writer (or so I\'ve heard O_o)

Looking forward to the next update! ^_^
person LadyLupin
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!!!
That little part of domestic sweetness was so sickenly sweet.
POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! HURRY!!!
person Getarian
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, I must have just missed your latest update when I last reviewed. I love how quickly you update :-)

Territorial Vegeta is wonderful, I loved the scene between him and ChiChi, and manipulative Goku is a complete treat, his realisation that Vegeta really responds to his purrs is the best.

Yamcha\'s reaction was a hoot :-)

Thank-you for sending Trunks back to the future. Nothing against Trunks, I just don\'t want him interfering with Vegeta & Goku\'s relationship.

You asked for possible boys names? I looked up on the net for names & meanings...you wanted something that Vegeta would think up, which had me first thinking of Vegetable names...being a Saiyan thing and all, but I couldn\'t come up with anything, so I considered the possibility that being on Earth has allowed him to think of earth names. Hopefully, the pages I went to are not screwing with the meanings because I really wouldn\'t know otherwise.

Anyway, possibilities are:
From Japanese origin:

MASUYO: meaning \'to increase the world\'
NIBORI: meaning \'to rise to eminence\' OR TAKASHI: which simply means \'Eminence\'
ISAMU: meaning \'Bravery\'

Elsewhere on the net...

KANE: means: \'tribute, warrior; the do-acc-accomplished, golden; man, the eastern sky; beautiful\' From: Gaelic, Japanese, Hawaiian, Welsh.

Elsewhere still...

AJANI: means: \'He who wins the struggle\' From African origin
AJAX: means: \'Strong Warrior\' From Greek origin
ALGER: means: \'Noble Warrior\' From Old German origin
BALI: means: \'Mighty Warrior\' From Hindu origin

Obviously there are like a billion more names to choose from but I really have to go soon, so hopefully I have given you something to at least ponder on, even if none are to your liking, itbeenbeen fun checking all these names & meanings out.

ciao for now :-)
person jaygoose
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor, Goku. That lust cycle thing is going to be terrible. I can\'t wait. Oh and I thought the broom bit with Bulma was genius. I would have never come up with something so funny. I can\'t wait for the next part. I sure am glad you update everyday. I have trouble keeping to my weekly schedule. Heww! ;)
person LadyLupin
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Suger-coated lime. Hows that for an oxy-moron?
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
MY WORLD WILL END IF YOU DON\'T!!!!
person jaygoose
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More smut. It\'s exactly what the world needs! I loved this chapter and how you showed what was going on in not only Vegeta\'s head but Goku\'s hormone crazied . Co. Cool chappie. More please.
person Getarian
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arst rst I wasn\'t sure if I was going to like this, it all seemed a bit strange, and later, I had the biggest fear that Trunks was going to get together with Goku...Ewwww, but thankfully, Vegeta got there in time and saved my sanity :-)

I have to say that I am thoroughly enjoying this, I spent alot of the last couple of chapters with a huge grin on my face. Normally, I prefer Vegeta to be uke, he\'s so adorable like that, but I have to say, I absolutely love him as seme in this one, especially with Goku manipulating him the way he does, it cr me me up.

I loved the whole kitchen scene and Bulma with the broom...f***ing hilarious.

I definitely want more; Keep it coming :-)
person tatoosh
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really enjoyed the last three chapters. The purring and comforting behavoirs are fun to watch. Keep it up.
person jaygoose
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAhaa! Yamcha is hilarious. I love Yamcha. I really wish he wasn\'t such an ass in DBZ. He used to be so cool in Dragonball. I guess as cool as a guy that was scared of chicks could be. But he was sorta cool. Anyway, and poor Trunks. I guess it was for the best that he left for the future. I loved this chapter. And thanks for the special attention...I felt...special. Great fic by the way. :)

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