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by CardDragonBall

person Mechancical Butterfly
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You update alot! What a nice chapter, Trunks is in the story! YAY! I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen when Goku finds Vegeta. Gosh, I never wanted to kick Vegeta more for being such a jerk to Goku!!!! *kicks Vegeta then hugs him* I still love him!!!!!!!!! I just don\'t want him treating Goku like a !!!!!!!! I can\'t wait for next chap, I like this story a lot.
person Hecate18
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yummy chap! ^-^
So Vegeta and Goku are mated, I wonder what everyone else will do when they find out??? ^0^
Especially Chi-chi ^_^
person Mechancial Butterfly
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright RAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vegeta and Goku are mated! That was a great chap! I thouroughly enjoyed it. Gosh, I can\'t wait to see what happens whenChiChi finds out. Will they all live at Capsule Corp together since they basically destroyed Goku\'s house? The lemon was awesome!
Update soon ^.*
person Naruto_Kenshin
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very hot lemon. So I have a question, is Vegeta going to stay with Goku now that he bit him, or his he planning on doing exactly what he said and giving Goku the kids to raise? I hope they will be a couple, but whatever happens, happens, and I will read on anyway. I just love Seme Geta! It\'s such a rare and beautiful thing, that it is!
person LadyLupin
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I know right now, is that I really need to change my underware.
UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!
person jaygoose
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was fanfuckingtastic. That lemon by far had to be one of the best I have ever read. It was so fucking...uh...primal. Kick ass! I can\'t wait for some more. I love this fic. And Trunks and Goten so have to be in this. I love them. Great fic!
person Nirvana
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**does a little dance**Go Goku,go Goku,yeah kick ChiChi\'s butt,out of the house.
This story rocks,you have to write more.Vegeta\'s smelling Goku\'s scent,well I\'m smelling
lemons,I can\'t wait for the third chapter,for it.
person LadyLupin
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so damn good it arouarousing.
UPDATE! EVERY DAY!
person Mechancical Butterfly
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! I love this idea! The story is just great! update soon!
person Aarika
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh so cool! but what about goten? or trunks? are they just not gonna exist in this universe or will all be awnsered later? i cant wait for the next chapter!!

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