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*gasp* MORE!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT\'S GOING ON!!!! UPDATE DAMN YOU!!!

U GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I CAN\'T BELIEOU MOU MADE ME READ THIS GOKU & VEGETA.
WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Heh.. sorry it took so long to review this... feel kinda bad but i\'ve been kinda @.@ lately with everything in my life and i\'ve been trying to stay on track lately. I\'m much better now thou so that\'s great! So, i saw this fic.. i\'m sure i saw it before but just didn\'t review... i recall the first chapter nothing else. So i kinda skimmed over it... but so far it\'s ohkay. But from the last few lines in chapter 4.y miy mind screamed oh gosh no... not another Veggie rape fic... From that... it automaticlly tells me the characters are very ooc which i noticed early in ch. 4. Vegeta saying awesome, heh heh. That was pretty funny. But ooc isn\'t always bad. I have to say there are little errors and the writing is good. *sighs* so. I have finally did what you asked. I did leave you 2 emails a while back but you never responded.... anyway, since you wanted to know... i\'m 18... soon to graduate from highschool ^ ^ my name is irrelevant for now... ^_~ well.. if you have aim or msn messanger you can IM me.
my aol is: Agent182Reese@Aol.com and my msn messanger is: blinkoneeightytwotimes@hotmail.com
I\'d love to chat wih you- that\'d be rad! Maybe i\'ll talk to you soon. Nice fic and update soo.. Oh and BTW just an idea- you should delete the fics that you put up that are author notes... many don\'t like that... so you should probably remove them... alright then... bye



Agent 182

UPDATE! URRRGH! god damn cliff hangers!
i like this stroy so far. but its sad! poor
vegeta! he deverse to be happy!

It\'s a good beggining I guess, but it seemed rushed, if I might say. to dto describe a bit more and not to put everything in at the same time.

This is a really interesting fic. I don\'t understand why you haven\'t got more reviews!
I myself am \'working\' on a post GT fic, *haven\'t posted it yet* (although I\'m not that huge a fan of GT. ^-^) Post GT fics are not really that common, and its quite refreshing to read one.

I really want to know what Vegeta has planned, I\'m really looking forward to the next chap. ^_^