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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like where this story is going. I don't review alot. Only when something really grabs my attention and this fic of yours has done that. Your writing style is comfortable and your plot intriguing. The vamp orgy just an added bonus. I hope to see more of this and will be sure to check out other writngs of yours in the future.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story emial me when you get updated k thanx
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh common plz...make new chappies....I soooo totaly like were ur heading with it...
but plz make Duo suffer some more.....and then let him run away from thise big
bat meanies....Plus let him feel alone and let him show the others what is the
meaning of love and caring....But please make the big bat meanies suffer
A WHOLE LOOOOT......I want to here them scream in anguish, pain, loneliness....
everything that comes to ur mind.....And plz make them realize that they force
Duo on doing thing he didn't want to do with them.....Something like that if you want...
but you gotta put toture for Duo and that he doesn't like it and his blood will flow
hihii.....Sorry sometimes I get ahead of myself....Al I wanted to say ur story rocks
keep those chappies coming....
but plz make Duo suffer some more.....and then let him run away from thise big
bat meanies....Plus let him feel alone and let him show the others what is the
meaning of love and caring....But please make the big bat meanies suffer
A WHOLE LOOOOT......I want to here them scream in anguish, pain, loneliness....
everything that comes to ur mind.....And plz make them realize that they force
Duo on doing thing he didn't want to do with them.....Something like that if you want...
but you gotta put toture for Duo and that he doesn't like it and his blood will flow
hihii.....Sorry sometimes I get ahead of myself....Al I wanted to say ur story rocks
keep those chappies coming....
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yow...good story...but you need to make it like that duo won\'t love them nor heero...cuz he was forced
by having sex like he was heero\'s toy...and he couldn\'t do nothing cuz he was in a trance....and he lost his virginity
by someone who he doesn\'t love....make heero and the others suffer by what they have done to
duo...let them feel ashamed cuz they will lose duo and must do anything to
gain his trust .....and let duo come to his own senses
that he can learn to love them but doesn\'t need them to survive.......i\'m getting ahead of myself
but anyhow plz update soon cuz i wanna know what\'s gonna happen....
by having sex like he was heero\'s toy...and he couldn\'t do nothing cuz he was in a trance....and he lost his virginity
by someone who he doesn\'t love....make heero and the others suffer by what they have done to
duo...let them feel ashamed cuz they will lose duo and must do anything to
gain his trust .....and let duo come to his own senses
that he can learn to love them but doesn\'t need them to survive.......i\'m getting ahead of myself
but anyhow plz update soon cuz i wanna know what\'s gonna happen....
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. Please update soon.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what is Heero talking about when he said Duo had power? why did he do that to Duo? can you update soon, i want to know what happens next. good story.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is teh 1337
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, maby a bit fast thought... but i LOOOVVVEEE the idea! Vamps and toys, MEOW! >.<