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by Pixelgoddess

person Ivy
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(giggles) so much fluff, now I understand why you use fluff as the tittle! So much sweeatness! thehehe...pink fluffy vegeta how cute! :) you make me grinning like an idiot the howl time I was reading, very pleasant story to read, (gives you candyfloss)
person marik
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! KAKAROTT AND VEGETA ACTION(Sorry if my spellings bad) AND COTTON-CANDY ALL IN THE SAME FAN-FIC!!!:)
ITS GREAT, ITS WELL RITEN AND ITS SWEEEEET!!!





person BrokenDesire
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG DUDE!!! THAT WAS HOT! LMAO!
Very nice! >:] I wish I had a Vegeta or
Goku and some cotton candy of my own!
*cry*
person LITHIA
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK LAST FIC IM GUNNA REVIEW OF URS TODAY! hehe
nice nice nice again - luv the fascination goku seems to have in your fics with vegeta and food lol. What made me laugh most was this:
“Now you’ve done it,” Trunks said, smacking his friend on the back of the head. “They’ll get so loud we won’t be able to sleep.” lol, the way they imitated vegeta and goku was funny too!
I still think it would be great if you redhesehese small fics without a limit :P you could make the lemon longer then, but these are still great! great great great, i luv that word hehe
i wana read more, but not today! I have to write my own, and ive reviewed yours enough lol! Bai bai
person macha
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this little fic. (Mmmmmm...Vegeta covered in cotton candy!) And although I didn\'t review them, I liked Popcicle and Pound also! I know that you have your plate full with Maintianing, which is and awesome fic., I would love to sore ore of these one chapters! If you take requests, ever think about doing a VxG with Pop Rocks?
person Getarian
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! This is probably the best drabble I have ever read. You kept both Vegeta and Goku completely in character, which is difficult when they\'re boinking each other :-)

I loved it when Goku said \"I\'m back, did you miss me?\" and Vegeta replied \"You were gone?\" LOL

Also loved \'He didn’t do fluffy, he didn’t do fuzzy, and he absolutely, positively would NOT do pink again.\' ;-)

Actually, I loved it all, but these amused me greatly :-)

Well done!
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta had me laughing so hard when he says \"Mine\" about the cotton candy...*sighs dreamily* ahh...two hot saiyajins and cotton candy...that was awesome! Yum, yum, yummy!
^.*
-MB-
person MidnightMoon
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Laughs* Oh that was cute and just too funny. Good job.
person auronslover
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked the story though ill never look at cotton candy the same
person SSJSweety
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goku is sooo horny! I couldn\'t believe it!^^

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