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for North Pole Bureaucracy

by Raletha

person limeaid
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo! I was really hoping for a little more 3x4, but I kept going with your story because it was so well written. I appreciated your good grammar and the rather witty moments between Trowa and Quatre\'s lack of pants. Of course, my real, obvious problem with this was that I just can\'t see Quatre being that dominant. I tried, for the sake of this story but... ahhh, he\'s a creampuff. 8x hahaha... But still, I liked the bits of humor, and the cute little holiday spirit of it. And the little epilogue was sweet. I\'d love to see something 3x4 from you sometime, since I think that you could make another great story happen. (alright, one last comment is that I don\'t quite understand the point of adding in the moment of 3x2 but... that\'s alright... I\'ll live, since it wasn\'t too big and descriptive...) *wants to sit on Quatre\'s lap too* SIIIGH... hehe.
person tinyvoice
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Funny^_^
I\'m looking forward to the next installment
keep up the good work!
person Venus
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue this soon!! I really enjoyed the first part and look forward to more:)

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