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Such a great story! Love this! Although I prefer KaixRei pairing.. But, I like Bryan in this story! :3

Well your Story is great. I love it!

I have just a little thing that disturbs me greatly... you see I'm German and your translation of "you look beautiful" to "Sie Schauen schon an" was terrible...I had a hard time to figure out what you meant before I saw the translation at the end of the chapter.
You see in German the word you has to meanings first if you don't know somebody or you don't kow him/her very well you use "Sie" if the somebody is a friend or like in this fic a soon to be lover you use "du" and well the correct translation of "You look beautiful" would be in your case "Du siehst schoen aus" ( nomally you write the oe in schoen as a ö but i don'T think you have that on your keyboard)

So that is all I'm complaining about.

So post more ^^

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have to update you havn't in forever. Everybodies getting worried about you girl so hurry up and let us know you're ok. Keep up the great work bye

This was an awesome fic. Lots of drama and romance and intensity. The only thing I can suggest is to talk about an verbally decsribe Rei's pregnancy more. There really hasn't been much drama with hormones or the fact that he should be getting tired more. It would just make it seem more real. But overall I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

I'm glad to see an update for one of my favourite stories. ^.^ I love how you portrayed Lee and Robert's date. I think it'd be cool if he ended up getting pregnant after that; then they could be together. [squee] Awating your next chapter.

YAY! New chappie! Aw...sweet...funny end to that chappie!

^^ adorable!!! you just have one mistake in german (can't tell in russian, don't speak it) it's better if it was Du siehst schön aus; sorry, i couldn't help it. besides thaton eteeny weeny small listake


CUUUUUUUUUTE!!! XD

waiii *__*
ah, i love this story!! and bryanXrei is definitily the best pairing in beyblade!! :D
can´t wait for the kitten ^^
oh, one thing, i´m german (so sry for mistakes here) and "you look beautiful" is in german "Du siehst schön aus".
"Sie schauen schon an" is in english "you look already at" ^^
but i don´t want to blame you xD this is one of the best stories i´ve ever read!! so keep up work!! =D

This was great. I love your story. Please stop Kai from dissing Tyson though. I hate it when he always gets it in the neck. And who's he going out with? Please say Spencer. Poor Bryan. Glad he and Tala are away from Boris now. hope Ray doesn't get near too much catnip. Glad you're still writing this story. I thought you'd ditched it. Keep it up. Wanna see the next chapter out soon.

Love the new chapter!!!