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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I\'m back and I had all sorts of wonderful chapters to read. I love how Goten went and asked Goku if he was a boy. It was only a matter of time before the boys would have some questions. And this thing with Bulla and Bardock, are they really going to end up together? Strangely, I 't r't really find that all that distrubing. Saiyans should be with Saiyans, it just makes since.
I like how you did the birthing chapter. All births are so different aren\'t they. Goten was so adorable yet again. He should have lots of babies. If I had a hunk of a mate like Trunks I would be popping them out like crazy.
I like how you did the birthing chapter. All births are so different aren\'t they. Goten was so adorable yet again. He should have lots of babies. If I had a hunk of a mate like Trunks I would be popping them out like crazy.
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting that goten wa the first one te the the littles...okay enough of the birthing onto to sex chapter :) ps frosting chronicles RULES!
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chappie! I loved it.
It was very nice to read those yummy lemons...and to know they will still have sex after the little ones are born. Aww Goku worries to much, Geta loves him! ^.^
Sorry took me 4-ever to review...sheesh I have been like @_@ busy, but I needed to take a break so I decided to do so by reading your wonderful stories, which always bring a smile on my face!
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It was very nice to read those yummy lemons...and to know they will still have sex after the little ones are born. Aww Goku worries to much, Geta loves him! ^.^
Sorry took me 4-ever to review...sheesh I have been like @_@ busy, but I needed to take a break so I decided to do so by reading your wonderful stories, which always bring a smile on my face!
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chappie! I loved it.
It was very nice to read those yummy lemons...and to know they will still have sex after the little ones are born. Aww Goku worries to much, Geta loves him! ^.^
Sorry took -eve-ever to review...sheesh I have been like @_@ busy, but I needed to take a break so I decided to do so by reading your wonderful stories, which always bring a smile on my face!
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It was very nice to read those yummy lemons...and to know they will still have sex after the little ones are born. Aww Goku worries to much, Geta loves him! ^.^
Sorry took -eve-ever to review...sheesh I have been like @_@ busy, but I needed to take a break so I decided to do so by reading your wonderful stories, which always bring a smile on my face!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*is done now* Aw... it\'s still sad... in a kind of mellow bittersweet way. I like it, and I will be reading more. :) By the way your writing ability and speed of turning out fanfic is incredible. I\'m impressed!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the lemon...very much! But surprisingly, it was the scenes afterwards that I loved even more:
\"“Hey, ‘Geta,” Goku said.\"
“Yes, Kakarot?”
I love this...The whole scene you painted was awesome. It was totally relaxed, I could feel the previous, companionable silence before Goku spoke, his tone open and questioning and Vegeta\'s equally open and accomodating response. I loved their open thoughts on the possibility of there being others of their race, it showed how deeply they were now a part of one another...no longer that divide of their past between them, and then the end of the conversation as Vegeta remained sitting looking up to the night sky, (I\'d love to know what he was thinking) whilst Goku snuggled on his side and yawned as he thought of their children...and Gohan...LOL!
I agree with him, I like it better this way too :-)
“I listen to them,” Bardock countered, “But I’m the first born one, I don’t have to obey them.”
*chuckle* Boy can I hear his father in this sentence :-)
Loved Bulma\'s thoughts on the difference between the Human mothering instincts and the Saiyan mothering instincts and was slightly saddened by her observations in regards to Vegeta and Goku and how Vegeta never looks around for Gogeta but Goku does, however; this does perfectly highlight once again the difference between Saiyan and Human, as in this instance...Goku\'s human upbringing is called into play.
\"(Plus as much as she loved her son, she didn’t really want to end up being screwed into a wall by Vegeta again.\"
Good God! The woman has gone insane! :-)
I\'m amused by the memory of how Goku reacted to seeing a naked Trunks & Goten sleeping together and yet Bulma seems to have accepted the future union of Trunks & Goten in much the same way as Vegeta has. I gather it\'s because Goku can\'t seem to differentiate the fact that they are not brothers whereas Vegeta & Bulma can...but it\'s still funny nonetheless :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
\"You know; I just noticed that More of Us isn’t on the first page of AFF.net anymore.\"
Yeah, I noticed that too...I\'m dreading when \"Hormone Therapy\" goes the same way...these fics...page 2...it\'s not right!
\"“Hey, ‘Geta,” Goku said.\"
“Yes, Kakarot?”
I love this...The whole scene you painted was awesome. It was totally relaxed, I could feel the previous, companionable silence before Goku spoke, his tone open and questioning and Vegeta\'s equally open and accomodating response. I loved their open thoughts on the possibility of there being others of their race, it showed how deeply they were now a part of one another...no longer that divide of their past between them, and then the end of the conversation as Vegeta remained sitting looking up to the night sky, (I\'d love to know what he was thinking) whilst Goku snuggled on his side and yawned as he thought of their children...and Gohan...LOL!
I agree with him, I like it better this way too :-)
“I listen to them,” Bardock countered, “But I’m the first born one, I don’t have to obey them.”
*chuckle* Boy can I hear his father in this sentence :-)
Loved Bulma\'s thoughts on the difference between the Human mothering instincts and the Saiyan mothering instincts and was slightly saddened by her observations in regards to Vegeta and Goku and how Vegeta never looks around for Gogeta but Goku does, however; this does perfectly highlight once again the difference between Saiyan and Human, as in this instance...Goku\'s human upbringing is called into play.
\"(Plus as much as she loved her son, she didn’t really want to end up being screwed into a wall by Vegeta again.\"
Good God! The woman has gone insane! :-)
I\'m amused by the memory of how Goku reacted to seeing a naked Trunks & Goten sleeping together and yet Bulma seems to have accepted the future union of Trunks & Goten in much the same way as Vegeta has. I gather it\'s because Goku can\'t seem to differentiate the fact that they are not brothers whereas Vegeta & Bulma can...but it\'s still funny nonetheless :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
\"You know; I just noticed that More of Us isn’t on the first page of AFF.net anymore.\"
Yeah, I noticed that too...I\'m dreading when \"Hormone Therapy\" goes the same way...these fics...page 2...it\'s not right!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue.More Lust Cycle.Now.Forget Gogeta.Stupid Bulma POV.Still Continue.LUst Cycle.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wait... does Trunks have memories of both futures? O.o Ah well, time travel is always confusing. I like your writing style it is very pleasant. On to more! *treks off to chapter two*
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Gogeta leaving makes me sad. :( And I hope Bardock doesn\'t do anything to hurt him...
Onto the next chapter! :D
Onto the next chapter! :D
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rad! thanks for that tidbit of info on Bardock!
Great chap, with a very yummy lemon, I always enjoy reading those!
Awwww! How cute was that breakfast scene!!!! Bulla and Goku and then goku pouting to Vegeta...loved it.
“Where’s breakfast?” he asked.
“At your house,” Vegeta said.--rofl! that is so funny! that sooo sounds like something somebody in my family would say.
goku and Goten are so cute and have such a sweet bond. Bulma just cracks me up! When she walks in on them and says she\'s too old for this and also in the little end notes!
can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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Great chap, with a very yummy lemon, I always enjoy reading those!
Awwww! How cute was that breakfast scene!!!! Bulla and Goku and then goku pouting to Vegeta...loved it.
“Where’s breakfast?” he asked.
“At your house,” Vegeta said.--rofl! that is so funny! that sooo sounds like something somebody in my family would say.
goku and Goten are so cute and have such a sweet bond. Bulma just cracks me up! When she walks in on them and says she\'s too old for this and also in the little end notes!
can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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