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Yes, indeed poor Gohan, I would probably go crazy if I had to watch after those little saiyajins.

I did that. Vegeta thought. --so cute to know how he makes his mate feel...or look...

Yes, Kakarot?” His voice had a rough edge to it, like his throat was sore. And Goku too a great deal of pride in knowing that it had been from screaming his name.--again very cute, I really like that.

I just don\'t know how you write so many lemons...sheesh...I would be like @_@, my mind would be fried! The lemon in this chapter was especially lovely. ^.^ I thank you for so many of them
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-MB-

*joyiously(Is this a word?o.o)singing Lust Cycle*
*regains sanity*UPDATE!SOON!

Good chapter! Enjoyed the breakfast scene. Love how when Goku lost the \'battle of the cereal\' he turned and pouted to Vegeta. LOL!

Really like the scenes between Bulma and Vegeta, the way it was written spoke of a close, easy friendship. I really loved it though when, once Vegeta handed her a cup of coffee, she moved away to a \'safe\' distance before having a conversation with him. LOL! I love the implication, that Goku is still deeply territorial regards his mate and still doesn\'t fully trust Bulma near him :-)

“What are we going to do with them?” Bulma asked. “You are so not leaving them all with me for two months.”

LOL! Don\'t blame her one bit...I wouldn\'t want them for the day...I\'d be a wreck :-)

I reallye yoe your portrayal of Gohan...he always seems so long-suffering LOL!

“Where’s breakfast?” he asked.
“At your house,” Vegeta said. LOL!

Like the bit with Bardock having his arm around Trunks\' shoulders and chatting away about new moves...it seems that Gogeta\'s departure just may be the catalyst required to bond the oldest and youngest of Veg's t's two boys :-)

Loved the lemon! Got a particular thrill of pleasure over this:

\"Vegeta was there when he opened his eyes, pulling off his gloves and his shirt.\"

The visual of this scene, for me, was quite lusty :-)

Laughed when Bulma stepped into the room, took in the scene, and then did a 180, saying \"she was too old for this\" :-)

Love how Goku knows exactly how to get his \'Geta all worked up for just what he wants :-)

\"he was very glad that he had made that wish.\"

Me too! :-)

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Goku and Goten are so adorable. Poor Bulla her female Saiyanhood is so being ignored.

I loved how when the smell started Goten just woke up and left with out saying much of anything. I love how the Saiyans don\'t have to say anything out loud, they just know. So Cool.

I feel sympathy for Gogeta.......On the other hand there IS the fact that Goku and Vegeta are going to go through the \'must have lots of sex\' stadge somewhere around here. So......Continue!

ohh definatly nedd to read that fic..but anyway lol i realikeliked bulla and goku\'s fight...reminds me of my house in the morning...damn cereal never enough of the stuff. I also laughed when i read Bulmas comment about the rainforest, atleast she\'s concerened with the enviroment. Well anyway can\'t wait for the next chapter(lemony goodness alright!) and the birth of the new saiyan munchkins.

Bardock is a little toughie...and he seems to be very evry saiyajin!

Although I do understand why Bardock feels the way he does about Gogeta...I still can\'t help but feel sad for him, and I was even more sad when Goku looked at how Vegeta was looking at his kids and he said Gogeta will never be looked at like that again *sobs* Poor Gogeta.

Bardockda sda scaresand impresses me, I like him a lot.
Oh an thanks for the nice lemon is was delicious and when Vegeta \'made his eyes staye open and stared down at his mate\' I died, that was beautiful.
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-MB-

Although this chapter was still sombre in tone, t was was a definite \'moving on\' feel to it. Looks like everyone has accepted Gogeta\'s decision better than I thought they would. Definitely Saiyan!

Bardock\'s a bright one then :-) I notice that he knew exactly who to seek out to determine Gogeta\'s location. He seems to have been the hardest hit, dare I say, even more than Goku?

Vegeta seems to have already locked him from his heart...

\"...And as he watched the way Vegeta looked at his children, he knew that even if Gogeta came back, he would never get that look again.\"

This was very moving. Gogeta\'s reaction must have been a kick in the teeth considering that he was reacting to what he witnessed that day when his \'mother\' had died, the fact that he did noare are in his father\'s and siblings rage must have reeked of betrayal.

Goku\'s more stoic reaction is, as I would expect from him. But it must hurt to know that one of the children (which he gave up future children for and whom he still loves) just doesn\'t want to be a part of their lives, simply because they are who they are.

With Bardock, I get the feeling that this is eating at him, and I am more concerned about him than Gogeta at this point.

Loved the bit where Goku picked Bardock up by the tail and whilst Bardock displayed his \'Vegeta\' pose...Goku gave him a kiss on the forehead, much to Bardock\'s supposed disgust. A nice little scene at the end of a melancholy kind of day :-)

“Go to bed,” he said as he left the room, “Your father is going to spar with you tomorrow.”

Don\'t ask me why, \'cause I can\'t give a clear reason..but I loved this line :-)

BTW. I couldn\'t help but notice mention of \'moistness\' in your lemon...does this mean that Goku got to keep his added parts? If so...Yay!

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

aww..i must admit i always had a soft spot in my heart for depressed characters but little gogeta is filling up that entire space! bardock acts so much like vegeta its amazing ;) i think vegeta would have coped the same way bardock did. Also *tiny giggle* i LOVE that you are gonna have trunks and goten together, i must admit they are my favorite couple (goku and vegeta are a close second i promise :) )

Yes, the begining was wonderful. I like that out of all of them Bardock still is loyal to Gogeta. He thought he is a whimp. I did tell you how much I loved your explaination as to why he is a whimp. Very creative. I loved that whole family bonding thing too. So very cute.