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o.o I am NOT good with figuring things out. I\'m simple. Sooooo Gogeta died?o.o Or rn away or something?o.o; Continue(Sex in next chapter)

Yes, please do have sex like horny teenagers Goku and Veggie.
Continue.

Well didn\'t that just explain everything all nice and neatly. You\'re good. Oh and I love how even as a little kid Goten is showing female tendencies. He...He...

A very sad chapter...So Gogeta wasn\'t born with the Saiyan instinct for fighting, and therefore was a happy little trooper, until he saw the raw, savage rage, which could be produced by his family...interesting twist...pacifist Saiyans.

Feel bad for Bardock, he has a sense of responsibility to keep his siblings together, but he is pure Saiyan and just doesn\'t understand his brother. I wonder if he is feeling inadequate in his duties? It would explain part of his anger at his brother, the rest would come from simply not understanding his brother\'s lack of pride in his heritage...this is a very good addition to a Saiyan tale, as Gogeta\'s feelings and Bardock\'s confusion and anger are something that we could find many analogies for in human society...nice touch :-)

Loved the whole everyone getting up, acknowledging that Gogeta was gone, not commenting on it and then Vegeta comes in, notices that Gogeta is not there and when informed that he had left:

\"“Left?” Vegeta narrowed his eyes, looked directly at Goku and then pointed outside.\"

Loved this. Totally saw Vegeta doing this! So much said in a single action...very well expressed :-)

Loved the scenes that followed. Particularly t



“Why aren’t we finding him?”

I tend to agree with Vegeta on this one - they should have gone after him. The idea of everyone just accepting that he\'s gone and of Vegeta no longer acknowledging him...is sad. Something tells me that this has hit Vegeta harder than anyone realises, I guess he\'s just been too well conditioned to respond any other way.

I loved the end bit where Goku stood next to Vegeta and purred and Vegeta trilled in response - the way they were comforting each other - so touching.

Poor Goku not only giving up future children, but losing one of the ones that he gave those children up for.

\"...Because they understood that he was not a part of them anymore.\" Sad :-(

Well written...this one truly touched me. I see you can do angst as well as you do humour and lemons :-)

i had to read this chap REALLY quick but omisomise i\'ll come back and reread it later..aww i cant believe gogeta left..everybody else seems to be handling it okay though...

Very sad chapter...
So little Gogeta left, how sad. It was well described how Goku woke up and just let him go, understanding in a way.
Then Vegeta when he says \"Left\" and points to the door...adorable

Yes peaceful saiyajins that is a strange thing, alsoghtlghtly unnerving.
I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen.

I also loved the trilling and purring...how they comfort each other with out words.
You never cease to amaze me.
I can only hope that thing get better for these saiyajins...
^.*
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Thats sad no more babies, but at least they get to have lotsa sex w/ out worrying about babies being made! there is a plus to everything!

Well, after Vegeta\'s little speech I also real a lot better. You know I had forgotten that the guys were that old. Hmm. Damned Saiyans.

Dragonballs make it all better eh?*raises eyebrow*No more children....O.O;;;;
;_;

i have a question.......if the babies will be just 4 years younger then the older kids and 3 years younger then trunks and goten.....why were their voices the \"little voices\" when trunks went back to the future in chap 5 and stayed there? oh well, i thought it was saat tat the dragon took away goku\'s ability to have even more children but he\'d be happy as long as his own kids have lots and he\'s surrounded with babies without the extra work :)