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Review for Chapter 7

I just love how the littlies all group together when one or other of them is not well. Takashi was just a sweetie with Gogeta :-)

“What did I tell you about my children?” was the question. “Why don’t any of you ever fucking listen?”

I know this is not typically \'Goku speak\' but I really liked it. I can actually imagine him speaking lthisthis in true anger...after all, living with Vegeta...somethings got to rub off :-)

Loved Bulla with Gohan. Especially with the crocodile incident. LOL!

\"Well, wasn’t he getting all judgmental and picky about his wish-granting.\"

LOL! I have to admit, my first reaction was...well why the hell did the dragon allow Goku\'s first wish if these kiddies were not meant to be and then as I thought about it a bit more, I thought that maybe it was okay for them to have the kids, but resurrection would probably be a no-no, hence the need for a price...nice twist!

Poor Goku though, this has hit him hard, but he definitely made the right decision.

Err, I must confess I cheated and took a quick peek at the next chapter \'cause I was scared about the two he was carrying - I was pleased to see that he at least gets to keep them. :-)

\"Vegeta: Where am I?\"
\"Vegeta: Did any one else no tha that I wasn’t even mentioned in this chapter?\"

LOL! Yes! I noticed. Missed ya Vegeta :-)

\"Poor ‘Geta, though, because every time he powers up now he’ll have a part of that rage he triggered when Goku died.\"

Oh, I didn\'t realise that. Bugger

OKay you were not as horrible as you could have been. At least Goku and Vegeta still get the last two babies. But still what will the price be to restore the next children to die of not natural causes? Or is the loss of fertility paying for the validity of the existing kids lives?

Vegeta cheering up his mate was very in character. I enjoyed the whole not having a clue as to what could be running through Goku\'s mind too.

Review for Chapter 8

\"“Being dead was boring,” Bardock informed him. “There was a big fat guy at this desk. And a huge line.”

LOL! Don\'t you just hate queue\'s? :-)

Damn, I love Vegeta with his kids :-) Love how he grabbed Bardock\'s tail before flying off to the others...it always comes across as affecionate...in a parental way.

\"(Sometimes he wondered just where she always kept this stuff she seemed to pull out of nowhere, because he had been in this lab before and never seen any IV fluids.)\"

LOL! The magic of fanfiction :-)

Ah, so Gogeta\'s problem was an allergy?...that\'s a relief, that can hopefully be seen to and it\'s way better than a psychological trauma.

Have I mentioned how I love Vegeta with his kids? :-)

\"And then, Vegeta grabbed Kakarot by the tail and dragged him out of the room.\"

LOL! Vegeta seems to have a tail fetish... It\'s gotta be some sort of dominance thing... cute :-)

\"No more babies.\"

Ah, poor Goku...he\'s really taking this hard :-(

\"Let someone else do the really hard part.\"

*chuckle* The joys of grandparenting. According to my parents...way better than parenting...all the fun, none of the fuss :-)

Vegeta did a wonderful job of lifting Goku\'s sagging spirits. The man is truly a Prince :-)

Another wonderful lemon...how I love them...but, I don\'t want Goku to lose his female parts...can\'t the dragon just make him barren? I\'ve gotten use the them being like this in this fic.

This isn\'t the end is it?

my god i nearly started to cry wen that damn android killed gogeta...but everythings okay now. oh and i nearly had a heartattack when the dragon said he was going to take the rest of the children goku hasnt had yet- i thought he was going to take the two babies in goku already. phew then back to the good old sex scenes! cant wait for the next chapter!

Okay, a little more insight into why Gogeta has retreated in on himself. Looks as if Gogeta\'s Saiyan side is deeply repressed...I hope that he won\'t die from the trauma he is currently undergoing in his little mind. Although, I fear how he will be with his father, should he pull through...

\"...Because the big baka had devoted his life to guarding a planet full of people that didn’t understand him. And Vegeta was now devoted to said baka...
...So Vegeta moved forward with him.\"

I loved this! Standing at his mate\'s side regardless :-)

“And look,” the boy again, “The one monkey is missing his tail.”

Ah, poor Vegeta...he needs to ges tas tail back! At least now he has extra motivation for beating the shit out of the androids :-)

Ah Gods, I love how little Bardock leapt to the defence of his father. I know he\'ll be okay but it\'s still a tense time.

\"Clenched his fists tight, tipped his head back and ROARED! Fuck purring.\" LOL! Sorry couldn\'t help it.

\"Fuck these androids.\"

Yes! Kill them Goku! I guess Goku now has a tiny taste of what Vegeta felt when he lost his mate...I know he probably wouldn\'t go to the same lengths, but he might understand Vegeta\'s rage more.

God I love how Vegeta and Goku are with their kids :-)

Vegeta is raging again, but I\'m glad that it seems to be more focused this time.

“This is your last chance to surrender,” Goku said.
“Fuck surrender,” Vegeta snarled. And he shot forward.

Yes! Go get \'em Vegeta!

Bulla\'s a right little Vegeta isn\'t she :-)

I loved Piccolo\'s thoughts on the raging Saiyans, and very much liked this part:

\"Piccolo watched it. Didn’t join them. Tried very hard not to be afraid.\"

This very much highlighted the power and savagery of the fight and made me realise, that with Vegeta and Goku now mated, Goku wouldn\'t be so quick to fight against Vegeta should Vegeta go back to his old ways...and this got me wondering...what if Vegeta had gone bad the first time, not because Goku had died, but because Bardock had? What if his fury had turned on the n ran race after he killed the androids? What if the only way to stop him was to kill him? Would have Goku been able to do it? How would this have affected Goku if he had? What if he found that he couldn\'t do it?

Again, not necessarily questions that I need answers to...I guess I\'m a \"what if\" kind of person :-)

Looking forward to more android ass kicking :-)

That was sad. I can\'t believe that fucking dragon would do that. I don\'t understand...was he the one that granted Goku\'s first wis the the first place? Fucker...No more kids...that is so depressing...and what if Gogeta did die anyway? I need to lie down.

Oh and about the crown...Grocery store people are notoriously jealous...Always looking in other people\'s baskets trying to out do them...Don\'t let them get to you.

wow! intense! very good chapter! Loved how Goku got angry over his child like that, well I guess anyone would, but it was just awesome. poor little Bardock and I love the fight scenes so fun to read! sorry for such short reviews but I feel so blah -_- but I truly enjoyed this chapter as I enjoy all of your chapters!

That was a horrible thing to do. Why give him the power to have children if they were never meant to be. Stupid dragon.

hey keep up the great work..this story is getting extremely good! i cant wait for the next chapter :)

*sobs* What\'s happening to Gogeta???
I\'m afraid for what is going to happen...so afraid, but can\'t wait to read it. I am thouroughly addicted to this fic. I\'m would say that I am happy thveryverything seems ok in Trunks timeline...but there was no Gogeta and I am unsure that everything is happy...I hope it is.
this is excellent...very very excellent...

Yeah! I love Trunks toooooo! (I seem to enjoy making him miserable though, don’t I?) I know what you mean...I often make Vegeta miserable or crazy in my fics...I can\'t help it.

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