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*sighs thankfully*Good because sex is what makes the universe go around.
Continue!

YEAH!!!! Goku is alive and kicking!!!!!
That was some great reading!!!!

Hummed, Another One Bites the Dust, spared a moment of irony that he had learned CPR to the rhythm of that song.- rofl, yeah that is some pretty sick irony, hilarious, but sic
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They fought too. All four of them against one Vegeta, and the Prince would win.- How sexy!!!! Damn it why couldn\'t Vegeta win!!!??? *thinks* Oh yeah then Goku would still be dead, and the world in ruins...*sighs* he\'s was just so damn sexy being heartless like that...

Felt the stupid things that fought him keep kicking. But they were inconsequential.- rofl!!!!!

Vegeta looked at this Kakarot, felt his heart as if it was just now beating again.- I loved that looked at THIS Kakarott...beautiful...

“ ‘Geta,” was that whine. The perfect, addictive, beautiful whine, and bef before Vegeta blacked out, he felt a joy so great he thought his heart would burst from it.- just wonderfully described.

He’d seen what his children had done, what Vegeta had done, and how Trunks had fought to stay alive to save them all. -GO TRUNKS I FREAKING LOVE YOU!!!! No really, that is so awesome of him...staying alive in such a horrible world where he was badly beaten all so he could go to the past and save it...I really admire that and I love him!
This fic is superb!!!!!
Thanks for updating so often!
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Alright, I can stop holding my breath. Goku is alive and everything is right with the world. I think. I am the suspicious type and for some reason something just doesn\'t feel right. Bucoulcould be over reacting...right? Right!

Woah! Extremely tense beginning.

Desperation and fear. Feelings in both these areas can be expounded upon in whopping great paragraphs highlighting varied actions, thoughts and expressions.

Trunks\' desperation and fear was palpable, and this was expressively made clear in a simple four word sentence:

“LIVE YOU STUPID FUCK!” Trunks screamed.

I had my heart in my mouth the whole time and actually sat back with a sigh of relief when Trunks felt a tiny heartbeat. Well written :-)

Call me a sentimental fool, but those moments when Vegeta sensed his mate and moved towards him and Goku moved towards Vegeta, purring, calming, consoling, and when they came together...I damn near cried.

The childrens reaction was wonderfully emotional, particularly young Gogeta, who never said a word, just stood there shaking.

I have such mixed feelings about the next part. Trunks hates his father, hates his surviving siblings...and boy, I really don\'t blame him. But it\'s hard to read, nonetheless.ey hey have such a close relationship in the show, that this tears me up a bit...but as with all good stories, I guess I have to take the rough with the smooth. It was an evocative scene. Expressed well.

\"“Bulma said we couldn’t come home until we finished fucking,” Kakarot told him, sleepily.\"

LOL! Thank-you! A definite pick me up :-)

And a wonderful lemon to finish up on. I always love your lemonso nao natural and erotic.

As nervous as I am about my Prince, I eagerly await the next chapter :-)

MORE!!! MORE!!!! please? you can\'t just leave the story there with goku....dead , the kiddies crying, vegeta going insane, and trunks coming back to try to save goku......please MORE??????
please?
i wonder if goku will be weak after the coming back to life through a needle in his chest (like he was weak in the anime when he was recovering from the heart virus) and if his kids and vegeta will let him outa their sights at all after this.
poor trunks though. thinking everything was fix in the past only to get all that stuff happen........
that\'s why you need to post more!