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Yesssss....The appropriate amount of angst. And Trunks\'s dream. My God girl! What are you trying to do to me? *fans herself and looks aroung the library sheepishly.*

\"!!!!!\" GOKU!!!!!! NO!!!!! That chap was so sad and well Vegeta is very scary now...and slightly sexy in his kill mode. To think the loss of his mate caused it all...
Hurry w/ that vaccine Trunks!!!!!!!! oh and poor Trunks...Bardock is such a meanie...*sobs* gosh please let things getter better soon...*crosses fingers*
You are awesome! this chapter was very awesome. I really, really, loved watching Vegeta after Goku died...he went a littly loopy and I love how everyone\'s power spiked but it was nothing to what Vegeta\'s was...
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oh boy oh boy oh boy! i hate cliffhangers:) cant wait to see what happens next..kinda cool though that bardock was the first to turn s.s. .

Yes, that was extremely angsty but I adore angst. Maybe even more than humor. Anyway, I love this story and I really hope that none of these horrible things happen but of course if something did happen it would make for a more interesting story. *Sigh* That\'s life. It\'s like watching a train wreck. You just can\'t look away. Damn now I\'m depressed. He He.

Oh dear, it\'s about to beginn\'tn\'t it? I\'m tensing up already, but it\'s a good kind of tensing...sort of :-)

The story has definitely rounded the corner to the dramatic, and you have handled the turn beautifully. I am definitely feeling a fear for my favourite Saiyan family.

I love the way you have portrayed mirai Trunks; no longer connecting to anyone, distant and disturbed.

\"Something horrible had happened to the kid. Something Vegeta couldn’t prevent.\"

If only he knew. The dramatic irony of Vegeta\'s thoughts definitely tugged at my heart.

Bulma is sweet with Vegeta, I love those little moments :-)

*Chuckle* Still loving horny Goku!

\"...And desperately wished that those stupid ass androids would show up today. So he could beat them into the ground and be done with it. Get back to the fucking part.\"

LOL! Even with Death\'s fingers at his throat, sex with Vegeta is still Goku\'s number one priority...Yeah, that\'s the spirit Goku...never say die! :-)

Oooh, tingles...Loved Vegeta trilling for Goku :-)

I loved the \'military\' line-up of the kiddies in the hallway. I can see Vegeta\'s hand in this :-)

\"Goku would kill whoever did it.\"

Another wrench of the heart here. What would he do if he knew it was his mate, and two of their kids?

The kitchen scene was a mixture of, warming domestication, and a chilling sense of dread.

Gripping chest in readi for for next chapter.

\"Gk: Vegeta, If I’m going to die today I want sex first.\"

LOL! Sounds like a plan to me :-)

\"Don’t be scared, silly. But yes, you can be. You shouldn’t be, but you can be. (does that make any sense?)\"

Actually, yes it does. LOL.

I\'M BACK! CURSE FLU BUGS TO THE DEPTS OF HELL!!!
Wonderful story!!! I like!!! And a sequal!!(Swoon).
Hurry up and update!!!!!

*sobs* please no...please...tell me Goku is not going to die. and Trunks, poor Trunks what happened to him?
This is freaking excellent, I love it and I can\'t wait for it all to unravel, even if it is sad and will make me cry...
I love the brood they are just too cute for words...
but even their cuteness can stop me from getting sad *sobs again* GOKU!!!!! I don\'t want anything to happen to him.
I can hardly wait for the next chap.
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Experienced a brief moment of disorientation and confn asn as I looked at the list and nothing was where it was supposed to be, I\'m used to seeing, first \'Hormone therapy\' and second \'More of us\' I panicked briefly :-)

Yay! Sequel!

Ahhh, little Trunks and Goten are bonding. Goku\'s reaction was a hoot! I loved Vegeta\'s response. Very Vegeta.

Loved the breakfast scene, loved Vegeta\'s reprimand of Bardock, Bulma\'s tinkering of her gadget, kids whining, food being scarfed...very family like :-)

Love the way that Goku and Vegeta pick up their young by the tails if they\'re being a pain.

Whew! Not just Goku dead in the near future, but Gohan, Goten, Gogeta and Takashi. Bulla sounds terrible, but then again Bardock and Vegeta don\'t exactly sound like people you want to meet in a dark alley either...or a well lit one for that matter.

Vegeta\'s interaction with mirai Trunks was classic stuff :-)

Nooo, I hate the fact that Trunks no longer loves his father, although, if he\'s as bad as it sounds, I can\'t really blame him...but I hate the thought :-(

Goku\'s reaction to seeing mirai was good stuff, instant recognition that he wasn\'t just back to visit. Poor Vegeta, this must be eating at him...This has been his biggest fear for the past three years.

I definitely want to read more, this is good stuff...but I adI admit to being a little scared?

*worried* this isn\'t going to be a total deathfic is it? like whoever dies DOESN\'T get wished back? otherwise that would be very upsetting!-_-0 i\'ve read this all the way through and i love it, but it would sad if any of them dies permanentally....

o.o;;; What happens to Goku?o.o;;; I like Takashi and Gogeta! They\'re cool!Continue