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by tinyvoice

person Alexokerry
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! You did it!! Looks great. You go, Girl! Okay, let\'s get serious. This is a beautiful, sweet love scene. I loved watching the interaction between Quatre and Trowa. Quatre\'s shyness and fear of getting closer to his Trowa was just perfect! Can\'t wait to see the next thing you put out.
person joyce
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a sweet story, even if you try to make quatre unsweet.. thanks for continuing it
person memine
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s worth it. the lemon worth the wait ^_____________________^
person fruits of Eos
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAIIII!!! THAT WAS SOOOO CUTE AND HOT AND SEXY AND CUTE!! i REALLY enjoyed that it wasn\'t simply a sex romp but a more realistic approach to the idea of sex one would expect from their personalities. two months is a bit to wait, but well worth it; this was very well written, and with a depth rarely achieved in most sex chapters. And i totally can\'t wait for that update on Elm Street, i\'ve been waiting so long o__o
person annabellemanix
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wai!!! this was really good!!! cant wait to read more of your fics! ^_^
person SariL2
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
person SariL2
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CELLAR DOOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CELLAR DOOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII SSSSSSSSSSSSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD THHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CELLAR DOOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY CRAP IN LOVED THIS CHAPTER! AND THE WHOLE SEX TALK AND THE FIRST TIME!! AURGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU TOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I LOOVED THE BEGINNING! SUCH AWESOME FUNNINESS!!!!! I LOVE FUNNINESS! AND MY DOG FARTED DURING THE SEX SCENE SO I WAS VERY PUT OFF FOR A FEW SECONDS, BUT THEN IT CAME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND I LIVE YOUR Q-MAN!!!!!!!!!!! YOURE THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!
person memine
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::raise hand:: me, aye for lemon miss. ^_____^
person joyce
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I wanna lemon! Hahahaha. I think that this story has its own charm, but I kinda wished that there was more stuff going on between quatre and trowa.. err maybe a little more relation ship heartaches.. but its too late for that now.. but still the story is so unique and has its own appeal. Its one of my faves.
Thanks so much for finishing this story. I also want my lemon!!! hehehehe
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An entertaining story, and woot for Austin!! I live just north of there so... Anyway, I really like the back story you set up and the whole gender confusion thing. It makes a lot of sense... and your 3x4 interaction was cute, with just the right amount of resistance to make it interesting. Can\'t say I wouldn\'t have appreciated a little... heh, lemony goodness... but the story stands strong without it. Very nice, thanks for sharing. =]

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