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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
POST THE LEMON POST THE ::drool:: LEMON!! i leeerv how the story ended, and the adorable epilogue. i also like how you maintained Quatre\'s personality without making him mushy or a sudden pushover-convert. this story was so fun for me to follow and read....LEMON!! EYAHHH!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, nice to know I\'m not the only one annoyed by this fic\'s lack of lemon.... you\'ve got to write a lemon scene!!!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am up for a lemon... i mean who wouldn\'t be
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pwa ha ha!!! How funny! A lawyer breaking the law and all that. Im glad that Qman was amused :). To answer your question, if its not TOO insanely painful - try writing out the lemon, but this story is insanely good without it,
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Votes for lemon::
I think it\'d really liven up the end of the story, but...that\'s just me.
Good luck with whatever you choose! ^.~
I think it\'d really liven up the end of the story, but...that\'s just me.
Good luck with whatever you choose! ^.~
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Lemon, or no lemon?
*grins* Tough choice, isn\'t it?
Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don\'t know. Maybe the phrase I\'m looking to use is keep the story from ending on a \"cheesy\" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it\'s that so many stories I\'ve heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I\'m sure would many others. I just don\'t think it should necessarily be \"Epilogue pt. II\", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*
Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you\'ve done,
-Eliztric
*grins* Tough choice, isn\'t it?
Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don\'t know. Maybe the phrase I\'m looking to use is keep the story from ending on a \"cheesy\" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it\'s that so many stories I\'ve heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I\'m sure would many others. I just don\'t think it should necessarily be \"Epilogue pt. II\", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*
Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you\'ve done,
-Eliztric
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Lemon, or no lemon?
*grins* Tough choice, isn\'t it?
Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don\'t know. Maybe the phrase I\'m looking to use is keep the story from ending on a \"cheesy\" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it\'s that so many stories I\'ve heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I\'m sure would many others. I just don\'t think it should necessarily be \"Epilogue pt. II\", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*
Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you\'ve done,
-Eliztric
*grins* Tough choice, isn\'t it?
Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don\'t know. Maybe the phrase I\'m looking to use is keep the story from ending on a \"cheesy\" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it\'s that so many stories I\'ve heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I\'m sure would many others. I just don\'t think it should necessarily be \"Epilogue pt. II\", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*
Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you\'ve done,
-Eliztric
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Lemon, or no lemon?
*grins* Tough choice, isn\'t it?
Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don\'t know. Maybe the phrase I\'m looking to use is keep the story from ending on a \"cheesy\" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it\'s that so many stories I\'ve heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I\'m sure would many others. I just don\'t think it should necessarily be \"Epilogue pt. II\", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*
Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you\'ve done,
-Eliztric
*grins* Tough choice, isn\'t it?
Personally, I am very, very satisfied with the way the story has officially ended. Perhaps instead of including the lemon directly, you might introduce it as a sidestory, to...I don\'t know. Maybe the phrase I\'m looking to use is keep the story from ending on a \"cheesy\" note - not that I think it would be a -bad- lemon, you must understand, it\'s that so many stories I\'ve heard of have the fuel for several lemons but their addition just cheapens the original plot. I can say this, however - I would love to see a lemon for this fic, as I\'m sure would many others. I just don\'t think it should necessarily be \"Epilogue pt. II\", as you suggested - it should be a completely different addition to the website. Who knows? Maybe you could start an arc of Punishing-related lemons? *grins*
Continuing to be exceptionally pleased with the work that you\'ve done,
-Eliztric
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*deep breath* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh Allah of the universe! Good freakin jesus! I\'m just... Im just..... OMG MATE! I\'m \'OMGin\'! i - I just dont know what to say. I was laughing and i was ... i was laughing harder --- and then.. then i got all heartfelt and my insides felt squishy... What have ye done to me?!?! I LOVED THE ENDING! HOLY MOLY! It was so precious! And i LOVED the little \"and he grew up tp do....\" \"And her life sucked forever after....\" things. LOVED THEM! I want to eat this up and have the essence of awesomeness in me forever! AYE! For I envy that awesomeness, for I shall give ye me own leg in exchange for such lovely swagg! hark! For ye shall rule the world someday with such pretty words! HUZZAH!!! AND WRITE THE DAMN EPILOUGE!!!!! DO IT NOW!!!!!! *hyperventilates* I LOVE THEE WITH A PASSION UNKNOWN TO MAN!!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh Allah of the universe! Good freakin jesus! I\'m just... Im just..... OMG MATE! I\'m \'OMGin\'! i - I just dont know what to say. I was laughing and i was ... i was laughing harder --- and then.. then i got all heartfelt and my insides felt squishy... What have ye done to me?!?! I LOVED THE ENDING! HOLY MOLY! It was so precious! And i LOVED the little \"and he grew up tp do....\" \"And her life sucked forever after....\" things. LOVED THEM! I want to eat this up and have the essence of awesomeness in me forever! AYE! For I envy that awesomeness, for I shall give ye me own leg in exchange for such lovely swagg! hark! For ye shall rule the world someday with such pretty words! HUZZAH!!! AND WRITE THE DAMN EPILOUGE!!!!! DO IT NOW!!!!!! *hyperventilates* I LOVE THEE WITH A PASSION UNKNOWN TO MAN!!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...I wouldn\'t say this necessarily NEEDS an epilogue as this chapter serves as a fitting ending on its own. However, in a purely selfish act of hating to see such a good story end, I can say with all honesty that I certainly wouldn\'t mind seeing one. Either way, this was great!