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by tinyvoice

person Grevola
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up to be one of the best Quatre-Trowa romances I\'ve ever read. Both of the boys have their issues, and their failings, but niether one of them is submissive or spineless. Quatre has a gender confused past, but he hasn\'t let this make him a hyper-feminized pushover. Trowa is a bit of a bad boy, but he\'s neither a \'damaged\' botom, nor a dominating top. I\'m rather pleased with the characterizations all around. You\'re insertions of the poems in this last chapter was an interesting change of pace and works well, though I\'m not sure that it would be viable for every chapter of a poem.

Any way, please keep up the good writing. Cheers!

Grevola
person SantaAnna101
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it how you aren\'t rushing your characters into anything too serious yet. I think that the best fics out there are the ones that take forever to get to the lovey-dovey sex parts because that is more realistic that just romping in the hay at chapter 7. Go you for not falling under the pressure of thinking to have a good love story, the sex needs to come sooner than it should. Rushing doesn\'t do anybody good. I loved the chapter! Update soon!
person Carisa
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more and more. You sadistic person, ending it like that. How will Trowa win over Quatre? Tell me tell me tell me!
person IdidntaskforTaylor
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, since I didn\'t ask for leech boy, may I have some lemon? Pretty please with Trowa on top? I\'d much rather have Trowa than whatever it is Quatre currently has lodged up his tush.

BTW, writers shouldn\'t be evil. It makes the reader feel like doing something a little evil too...such as making stickers that say \"Trixie is for writers. Hi-ho Trixie!\" Or fixing them up with one of those SD Gundams...permenantly. Little things like that. No more cliffs! Here\'s your mantra: \"Cliffs=bad, Updates=good! Must write more. All writings must be updated. Must get characters thru angst and into lemon ASAP. Must not teases readers before they\'ve had lemon. Will follow mantra. ohm...ohm...ohm.\"
person Stone
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! damn you kick some serious ass in writing!! i started this story a while ago but only just got back to it and I love it so please write lots more! i wanna know what happens T.T *huggles* YOU\'RE AWESOME!! ^^V peace
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You have no idea how much I love it when you update. You are a goddess. *bows* Wow, you did put a bit of conflict, didn\'t ya? But it\'s all good. Please write more soon!
person SZ
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU WHORE! YOU ELFT A CLIFF HANGER!! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU A MILLION TIMES *cries* I want TROWA AND QUATRE LOVE! Is that too much to ask *cries8 YOU BETETR UPDATE SOOM or I\'ll EXPLOD!
person Carisa
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Quatre! And his bastard father, marrying him off at 14! To someone so old, no less. Great chapter. Please get the next one out soon, please!
person Thalia
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool. I was afraid I\'d lost track of this story, so i was thrilled to see it. Excellent chapter.
thalia
person joycejanik
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeekk!! At last the testimony is finished!! I cant wait for what happens during and AFTER the decision! I rather hope that trowa will have to fight for Quatre (vs. taylor) first before they go happily ever after. I really like your story!! And im so glad that th reason for quatre’s and trixie’s union has been explained!! Thanks so much for updating!!

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