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by tinyvoice

person Anon
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your Quatre is lovely, as is Trowa, and Wufei is positively delightful. Even such a small glimpse of his quiet glee in the courtroom makes me want to see more. Ahem - any chance of a side-story with him paired up?
person SariL2
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just.. I just.. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA *cries* I'm just so happy!!! oh my, and like... and then.... and YEAH! I know, totally. its amazing. Reading it and I felt like No Face from Spirited Away. You remember when he throws up the first time and its one gimongous blob? thats what i felt, like i felt like i had to say so much, like i was happy and estatic and shocked, and relieved and many more all together so i just looked like a fish out of water... on my floor... i knocked over my chair. ANYWAYS! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK ALLAH! THANK MINT PATTIES!!! I cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person SariL2
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH.. I could just... and.... and I would!!! GRR! You make my life miserable for the reason of cliff-hangers! How will I EVER live until your next update? I'll cry and like... eat chicken in your bed as you sleep -- or something. Ok, now since thats out, good small chapter. Cant wait till the next (if you didnt get that before). WHAT WILL HE SAY?!? Sorry, I'm freaking out in my body. Its making litter jerky actions because I want moooooooore..... give me mooooooooore..... sorry. Well, brilliamt as before, you did it again yadda yadda yadda. Love - Peace Out Yo
person Princess2000204
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally you've updated!!! Please don't take forever to update again, I'm dying to know what happens next!!!!
person Kaosu
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This...is so funny! I just love this fic. Please, please continue! The way you portray Trowa and Quatre, and even darling Trixie, is fantastic!
person joyce
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Tinyvoice!

its been a while since i checked on this story and i was happy to see some updates. its sad though that you are having your writers block as this is one of my favorite quatre-trowa stories since the concept is so unique.. other than the inclusion of trixie and taylhichhich makes anything doubly amusing : ) .

i love the way you define wufei.. like a god of law or something.. it is waaay too cool. just shows that quatre has class and means business! Quatre climbs up 2 notches on the hot ladder just by having wufei as a lawyer!

i really dont know what you intend to do with hero and duo in this fic. i was kinda hoping you would concentrate on the quatre-trowa-taylor -trixie pairings in this fic and just come up with a separate fic for Heero and duo if ever you plan to be inserting them big time to this storyline.

im praying that you do get some ideas and be able to finish this fic as i love it so much.. some things you might want to try are:
a. taylor begging quatre to take him away from trixie (hehehehe)
b. trowa making a bold move on Mr. Winner .. err.. like stalking him into his bedroom to find out more about him.. . hehehe.. im sure he'll find out lots of things.
c. trixie catching trowa and quatre in a compromising position and it drives her crazy! she cant believe that quatre finds trowa sexier than she is!! bwahahahaha.

however yu shape this fic i will be reading it. and im still waiting to find out why it is titled 'punishing'.
person Harmonie Des Anges
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking brutal. I have seen few fics in my time that have a cliffhanger so obscene. I hope you know that I\'m most probably going to end up stalking you in some strange way, but at the same time, I can\'t really order you to finish. Life is full of obligations and responsibilities and sometimes it can get in the way of other things. Take your time with this, but I do hope you post soon.
Breathlessly awaiting an update,
HDA
person Amber
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really really really Like this story. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person SariL2
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You... just leave us with a trial?! Im about to wet my seat in anticipation! Get to the good stuff, the Tro Qua stuff, the meaty entree. Hmm, im kinda hungry, oh well, another chapter keeps my hopes alive, and makes sure that you arent dead. So go write some more! its wonderful!
person SariL2
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what... the hell. I am so confused now and i know that youre going to explain it all later in this great big paragraph, but what... the hell. Ok yeah, ok i can dig this, were going to be ok. Err. i like this chapter because well, Zilker Park seems like such a fun yet... blah place to be. I like bats and i love feeding the birds and duckies and stuffies. excaept that all birds hate me, its crazy. I am so sorry im going on like this, just yeah... keep it up? i guess. love!

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