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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it takes A LOT to forget the fear and survive a situation like this, 'tough mild, your fic showed that
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i want more but it was a good ending gr8 job
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this!! It was a good songfic and although it had Goku and Yamcha as lovers (can\'t stand Yamcha somehow) I really liked it. Vegeta and Goku ended up together and happy...what more can I ask for? *thinks: A sequel...more smut...more Goku/Vegeta goodness...* Ummm...forget that ^^;;; Loved it! Write more!
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I\'ve read this a long time ago and everytime i read it i can\'t help enjoying it a lot.
Specially because you use a character that\'s is always neglected: Yamcha. I like Yamcha and Ten-shin a lot,
pity people use to forget them every so often.
hope to see more from you soon. (and i\'m meaning your saintseiya fic too ^^)
Kitkat
Specially because you use a character that\'s is always neglected: Yamcha. I like Yamcha and Ten-shin a lot,
pity people use to forget them every so often.
hope to see more from you soon. (and i\'m meaning your saintseiya fic too ^^)
Kitkat
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic- I reckon it was probably about the right length, maybe a teensy bit short (but read long things anyway *grins*) Also, for an unbetaed fic, the grammarv was pretty damn good as well.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was the best i love the story. im glad that you had yamcha seeing someone on the side to that way goku wouldn\'t be sad to break yamcha heart. even though i don\'t really care abput i hate to see someone sad.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, JJ, that was lovely! Your scenes between the two saiyans contain a level of passion unreached by those who try too hard. I also like your sneaky Vegeta. <3
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Great detail.woulwould have been better with a lemon at the end with Goku on top but, hey, dont always get what ya want. Wonderful otherwise. 1000 out of 10.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did a wonderful, fantastic, one helluva job with those three characters, I didn\'t even think that Yamcha
could be used in a lemon. I also loved the way you portrayed Vegeta and Goku. I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE U.
could be used in a lemon. I also loved the way you portrayed Vegeta and Goku. I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE U.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was good. I must confess to preferring uke Vegeta to seme Vegeta, however; I did like how his and Goku\'s relationship developed. Without actually being taken through the process, I could easily picture Goku coming to Vegeta, telling him of his problems with Yamcha and then (no doubt due to Vegeta already having feelings for Goku) the two Saiyans coming together for mutual need.
I love how you portrayed Vegeta in bed, quietly reading a book before Goku IT\'d it into his room. I sensed the relaxed stillness in the air just prior to Goku\'s entry, and then the drama begins.
I very much liked Vegeta\'s insistence that Goku tell Yamcha about them, it is fitting for his character, I really don\'t see Vegeta as the \'sneak around\' type. He would definitely have felt slighted that Goku did not want to openly acknowledge their relationship, plus he\'s definitely not the \'bit on the side\' type :-)
I liked Vegeta immediately going on the defensive when Goku approached him with a predatory grin:
\"\"...You will not take me..not when you still stink of the ningen...\" He hissed\".
Verch lch liked Goku\'s cunning turn of mind:
\"Who said anything about me taking you koi..?\" \"Maybe this time...\" \"...I want you to take me...\"
Now that\'s definitely going to get the Prince\'s attention :-)
The shower scene was wonderfully tense and delightfully sexy, followed by a playful romp in the ouji\'s bedroom...until Vegeta reminds Goku that he needs to go home. A stark reminder to the reader that all is not paradise at this point in their relationship.
I particularly like this:
\"You say you care for both of us, then stop playing Yamcha for a fool, and treating me like your whore.\"
Well said, Vegeta!
I thought that Vegeta\'s actions re: the senzu\'s was necessary, and although I can possibly see Vegeta pondering briefly, on perhaps another way around the problem of Goku flitting between two lovers, I really can\'t see him feeling too lousy over his actions. He did what was needed. That\'s Vegeta.
I guess the only thing I didn\'t like about this wonderful little fic, was that Goku himself never made the conscious decision to be with Vegeta. Vegeta had to force his hand. I know that it\'s as plain as day that they belong together, but it still left me with a slightly hollow feeling in regards to their relationship.
Hoping to see more of your work :-)
I love how you portrayed Vegeta in bed, quietly reading a book before Goku IT\'d it into his room. I sensed the relaxed stillness in the air just prior to Goku\'s entry, and then the drama begins.
I very much liked Vegeta\'s insistence that Goku tell Yamcha about them, it is fitting for his character, I really don\'t see Vegeta as the \'sneak around\' type. He would definitely have felt slighted that Goku did not want to openly acknowledge their relationship, plus he\'s definitely not the \'bit on the side\' type :-)
I liked Vegeta immediately going on the defensive when Goku approached him with a predatory grin:
\"\"...You will not take me..not when you still stink of the ningen...\" He hissed\".
Verch lch liked Goku\'s cunning turn of mind:
\"Who said anything about me taking you koi..?\" \"Maybe this time...\" \"...I want you to take me...\"
Now that\'s definitely going to get the Prince\'s attention :-)
The shower scene was wonderfully tense and delightfully sexy, followed by a playful romp in the ouji\'s bedroom...until Vegeta reminds Goku that he needs to go home. A stark reminder to the reader that all is not paradise at this point in their relationship.
I particularly like this:
\"You say you care for both of us, then stop playing Yamcha for a fool, and treating me like your whore.\"
Well said, Vegeta!
I thought that Vegeta\'s actions re: the senzu\'s was necessary, and although I can possibly see Vegeta pondering briefly, on perhaps another way around the problem of Goku flitting between two lovers, I really can\'t see him feeling too lousy over his actions. He did what was needed. That\'s Vegeta.
I guess the only thing I didn\'t like about this wonderful little fic, was that Goku himself never made the conscious decision to be with Vegeta. Vegeta had to force his hand. I know that it\'s as plain as day that they belong together, but it still left me with a slightly hollow feeling in regards to their relationship.
Hoping to see more of your work :-)