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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The ending didn\'t suck. I don\'t think that Bulla and Bardock little lovefest should have been in this story either. It didn\'t fit. But I am glad ygreegreed with me. He He.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice.I liked it. Good Ending.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know about Bulla and Bardock...but I do find it hard to believe that they are going to go through the rest of their extremely long lives not having sex. I think that they will give in eventually...especially because they are young and we all know that Saiyans have insanely strong hormones...I think that it is inevitable.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great series! I thnk Bardock would be as agressive in bed as he is in fighting. But then again there is probably a side
of him that we have not seen (Yeah Right.)
I know for sure things would get very wild if frosting gets involved with the other saiyans if you know what I mean.
If all those that were under Tanna rule discover chocolate..... Watch out!
Keep it up!
of him that we have not seen (Yeah Right.)
I know for sure things would get very wild if frosting gets involved with the other saiyans if you know what I mean.
If all those that were under Tanna rule discover chocolate..... Watch out!
Keep it up!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well... the ban on sibling relationships is essentially because of the potential for birth defects... Now if Bulla is barren and the pair ARE bound... There is no reason to forbid a more physical relationship.
It doesn\'t seem that Bulla is actually opposed to it... Just Bardock\'s \'big brother\' mental set interferring with things. Once he gets past that and sees that its his \'mate\' that he\'s smelling - everything should go just peachy.
It doesn\'t seem that Bulla is actually opposed to it... Just Bardock\'s \'big brother\' mental set interferring with things. Once he gets past that and sees that its his \'mate\' that he\'s smelling - everything should go just peachy.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just for Webtester01 - My doctor \'sweetly\' told me that I could \'birth a calf\' with my hips... and still my pubic bone seperated (right THERE beneath your thatch?) with my first son... before that happened I\'d had no idea it was even possible! It\'s really not suprising to have residual discomfort from the bones spreading to let those heads and shoulders out... even if you are built for it!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the opener :-)
\"As if. Goku mostly ignored him, stayed and listened because he had to, but didn’t really hear anything.\"
LOL! Love this. Their wish was to have their home planet restored, not have their ears bent by the tedious dragon. Shenron should know better anyway, if they wanted to rule the universe, then they were standing on a good enough planet to begin their reign. Goku\'s response was perfect :-)
\"Goku stepped up to him, closer, purred for him. Heard Goten doing the same, purring, and the others, they all joined. Even Bardock was trilling and he smiled, looked at his father with that pride that was passed to him.\"
Damn, I loved this...it was so nurturing, so loving, so supportive of Vegeta, who was feeling just a tad overwhelmed by having his home back. :-)
It\'s hard for Takashi and Ilona to be separated during the voyage home, I can understand thed fod for her to be with all the other expectant mothers, that ship is no doubt better equipped to handle the births, but I feel for those two having to go through the separation.
Loved the challenge between Goten and the other women. I loved the way Trunks zoned in on Goten\'s husky purr :-) Crafty Goten, hot sex and chore free for the rest of the voyage :-)
YeahYeah, well, Bardock’s a pain. Besides he probably doesn’t do chores anyway.”
LOL!
“Good,” she said as she scooted off her mother’s lap and moved away, “Then he won’t stink.”
Loved Nalani\'s reaction to Goten\'s scent
Yay, they\'re on their way...Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"I got all ‘Aww, that’s so cute!’ when I realized that Vegeta was king again. Made me all like ‘Finally, he deserves it.’\"
Yeah, it gave me a good feeling to know that he was going home, that he would finally take his place on the throne, and that he finally gets a chance to show Kakarott his heritage. I\'m so glad that you did this. :-)
\"Mwhahaha! I want to put a cliffhanger ending on everything now! Just so people can tell me I’m evil. (Or not.)\"
LOL! Oh my God...we\'ve created a monster :-D
\"As if. Goku mostly ignored him, stayed and listened because he had to, but didn’t really hear anything.\"
LOL! Love this. Their wish was to have their home planet restored, not have their ears bent by the tedious dragon. Shenron should know better anyway, if they wanted to rule the universe, then they were standing on a good enough planet to begin their reign. Goku\'s response was perfect :-)
\"Goku stepped up to him, closer, purred for him. Heard Goten doing the same, purring, and the others, they all joined. Even Bardock was trilling and he smiled, looked at his father with that pride that was passed to him.\"
Damn, I loved this...it was so nurturing, so loving, so supportive of Vegeta, who was feeling just a tad overwhelmed by having his home back. :-)
It\'s hard for Takashi and Ilona to be separated during the voyage home, I can understand thed fod for her to be with all the other expectant mothers, that ship is no doubt better equipped to handle the births, but I feel for those two having to go through the separation.
Loved the challenge between Goten and the other women. I loved the way Trunks zoned in on Goten\'s husky purr :-) Crafty Goten, hot sex and chore free for the rest of the voyage :-)
YeahYeah, well, Bardock’s a pain. Besides he probably doesn’t do chores anyway.”
LOL!
“Good,” she said as she scooted off her mother’s lap and moved away, “Then he won’t stink.”
Loved Nalani\'s reaction to Goten\'s scent
Yay, they\'re on their way...Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"I got all ‘Aww, that’s so cute!’ when I realized that Vegeta was king again. Made me all like ‘Finally, he deserves it.’\"
Yeah, it gave me a good feeling to know that he was going home, that he would finally take his place on the throne, and that he finally gets a chance to show Kakarott his heritage. I\'m so glad that you did this. :-)
\"Mwhahaha! I want to put a cliffhanger ending on everything now! Just so people can tell me I’m evil. (Or not.)\"
LOL! Oh my God...we\'ve created a monster :-D
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that you should go with he Bardock and Bulla thing, shit everyone needs sex. So go for it Card! Go for it!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories! Its amazing that you update so much and still are able to write so well. Thank you so much! Smut is such a wonderful thing.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was great that the woman actually bet\'d on sex. I love Saiyanls tls they are so much fun. And yet another Goten/Trunks lemon. Those things never get old.