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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry i havent reviewed in a long time but i\'ve been really sick. but anyway YAHHAA! takashi found somebody:) *face splits into a huge and creepy grin* love love love absoulutly love how this fic is turning out!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww Takashi\'s getting it on!Cool didn\'t think HE\'D EVER HAVE SEX!^^Awww little Kaka and Vegi are flirting....how sweet.....^^ COntinue.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Goten is in his element with all the babies around him :-) Still, I\'m sure that when Goku returns he\'ll gather up an armload himself...looks like he\'ll get to be a mommy again - I\'m pleased for him, I know he misses that :-)
It was a good battle, not sure that I like the \'white light\' and \'dark light\' differentiation between the Saiyans...Vegeta and Bardock are good people, they just have a more Saiyan like rage to their personalities.
\"This was how they fought. This is how they won the fight against Tanna’s cruelty. By defeating everyone that came against them, by not murdering.\"
I guess this is where you and I disagree. In my eyes, to kill in battle is not murder, both parties enter into the fray knowing full well, the outcome, more than likely, means death for one of them. Vegeta and Bardock took on the ones that were never going to submit, not everyone does.rriorriors in particular will battle to the death. It is as well for Goku, Trunks and Gohan that they were freed from the choice of do or die by the presence of Vegeta and Bardock.
I personally, am very glad that those who, more than likely, treated Nuala in such an abhorrent manner are no lr arr around to continue such acts.
\"Bardock laughed a dark little laugh. “Now we have to rule them.”\"
Not sure I like the sound of this...Bardock isn\'t going to become a megalomaniac or something is he?
Interested in seeing what happens next.
I was very grateful for the warning by the way :-)
It was a good battle, not sure that I like the \'white light\' and \'dark light\' differentiation between the Saiyans...Vegeta and Bardock are good people, they just have a more Saiyan like rage to their personalities.
\"This was how they fought. This is how they won the fight against Tanna’s cruelty. By defeating everyone that came against them, by not murdering.\"
I guess this is where you and I disagree. In my eyes, to kill in battle is not murder, both parties enter into the fray knowing full well, the outcome, more than likely, means death for one of them. Vegeta and Bardock took on the ones that were never going to submit, not everyone does.rriorriors in particular will battle to the death. It is as well for Goku, Trunks and Gohan that they were freed from the choice of do or die by the presence of Vegeta and Bardock.
I personally, am very glad that those who, more than likely, treated Nuala in such an abhorrent manner are no lr arr around to continue such acts.
\"Bardock laughed a dark little laugh. “Now we have to rule them.”\"
Not sure I like the sound of this...Bardock isn\'t going to become a megalomaniac or something is he?
Interested in seeing what happens next.
I was very grateful for the warning by the way :-)
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely makes sense that Vegeta is looking to take his people off planet and start afresh elsewhere...can\'t help wondering how Trunks will feel about going, he strikes me as more human than Saiyan. Also wondering if Gohan and Bulma will be going too?
I\'m happy for Takashi. Ilona seems like a good match for him :-) I hope she isn\'t secretly looking to bring down our lot for killing her sister...doesn\'t seem like she is.
\"Shook that out of his mind. Didn’t want to thinkhis his little brother rutting.\"
LOL! Bardock is definitely more parent than big brother isn\'t he :-)
Trunks and Goten are so sweet with the orphan babies :-) Hope they don\'t get too attached though, I want Goku to have them :-)
\"“I’ll find their men,” he said to Nuala. Hoped that their chosen mates had not been killed.\"
Good to see Gohan mixing amongst the Saiyans. Hope he finds the womens mates as well, hopefully if they were mated, then it would have bto tto the nicer ones :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"(watch me justify my word choice here)\"
LOL! And you did it well :-) Thanks for responding with your POV. I appreciate it :-)
\"Yeah, Bardock’s something anyway. (Wink.)\"
(chuckle) Ahhh, the plot thickens :-)
I\'m happy for Takashi. Ilona seems like a good match for him :-) I hope she isn\'t secretly looking to bring down our lot for killing her sister...doesn\'t seem like she is.
\"Shook that out of his mind. Didn’t want to thinkhis his little brother rutting.\"
LOL! Bardock is definitely more parent than big brother isn\'t he :-)
Trunks and Goten are so sweet with the orphan babies :-) Hope they don\'t get too attached though, I want Goku to have them :-)
\"“I’ll find their men,” he said to Nuala. Hoped that their chosen mates had not been killed.\"
Good to see Gohan mixing amongst the Saiyans. Hope he finds the womens mates as well, hopefully if they were mated, then it would have bto tto the nicer ones :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"(watch me justify my word choice here)\"
LOL! And you did it well :-) Thanks for responding with your POV. I appreciate it :-)
\"Yeah, Bardock’s something anyway. (Wink.)\"
(chuckle) Ahhh, the plot thickens :-)
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oww, somebody got some action. Was it Takashi I think it was. Poor Gohan...I think that I would be slightly tramatized too. I love this fic, it has so much going on. I love a challenge.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A good chapter. I enjoyed the way the battle was played out. Not nearly as frenzied as I thought it would be, all very self assured from our side. Really loved the deadly calm that seemed to emanate from Vegeta, and the reluctant show of strength from Goku.
Had to skim over the battle between Bardock and Tanna, not really big on gruesome things...but I got a general idea of what happened...and Yea! Bardock :-)
Looks like the next battle may be a bit more frenzied.
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"You’re supposed to be curious about what happens! That’s the whole point of stories.\"
(*chuckle*) Not always. Sometimes, I read just to enjoy the atmosphere and to temporarily become a part of the characters lives, enjoying each new moment with them, their interactions and reactions, but suffering from no definite curiosity as to what will come next. :-)
\"Goodness! Looks like Goku might have gotten his wish fulfilled, huh?\"
Definitely :-)
Had to skim over the battle between Bardock and Tanna, not really big on gruesome things...but I got a general idea of what happened...and Yea! Bardock :-)
Looks like the next battle may be a bit more frenzied.
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"You’re supposed to be curious about what happens! That’s the whole point of stories.\"
(*chuckle*) Not always. Sometimes, I read just to enjoy the atmosphere and to temporarily become a part of the characters lives, enjoying each new moment with them, their interactions and reactions, but suffering from no definite curiosity as to what will come next. :-)
\"Goodness! Looks like Goku might have gotten his wish fulfilled, huh?\"
Definitely :-)
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol Goku\'s the \"brightest light\".
Ahh alas I remember the days when this story was about sex and frosting too.Happy days.But I prefer---I\'m shocked to say---the new twists...And the women...And children..^^ It\'s just so happy....I mean it\'s bloody....and lotsa murder but....It\'s happy.
Ahh alas I remember the days when this story was about sex and frosting too.Happy days.But I prefer---I\'m shocked to say---the new twists...And the women...And children..^^ It\'s just so happy....I mean it\'s bloody....and lotsa murder but....It\'s happy.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE CHILDREN!SUCESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!O-O.......
Goku is the Light!Ehehehhee!^^ Continue
Goku is the Light!Ehehehhee!^^ Continue
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think that there was too much happening. It is getting awful angsty...not a bad thing of course. I can\'t wait to see what these guys are going to do with all of these Saiyans now. Heww!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww I like ya Naula.Continue.