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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a nice fufilling chapter. And Bardock and Bulla finally mated. Those two are like the old spinster Brother and Sister who end up spending the rest of their lives together. No kids, no pets. Just each other. Hmm. Comforting in a wierd sort of way.
Hmm. I don\'t like Nuala either. It is a fun challenge to create a character that everyone is supposed to hate isn\'t it?
Hmm. I don\'t like Nuala either. It is a fun challenge to create a character that everyone is supposed to hate isn\'t it?
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Things are heating up now...big battle tomorrow.
It seems strange that Gohan is not being asked to go with the others.
“Bardock would know better. He knows all the old laws.”
I must confess that I\'m very curious to see how this all is going to bsolvsolved. Sounds like once Tanna is destroyed, then the others are expecting their laws to apply...but these are the same Saiyans that scoffed at the old ways. I\'ll be curious to see what their politics are now, as we have only had minor contact with Tanna, and don\'t really know how the others think about all of this, but judging by what has happened to Nuala, they don\'t sound very honourable to me. This is getting interesting.
Damn, I feel sorry for Bulla. I know that she has strong feelings for Bardock and doesn\'t really mind being bonded to him, but the reason why she has to be bonded so soon is a little degrading, I can understand her rage at the Saiyan ways...
...Can\'t help but feel sorry for poor ol\' Vegeta, always having to be the bearer of the shitty news though.
Whew...sixty young ones and thirty women. That\'s a hell of alot of new Saiyans...I hope that they are at least peaceful...It\'s also a lot of (I imagine) innocents, that our crew have to avoid hurting during the fight...
Hopefully Takashi will be able to find a prospective mate from this group :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
It seems strange that Gohan is not being asked to go with the others.
“Bardock would know better. He knows all the old laws.”
I must confess that I\'m very curious to see how this all is going to bsolvsolved. Sounds like once Tanna is destroyed, then the others are expecting their laws to apply...but these are the same Saiyans that scoffed at the old ways. I\'ll be curious to see what their politics are now, as we have only had minor contact with Tanna, and don\'t really know how the others think about all of this, but judging by what has happened to Nuala, they don\'t sound very honourable to me. This is getting interesting.
Damn, I feel sorry for Bulla. I know that she has strong feelings for Bardock and doesn\'t really mind being bonded to him, but the reason why she has to be bonded so soon is a little degrading, I can understand her rage at the Saiyan ways...
...Can\'t help but feel sorry for poor ol\' Vegeta, always having to be the bearer of the shitty news though.
Whew...sixty young ones and thirty women. That\'s a hell of alot of new Saiyans...I hope that they are at least peaceful...It\'s also a lot of (I imagine) innocents, that our crew have to avoid hurting during the fight...
Hopefully Takashi will be able to find a prospective mate from this group :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.o Two Girls??????Coool!^^ Nice names.Continue.Sorry I didn\'t reviuew quicker stupid computers acting up.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Loved this chapter! The babies are born! Two little princesses :-)
I loved how Goku and Vegeta were there for the two boys. Trunks seemed to be a bit overwhelmed by it all (although he handled it well) but it\'s just as well that Goku was there to show him how to soothe Goten\'s pains.
Loved how Goku purred and Vegeta trilled for Goten...so sweet and loving :-)
Loved how Vegeta and Goku played their part in the birthing process, helping out when necessary, really highlighted the closeness within this family :-)
\"Vegeta rolled his eyes, and Trunks gave him a sneer. As if the Prince of All Saiyans had been a naturally perfect parent from the very first second of Bardock’s life.\"
LOL! I love Trunks\' thoughts, it\'s a very realistic thought, because grandparents (whilst being invaluable in those early days) can nonetheless be a real pain in the arse with their know-it-all attitude :-) Still, having said that, both Vegeta and Goku handled the first time birthing process of their four really well. :-)
\"silently thanked (himself really) whatever providence allowed this world to exist instead of the nightmare that had been before.\"
(*chuckle*) Trunks: Yay! Thanks me! :-)
\"“Lucky you,” Vegeta said, almost laughing as he cut the cord and switched places with Trunks so he could clean up the disastrous mess.\"
*Blech* Vegeta has a stonger stomach than me...I\'d definitely be leaving that particular chore for the father :-)
Loved Bulma\'s reaction about being a grandma. Actually, I\'m surprised she wasn\'t in there with them...just in case of complications. Still, I imagine she was only a shout away :-)
Loved how all the siblings were on edge [ like expectant father\'s - even Bulla :-) ] am really pleased that I\'m not alone i opi opinion of Nuala...Yay! Bulla and Bardock :-)
\"Goku nodded, thought with a distant shiver that he had broken his pelvic bone when he had his sons and Bulla.\"
Damn! Don\'t know how I overlooked this...I knew that hd hud hurt his rear, but I didn\'t know that he broke his pelvic bone...poor dear...that had to hurt :-(
A really happy chapter. Welcome to Raine and Kaori. looking forward to the next chapter :-)
I am so grateful that you share similar feelings to me in regards to Nuala, I was worried that you\'d be pissed off because I didn\'t like her :-) Yeah, I heard that about Sir Arthur Conan Doyle and also the fact that he tried to kill Holmes off along with Moriarty at \'Reichenbach falls\' but due to public outcry, he felt compelled to bring him back and make it look like they survived the fall. I think Agatha Christie also tired of Hercule Poirot...so you\'re in good company :-)
I loved how Goku and Vegeta were there for the two boys. Trunks seemed to be a bit overwhelmed by it all (although he handled it well) but it\'s just as well that Goku was there to show him how to soothe Goten\'s pains.
Loved how Goku purred and Vegeta trilled for Goten...so sweet and loving :-)
Loved how Vegeta and Goku played their part in the birthing process, helping out when necessary, really highlighted the closeness within this family :-)
\"Vegeta rolled his eyes, and Trunks gave him a sneer. As if the Prince of All Saiyans had been a naturally perfect parent from the very first second of Bardock’s life.\"
LOL! I love Trunks\' thoughts, it\'s a very realistic thought, because grandparents (whilst being invaluable in those early days) can nonetheless be a real pain in the arse with their know-it-all attitude :-) Still, having said that, both Vegeta and Goku handled the first time birthing process of their four really well. :-)
\"silently thanked (himself really) whatever providence allowed this world to exist instead of the nightmare that had been before.\"
(*chuckle*) Trunks: Yay! Thanks me! :-)
\"“Lucky you,” Vegeta said, almost laughing as he cut the cord and switched places with Trunks so he could clean up the disastrous mess.\"
*Blech* Vegeta has a stonger stomach than me...I\'d definitely be leaving that particular chore for the father :-)
Loved Bulma\'s reaction about being a grandma. Actually, I\'m surprised she wasn\'t in there with them...just in case of complications. Still, I imagine she was only a shout away :-)
Loved how all the siblings were on edge [ like expectant father\'s - even Bulla :-) ] am really pleased that I\'m not alone i opi opinion of Nuala...Yay! Bulla and Bardock :-)
\"Goku nodded, thought with a distant shiver that he had broken his pelvic bone when he had his sons and Bulla.\"
Damn! Don\'t know how I overlooked this...I knew that hd hud hurt his rear, but I didn\'t know that he broke his pelvic bone...poor dear...that had to hurt :-(
A really happy chapter. Welcome to Raine and Kaori. looking forward to the next chapter :-)
I am so grateful that you share similar feelings to me in regards to Nuala, I was worried that you\'d be pissed off because I didn\'t like her :-) Yeah, I heard that about Sir Arthur Conan Doyle and also the fact that he tried to kill Holmes off along with Moriarty at \'Reichenbach falls\' but due to public outcry, he felt compelled to bring him back and make it look like they survived the fall. I think Agatha Christie also tired of Hercule Poirot...so you\'re in good company :-)
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The beginning with Goku and Nuala was very nicely done, t was was definitely a sense of melancholy coming from the world\'s strongest:
“I can’t,” he whispered to her, “I couldn’t ever hurt Vegeta.”
Thank-you. These two have a very deep bond, and have been together for at least 17 years, it would have been a tragedy, had Goku decided to mate with Nuala.
\"Walked back up to the bedroom. Stood outside the door and pressed his hand to it, knew that Vegeta was standing right there on the other side.\"
I loved this. It expressed such deep love wrapped ar a c a coil of uncertainty.
\"And Vegeta was growling, shaking and growling and he moved his mouth from Goku’s lips to his shoulder, dug his teeth straight down to the muscle, sucked on the wound, and growled louder. “Mine!” he screamed into the shoulder.\"
Ah Gods, I could feel the panicked relief radiating from Vegeta...I am so glad that he didn\'t lose his mate, he has lost much in his past...his freedom, his father, his people, his planet, and until he found what he now shares with Goku, he was having mini battles with the last of what he had...his pride. Losing Goku, I think, would have shattered the Prince.
I love the fact that Goku kept purring a mate\'s purr for Vegeta, trying to reassure him that he hadn\'t lost him and particularly loved this:
“Mine!”
“Yours,” he agreed.
Vegeta\'s emotions were so ragged and Goku was doing everything necessary to be the soothing force...there is such love between these two, and it\'s almost painful that it was put to the test in such a shattering way.
\"At the thought of what he had given up when he told Nuala no, and what he would have lost if he had told her yes.\"
I like this! There is a world of difference between giving something up and losing something...you expressed this beautifully :-)
Loved the fact that Vegeta finally trilled for Goku...a purr and a trill is worth a thousand words.
Totally agreed with Vegeta\'s inner thoughts as he and Bardock waited for Kakarot. His reaction is what I would have expected from him and is totally understandable...love the way he dealt with Bardock\'s demanding questions :-)
Curious to see how Bardock deals with his father\'s demand that he claim Bulla. Can understand the reason behind it, still a bit uncomfortable with it...can\'t help feeling a little sorry for Bardock & Bulla...having these strong emotifor for each other and being brother and sister...it must be...God I don\'t know...sigh...I like these two...I wish them well and hope that they find a happy solution.
Okay, hermes mes the bit where I stand completely isolated from everybody else\'s opinion...I hope you don\'t hate me for this, but...
I don\'t like Nuala. Don\'t get me wrong, my heart goes out to her for what she has suffered. Nobody should have to go through what she has gone through. But the simple fact is, she was rescued from those beasts, given a safe place to stay and an opportunity to mate with Takashi...okay, she\'s not interested in him that way and that\'s fine, her choice, but to turn around and attempt to bite the hand that feeds her, by knowingly trying to claim an already mated Saiyan (even one that she felt she had a right to) was unforgivable. It wasn\'t her right to claim Kakarot, it was his right to claim her and he chose not too. She should have accepted that, but she threw herself at him and then had the gall to feel hatred for Kakarot\'s long time true mate.
She, better than anyone, knows what it\'s like to lose someone pres, ts, the only other who could even come close to understanding that fact is the very man she tried to steal from.
Personally, I think that Takashi is too good for her.
Good chapter...really stirred my emotions. Looking forward to the next chapter...something soothing I hope...still, this is why I read \"Mental Therapy\" after \"Frosting Chronicles\" Never know when I\'m going to need a good pick-me-up and \"Mental Therapy\" always does that for me :-)
LOL! Loved the dialogue between Goten and Trunks.
Thanks for answering my question about Bulma :-)
“I can’t,” he whispered to her, “I couldn’t ever hurt Vegeta.”
Thank-you. These two have a very deep bond, and have been together for at least 17 years, it would have been a tragedy, had Goku decided to mate with Nuala.
\"Walked back up to the bedroom. Stood outside the door and pressed his hand to it, knew that Vegeta was standing right there on the other side.\"
I loved this. It expressed such deep love wrapped ar a c a coil of uncertainty.
\"And Vegeta was growling, shaking and growling and he moved his mouth from Goku’s lips to his shoulder, dug his teeth straight down to the muscle, sucked on the wound, and growled louder. “Mine!” he screamed into the shoulder.\"
Ah Gods, I could feel the panicked relief radiating from Vegeta...I am so glad that he didn\'t lose his mate, he has lost much in his past...his freedom, his father, his people, his planet, and until he found what he now shares with Goku, he was having mini battles with the last of what he had...his pride. Losing Goku, I think, would have shattered the Prince.
I love the fact that Goku kept purring a mate\'s purr for Vegeta, trying to reassure him that he hadn\'t lost him and particularly loved this:
“Mine!”
“Yours,” he agreed.
Vegeta\'s emotions were so ragged and Goku was doing everything necessary to be the soothing force...there is such love between these two, and it\'s almost painful that it was put to the test in such a shattering way.
\"At the thought of what he had given up when he told Nuala no, and what he would have lost if he had told her yes.\"
I like this! There is a world of difference between giving something up and losing something...you expressed this beautifully :-)
Loved the fact that Vegeta finally trilled for Goku...a purr and a trill is worth a thousand words.
Totally agreed with Vegeta\'s inner thoughts as he and Bardock waited for Kakarot. His reaction is what I would have expected from him and is totally understandable...love the way he dealt with Bardock\'s demanding questions :-)
Curious to see how Bardock deals with his father\'s demand that he claim Bulla. Can understand the reason behind it, still a bit uncomfortable with it...can\'t help feeling a little sorry for Bardock & Bulla...having these strong emotifor for each other and being brother and sister...it must be...God I don\'t know...sigh...I like these two...I wish them well and hope that they find a happy solution.
Okay, hermes mes the bit where I stand completely isolated from everybody else\'s opinion...I hope you don\'t hate me for this, but...
I don\'t like Nuala. Don\'t get me wrong, my heart goes out to her for what she has suffered. Nobody should have to go through what she has gone through. But the simple fact is, she was rescued from those beasts, given a safe place to stay and an opportunity to mate with Takashi...okay, she\'s not interested in him that way and that\'s fine, her choice, but to turn around and attempt to bite the hand that feeds her, by knowingly trying to claim an already mated Saiyan (even one that she felt she had a right to) was unforgivable. It wasn\'t her right to claim Kakarot, it was his right to claim her and he chose not too. She should have accepted that, but she threw herself at him and then had the gall to feel hatred for Kakarot\'s long time true mate.
She, better than anyone, knows what it\'s like to lose someone pres, ts, the only other who could even come close to understanding that fact is the very man she tried to steal from.
Personally, I think that Takashi is too good for her.
Good chapter...really stirred my emotions. Looking forward to the next chapter...something soothing I hope...still, this is why I read \"Mental Therapy\" after \"Frosting Chronicles\" Never know when I\'m going to need a good pick-me-up and \"Mental Therapy\" always does that for me :-)
LOL! Loved the dialogue between Goten and Trunks.
Thanks for answering my question about Bulma :-)
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.o violent, poessive sex....I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Awww poor Naula.......Mate her to someone nice k?Continue.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Girls...This is going to be soo cool. Sorry, I don\'t have much to say today...but this was a great chapter.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! TWO GIRLS! WHOOOOO HOOOOO!! seems as if nuala is becoming alittle attatched to takashi :) cant wait for monday and a new update!
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs in relief* Heww, am I glad that that Nuala thing is settled. It was getting pretty awkward. Now things are get int interesting though with Bulla and Bardock. Can\'t wait for more.
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah sOULDOULD couldn\'t she?That sucks.....But her with Takashi....He\'s too different....The littles are to little and Goten and Trunks are mated and well yeah.....Still......Babies.Continue!And I hope it was Explosive Sex.