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My heart really went out to Bulla.

\"So… They tortured Gogeta to get to me and I wasn’en wen worth it.”\"
“You’re worth it, Bulla.”

This was a touching little scene between Bardock and Bulla. I had to consciously divorce myself from my (naturally) human emotions, to see beyond what Bardock was saying to her to be able to appreciate that his outlook is probably the best thing for the Saiyan miss. There is no way that she\'s going to be falling into a well of self-pity with big brother at her side. :-)

I really liked the scene in the lab with Bulma, Bardock (and later) Trunks & Goten. Bulma is really quite wonderful at times. Bardock seems to appreciate this fact :-)

I love how Bardock still considers Goten his, but openly acknowledges that the bs ars are Trunks...I do love this territorial attitude to the Saiyans. I was wondering how Bulma fits into all of this...would Vegeta have a (non-sexual) territorial attitude where she is concerned? Would the others?

I hope Bulma\'s hormone injection works on the babies.

I like how you portray the fact that the new Saiyans have no knowledge of Earth\'s languages and therefore; Nuala is having a difficult time communicating with the others and vice versa...almost tragic that the only one she can communicate with is poor Vegeta, who must be finding being in her presence increasingly difficult.

Looks like poor ol\' Takashi is starting to respond to her fertility cycle as well. Sort of feel sorry for him too, but I like how they tried hard to communicate with each other. I don\'t understand why she suddenly went all hangdog and subtly growling when Vegeta showed up...He hasn\'t done anything wrong.

Loved the little chat between Trunks and Goten...I really can\'t say why...I just really enjoyed the way they interacted with each other. :-)

\"Sorry about making you unsettled, but I’m actually really proud of that. The chapter was supposed to be unsettling.\"

If that\'s the case, then yes, you should definitely be proud of it, because I was deeply unsettled, still am. Well done though! There is nothing more rewarding than having your work received as you intended it to be. :-)

I lGiniGinia\'s idea about mating Nuala with Gohan. Don\'t hold out too much hope for it though, as it has been mentioned in this chapter that he has someone, but just thought I\'d add my voice to hers on this one...can\'t stand the thought of an com coming between Vegeta and Goku.

I am curious about this part of your response to Ginia though:

\"Hmm. Plus he’s not one of Vegeta’s sons.\"

Is this an important factor in choosing a mate for Nuala? Is this why she rejected the possibility of Takashi? Intriguing...am now wondering if there is some connection between the rebel Saiyans and the Royal house.

Well I\'d like to kill the Bitch but other than that so what?And if Goku and Vegeta got pregnant there WOULD need to be Original Characters and slight changes to the stroy\'s characters.I like Naula\'s(sp?) name.And I like her.She can give more babies.From both Vegeta and Goku\'s side.(IF you are planning on mating her to both Goku and Vegeta.If not I\'ll still like her.)

More hits than expected? Card - you just ended \'Even More of Us\' and I refuse to believe I\'m the only one who wanted to finish the original before I read the sequel...lol... This is simply a wonderful series of fics! Is Gohan seeing anyone? He\'s older than the brood boys AND he is Goku\'s eldest son so he could be a reasonable choice for the newly named young lady... I really hope we don\'t have a G/V/N threesome.

I have been thinking about this whole Nuala thing and I have come to the conclusion of \"No, she can\'t have Kakarot.\" Takashi needs a woman. So there. Anyway, after all of your stories I can not see Goku with anyone else but Vegeta. But, if you think that it is best then I\'ll go with it. You have a way of making me change my mind.

Now on to this chapter. Bulla was being a bit whinny. I didn\'t think she wanted to have kids really. I hope the Goten\'s will be okay though, I would become so depressed if something terrible happened.

Again i beseech you let the baby\'s live!!! can\'t wait for the fight and for bardock to tear her limb from limb! anyway i really like Nuala, she\'s been through alot but is strong anyway..I also love that Takashi has a little bit of a speaking part, sos ad that he\'s alone but kind of expected..cant wait for the next chapter!!!

I\'m speechless. This was a very draining chapter, I actually started tel uel unsettled in my stomach. The emotional content of this chapter was very raw and I almost feel like crying for Vegeta. His decision cannave ave been easy.

I have to admit that I am not liking the way it\'s looking, I feel sorry for Nuala and if Saiyan customs states that she\'s Goku\'s because he won her then I guess I understand the reason behind what she asked...but if she\'s citing Saiyan laws and customs, then surely she must know how deeply two Saiyans whom have bonded, feel about each other. I care about Nuala, but not THAT much.

Also starting to feel very worried about Goten\'s babies...Bulma\'s concern has bled over into me. I think that Trunks has made the right decision.

\"Closed his eyes and didn’t wait for her answer, felt Goku turn to look at herved ved back, turned his back, didn’t want to see.\"

Okay, now I have tears. Very poignant chapter.


Responding to your response to Jaygoose.

\"I think you’re the only one that mentioned the girl wanting to mate herself to Gk & Veg.\"

I honestly thought I said something, because my initial reaction was No Fucking Way! But I also didn\'t really think that they would seriously consider it either...sigh

\"Originally, Goku didn’t get picked because Vegeta, Bardock & Trunks are the rightful Prince & heirs.\"

Ah, okay. Makes sense :-)

\"Goodness, I’ve got you confused and you like being confused.\"

No...I hate it...but I like when an author keeps me on my toes :-)

Good chapter...we rarely hear from Takashi, he\'s a quiet little soul isn\'t he?

\"“Myself, Bardock and Trunks,” Vegeta said.\"

Why didn\'t Goku get picked? Wouldn\'t they have a better chance with Vegeta, Goku and Bardock? Not that the others should be that much of a threat...but still...

\"Everyone turned to look at Vegeta, except Goku who stood behind his mate, tairledrled around his wrist.\"

I love this! The loyalty is so wonderful :-) Was Goku\'s tail curled around Vegeta\'s wrist? I hope so, because that\'s just too sweet for words :-)

Still a bit unsure as to what happened when Goku went to Gogeta. Also, how did the other Saiyans learn about our lot in the first place? I assumed that Gogeta somehow got in touch with them, but now it sounds like he wasn\'t really \'in with them\' so to speak...I\'m wondering why he gave permission for his sigs tgs to be taken?

Whew, lots happening and I\'m not as sure as to what has been happening as I thought I was...I\'m not sure whether I should be feeling sorry for Gogeta or not. You\'ve got me all nice and confused now...good work :-)

Feel very sorry for the unnamed one. Hope she gets a name soon as well.

Loved how Vegeta was with her and loved the interaction between Her, Vegeta and Goku. Getting her POV as Vegeta spoke and listened to her and then watching as he translated and listened to Goku...good scene :-)

\"Well. That was completely un-fucking-heard of.\"

LOL! Loved her reaction to the news that Goku was Vegeta\'s mate :-)

Keep it coming :-)

i really do hope Goten\'s babies live. And what will be the female\'s name?

This story is getting very good. I can\'t help it I just have to remind you of that. I am glad the untamed one got a name. I couldn\'t just keep typing the untamned one all the time. I think that she should mate with Kakarot. It would be cool. But you have to do what is best for my favorite Saiyans. I trust your decision. I can\'t wait for more.

I like the namelene..ne...Tho of of a name for her?Cuz, if she\'ll be mated or something she\'ll need a name.^^.I like her. She\'s nice.Continue