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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I nearly cried when Trunks shoved Vegeta out of the way.
I really feel like kicking his superior little arse.
Sorry...I guess I\'m a little tired of the \"Trunks hates Vegeta\" stories...I\'ve seen it alot and I don\'t get it...Vegeta has always been there for his Trunks and they have such a close relationship in the show...I guess you\'d have to have read some of the stuff that I\'ve come across to understand my reaction...I know that this is different and that it\'s part of the plot, but it\'s hard to divorce myself from the gut reaction.
Other than my oversensitive response to this chapter...this is a very good story with an interesting plot and I don\'t get why more Trunks and Goten fans don\'t read and review.
Preparing for the next chapter...will be ready to stand in front of my Prince and take on Trunks if necessary :-)
I really feel like kicking his superior little arse.
Sorry...I guess I\'m a little tired of the \"Trunks hates Vegeta\" stories...I\'ve seen it alot and I don\'t get it...Vegeta has always been there for his Trunks and they have such a close relationship in the show...I guess you\'d have to have read some of the stuff that I\'ve come across to understand my reaction...I know that this is different and that it\'s part of the plot, but it\'s hard to divorce myself from the gut reaction.
Other than my oversensitive response to this chapter...this is a very good story with an interesting plot and I don\'t get why more Trunks and Goten fans don\'t read and review.
Preparing for the next chapter...will be ready to stand in front of my Prince and take on Trunks if necessary :-)
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the little pictures that Goten draws. He\'s going to be a star.
I don\'t see why Goku and Vegeta didn\'t tell Trunks the truth. I don\'t think it would have made much of a difference if they had.
Anyway, I\'m going out of town for a fews days. But I promise to review everything when I get back. :)
I don\'t see why Goku and Vegeta didn\'t tell Trunks the truth. I don\'t think it would have made much of a difference if they had.
Anyway, I\'m going out of town for a fews days. But I promise to review everything when I get back. :)
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting chapter. I can\'t help but wonder what\'s the matter with Trunks?
Things are looking a bit bleak at times as he has little flashes of \'memory\' of the alternate future, but none of this actually happened to him as such, so I\'m wondering why he is so snotty at times.
In \"Even more of us\" a young Trunks crawled on Vegeta\'s lap with Takashi, and Vegeta trilled to them and gave them tender looks...sweet :-) Yet Trunks acts like he now has no connection to his father. I\'m a bit confused.
Well it looks like things are going to start heating up from this point now that Trunks has realised that there is something that Goku is not telling him.
Methinks there be angst ahead.
Interested in seeing what happens when Trunks confronts Goku.
Things are looking a bit bleak at times as he has little flashes of \'memory\' of the alternate future, but none of this actually happened to him as such, so I\'m wondering why he is so snotty at times.
In \"Even more of us\" a young Trunks crawled on Vegeta\'s lap with Takashi, and Vegeta trilled to them and gave them tender looks...sweet :-) Yet Trunks acts like he now has no connection to his father. I\'m a bit confused.
Well it looks like things are going to start heating up from this point now that Trunks has realised that there is something that Goku is not telling him.
Methinks there be angst ahead.
Interested in seeing what happens when Trunks confronts Goku.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t mind the plot. I just makes it better when the sex happens again.
So Goten remember somethings too. How interesting. I can\'t wait to see how this is going to turn out.
So Goten remember somethings too. How interesting. I can\'t wait to see how this is going to turn out.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Drama, Drama, Drama! I love it! I do feel a sort of apathy towards Gogeta now. I don\'t really understand. I guess because from what I have been feed about Saiyans they are all so proud and happy to be what they are. It must be wierd to be him.
I do appreciate the sex that brought me back though. He. He. Loved it. I am glad that I am at home and not he library though. *smiles guility* I always get nervous and think that someone is going to notice whats on my monitor.
I do appreciate the sex that brought me back though. He. He. Loved it. I am glad that I am at home and not he library though. *smiles guility* I always get nervous and think that someone is going to notice whats on my monitor.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, having read the latest chapter of \"Even More Of Us\" I now understand what young Gogeta\'s problem is and why the others feel so uncomfortable around him.
I must say, that had to be the shortest, most uncomfortable visit in the history of the universe...I can almost see why Bardock flies into a rage when he visits. Makes me wonder why he still keeps in touch, if he hates who Gogeta is so much...Is it still part of his \'older sibling\' protective instinct\' that keeps him going back?
Even though Gogeta is not happy with his Sn hen heritage, he seems okay with the visits he receives, he smiled at Goten and Trunks...I have to wonder how he would react if his dad came to visit...and how Vegeta would be.
I wonder why Goku doesn\'t visit...does he also feel slightly uncomfortable around the boy or is it that he doesn\'t want to agitate Gogeta by reminding him of the past?
What\'s up wirunkrunks? He seems a little snotty to me?
I like how Goten is worrying that his kids might turn out like Gogeta...a realistic touch, pregnancy heightens many fears.
A good chapter...got a bit more insight into Gogeta and opened up a whole can of worms in the process...I\'m now drowning in questions :-)
\"No; Gogeta’s reaction isn’t due to the allergy;\"
Just as well I didn\'t actually put any money down...this is why I don\'t bet that much...I rarely get it right :-)
I must say, that had to be the shortest, most uncomfortable visit in the history of the universe...I can almost see why Bardock flies into a rage when he visits. Makes me wonder why he still keeps in touch, if he hates who Gogeta is so much...Is it still part of his \'older sibling\' protective instinct\' that keeps him going back?
Even though Gogeta is not happy with his Sn hen heritage, he seems okay with the visits he receives, he smiled at Goten and Trunks...I have to wonder how he would react if his dad came to visit...and how Vegeta would be.
I wonder why Goku doesn\'t visit...does he also feel slightly uncomfortable around the boy or is it that he doesn\'t want to agitate Gogeta by reminding him of the past?
What\'s up wirunkrunks? He seems a little snotty to me?
I like how Goten is worrying that his kids might turn out like Gogeta...a realistic touch, pregnancy heightens many fears.
A good chapter...got a bit more insight into Gogeta and opened up a whole can of worms in the process...I\'m now drowning in questions :-)
\"No; Gogeta’s reaction isn’t due to the allergy;\"
Just as well I didn\'t actually put any money down...this is why I don\'t bet that much...I rarely get it right :-)
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Owww, you\'re teasing! What up with Gogeta. I am glad to see that he is still breathing but why isn\'t he there with the rest of the brood?
Hmm. I love how Trunks has flashes of the future that used to be. Very good. They are there but not screaming for attention. I like that.
Hmm. I love how Trunks has flashes of the future that used to be. Very good. They are there but not screaming for attention. I like that.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why do I get the feeling Gogeta died.I fiI find your fics and the DBZ world you have created addictive. Makes me want to learn more about their daily lives and how things are going.
I like that there is residual anger and distrust of Bardock and the other siblings on Trunks part. You don\'t experience hell and loss like you put him through without there being an impact.
I like that there is residual anger and distrust of Bardock and the other siblings on Trunks part. You don\'t experience hell and loss like you put him through without there being an impact.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter 3
\"Dad sighed. Looked at Vegeta. Gave him that look that Goten always classified away under ‘I want that.’ And he felt suddenly very sad for his father.\"
Oh God, me too! Poor Goku, after all these years, he\'s still has moments of sadness...and I just loved the way he looked at Vegeta as he sighed, I could feel his heartbreak, sense of connection and need for support. God I love those two together!
\"His Dad sighed heavily. “Not as much as I would miss your brothers,” was what he said. What he always said. And Goten wondered if it was a lie.\"
Poor Goku...how many times am I going to say that? But my heart goes out to him so...I don\'t think it was a lie, but it must be hard for him sometimes with Goten still benefitting froku\oku\'s original wish, whilst he (Goku) has suffered the loss. Must be hard on Vegeta too, knowing how his mate feels and not being able to do anything about it.
\"“It’ll work,” Vegeta replied.\"
\"Goku grinned and his tail flicked back and forth behind him. “It’ll work,” he confirmed.\"
LOL! Those two know better than anyone I guess :-)
Loved the \'discussion\' about the delivery of the babies...I wonder why Trunks thought that Vegeta would deliver them though? Loved Gotens threat about Vegeta seeing more of his private area if Vegeta delivered their children instead of him...That should wake Trunks up :-)
Really liked the tie in with \"Even more of us\" re: the time machine...links like that always add to the sense of realism :-)
Bit worried about the scar thing on Trunks\' bonding mark...that should have vanished when the timelime was altered.
\"...but Goten would probably love to use the hyperbola thinainsainst him. Draw him dirty little pictures.\"
LOL! Got a point there :-)
\"Dad sighed. Looked at Vegeta. Gave him that look that Goten always classified away under ‘I want that.’ And he felt suddenly very sad for his father.\"
Oh God, me too! Poor Goku, after all these years, he\'s still has moments of sadness...and I just loved the way he looked at Vegeta as he sighed, I could feel his heartbreak, sense of connection and need for support. God I love those two together!
\"His Dad sighed heavily. “Not as much as I would miss your brothers,” was what he said. What he always said. And Goten wondered if it was a lie.\"
Poor Goku...how many times am I going to say that? But my heart goes out to him so...I don\'t think it was a lie, but it must be hard for him sometimes with Goten still benefitting froku\oku\'s original wish, whilst he (Goku) has suffered the loss. Must be hard on Vegeta too, knowing how his mate feels and not being able to do anything about it.
\"“It’ll work,” Vegeta replied.\"
\"Goku grinned and his tail flicked back and forth behind him. “It’ll work,” he confirmed.\"
LOL! Those two know better than anyone I guess :-)
Loved the \'discussion\' about the delivery of the babies...I wonder why Trunks thought that Vegeta would deliver them though? Loved Gotens threat about Vegeta seeing more of his private area if Vegeta delivered their children instead of him...That should wake Trunks up :-)
Really liked the tie in with \"Even more of us\" re: the time machine...links like that always add to the sense of realism :-)
Bit worried about the scar thing on Trunks\' bonding mark...that should have vanished when the timelime was altered.
\"...but Goten would probably love to use the hyperbola thinainsainst him. Draw him dirty little pictures.\"
LOL! Got a point there :-)
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter 4
“Look, Trunks,” was what his mate said, “I made you some hyperbolas!”
LOL! Poor Trunks...he is so going to fail math :-)
Oh dear, things are starting to look very worrisome. Trunks is still feeling a bit uncomfortable around Bardock, and he\'s now starting to remember that Goten had died, although thankfully, he doesn\'t realise at this point that it\'s memories.
I\'m very curious as to what\'s up with Gogeta, why none of his siblings seem to want to visit him...so strange when you consider how close they all were as cubs. I\'m also wondering whergetageta is staying and why he is not at home with his family...I\'d lay money on the fact that it\'s something to do with that allergic reaction...can\'t wait to find out what it\'s all about.
Hey, got to meet Vegeta and Goku\'s youngest. Vegita and Kakarot :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"Thanks to Getarian for the Hyperbolas.\"
Pleasure! Got a kick out of seeing it mentioned :-)
“Look, Trunks,” was what his mate said, “I made you some hyperbolas!”
LOL! Poor Trunks...he is so going to fail math :-)
Oh dear, things are starting to look very worrisome. Trunks is still feeling a bit uncomfortable around Bardock, and he\'s now starting to remember that Goten had died, although thankfully, he doesn\'t realise at this point that it\'s memories.
I\'m very curious as to what\'s up with Gogeta, why none of his siblings seem to want to visit him...so strange when you consider how close they all were as cubs. I\'m also wondering whergetageta is staying and why he is not at home with his family...I\'d lay money on the fact that it\'s something to do with that allergic reaction...can\'t wait to find out what it\'s all about.
Hey, got to meet Vegeta and Goku\'s youngest. Vegita and Kakarot :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
\"Thanks to Getarian for the Hyperbolas.\"
Pleasure! Got a kick out of seeing it mentioned :-)