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hey! i\'m not a yaoi fan but i have to say this is a good story! thanks for being you and can\'t wait to see the next chap

Anolea

Enjoyed the opening paragraphs. Trunks\' little round of self-pitying thoughts were extremely amusing. I loved his semi-vindictive thought re: his hungry mate:

\"Oh, how he wanted to just tell the chibi to go feed his fucking self.\" LOL!

Yes! Vegeta is here! Sexy, shirtless Vegeta...Pure joy :-)

\"He looked at Trunks, gave him that smile that meant Vegeta had absolutely no sympathy for him,\"

Oh, I can so picture this scene :-)

\"“Shut up,” he said. Not that his father said anything.\"

LOL! Pouty Trunks is fun...I like this new aspect to his personality :-)

Really enjoyed the kitchen scene between father and son. A regular conversation about school, a slightly mocking Vegeta and a distantly, defensive Trunks all wrapped up in an early morning atmosphere which hinted at a regular family closeness.

Really loved this:
\"(Oh no. He was a sixteen year old male that had to have sex all the time!)\"LOL!LOL! Oh, the hardship ;-)

A bit worrying that Trunks still has the remnants of memory regarding the altered timeline. To feel what he feels in certain situations around his father and to be less close to his oldest brother than he is to his other siblings, the existence of the time machine, the sense that Goku knows something that he\'s not telling...Trunks is no fool and if he continues to ponder on these feelings that he has, I fear that he may trigger a recall...I sincerely hope not...Tension is set...well written!

...And on a lighter note:

\"and how annoyed he was that he was going to have to balance calculus and fucking.\"

LOL! Just think hyperbola Trunks...rising, peaking and descending...could help :-)

Yay...more Vegeta...although, I\'m a bit worried about your response to Jaygoose...definitely fearing for Ga noa now :-(

Now why in the hell would Trunks think that Vegeta would deliver the babies? I do love make up sex though, steamy. *grools slightly*

I thought that I wouldn\'t like this story because of the lackage of Goku and Vegeta but I do like it. It is so sweet. You are good at all those emotions. I have such a problem with doing more than one at a time in my stories. I\'ll have to work on that. I want to be like you when I grow up. ;)

It\'s wierd how traveling through time can ma per person for life, huh? Not that I have ever done it before but I can imagine that it is a lasting experience. I am glad that you addressed that. I like this story. It looks to be a lot different from the others, even though this one also contains pregnant Saiyan males. He. He.

This is the second fic without Vegeta that I am reading...I can\'t believe it! I guess it\'s due to the fact that I love your writing style and this story is all part and parcel of the \"More of us\" universe.

Any likelyhood of a Vegeta cameo? Can\'t hurt to ask :-)

Loved Gotens attitude to school...sort of reflected my own, way back when...although, I grew to regret it and went back and completed my education :-)

ometometry could not possibly be more boring.\"

Oh dear God, I couldn\'t agree more! Poor Goten, how on earth could he concentrate on that shit when he\'s in the middle of his lust cycle. LOL!

Gohan had gone. Learned shit, turned into an egghead. LOL!

Love how Trunks turned up...I love that sense of connection the mated Saiyans share :-)

“Hard to concentrate on centripetal force when you’ve got a stiffy, Goten.”

LOL! Very witty :-)

As usual your lemons are 1st class, but, but, but...no Vegeta...I could cry.

Okay, this is another wonderful little story you have written, and a real treat for the Trunks/Goten fans! I can\'t believe that you\'re writing four stories at once...amazing!

Keep up the good work :-)

Yes, another great fic. Are we gonna get to see more of the other kids too? I hope so. I am a bit curious about how they turned out.

That was SO cute!
I did wonder about those two.
Update, this is getting good!