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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad Yamcha willp thp the baby, but who will be there to help him when he goes into labor and how will he deliver it? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are right there are not that many Yamcha and Vegita pairings. In actuality, I have only read one other. Ienjoenjoying this fic immensely, but I am confused at how Yamcja can get pregnant. I assume that you will explain that in latter chapters. Also will Vegita continue to be a bastard towards Yamcha and when Yamcha finds out he is pregnant will he tell our favorite Saiyan Prince. One more thing can you give some sort of explaination to why Yamcha is basicly ignored by his friends. These questions and many more are awaiting for next time on Dragon Ball Z. ;D
Zani
Zani
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I agree. There is just not enough Yamcha and Vegeta pairings. I am a closet Yamcha fan. It all started with Dragonball. I really wish he wasn\'t such an ass in DBZ though. He could have been great. *Sigh* Anyway, I can\'t wait to see more of this. It\'s really good.
So when is Yamcha gonna find out he\'s gonna be a da...er...mommy?
So when is Yamcha gonna find out he\'s gonna be a da...er...mommy?
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@.@
First, I like that you used V/Y, as they\'re one of my fave pairings. I just... don\'t understand why you characterized them as you did. And why is Yamcha pregnant? Granted, there was a warning of MPreg, but... Yamcha is human. He has no tail scar, he has no saiyajin blood... *doesn\'t understand* And you made Vegeta incredably mean, and not much else. Aside from the issue of characterization, though, I think this is a very well written piece.
And I must commend you for your description of the rape. For Veg, it -wasn\'t- about sex, it was about power, just as is true for rape in general. You portrayed the horror of it well, and you continued with the trauma from it, not letting Yamcha just... brush it under the rug. He\'s trying to hide it while also waiting for the others to find out, which is true in RL. Too bad Yamcha didn\'t go to the hospital afterwards, as a rape survivors should (though, just as in the fic, RL survivors tend to not do that, afraid of the stigma associated with being a victim of rape)
Anyway, it\'s a very well written fic. Good job.
First, I like that you used V/Y, as they\'re one of my fave pairings. I just... don\'t understand why you characterized them as you did. And why is Yamcha pregnant? Granted, there was a warning of MPreg, but... Yamcha is human. He has no tail scar, he has no saiyajin blood... *doesn\'t understand* And you made Vegeta incredably mean, and not much else. Aside from the issue of characterization, though, I think this is a very well written piece.
And I must commend you for your description of the rape. For Veg, it -wasn\'t- about sex, it was about power, just as is true for rape in general. You portrayed the horror of it well, and you continued with the trauma from it, not letting Yamcha just... brush it under the rug. He\'s trying to hide it while also waiting for the others to find out, which is true in RL. Too bad Yamcha didn\'t go to the hospital afterwards, as a rape survivors should (though, just as in the fic, RL survivors tend to not do that, afraid of the stigma associated with being a victim of rape)
Anyway, it\'s a very well written fic. Good job.