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Very nice fic there!
I really like this plot - Vegeta and Yamcha work well here. A pretty sad story, but really good! I like your style of writing too, Good work. Loved the Angst, poor Yamcha failing to commit suicide, that must have been really truamtic - maybe you could have included a bit of his feeling when he slit his wrist tho; seemed he didn\'t acknowledge it, but it was good!
Wasn\'t completely sure about what Vegeta meant when he said the last thing in chapter 2; Dont understand that at all if its suppost to show any romance - oh well, maybe you can explain to me ;)
Keep up good work, I\'ll be looking forward to an update!

Omfg. You best be updating this. O__O The best damn DBZ fic I\'ve read in a while. And it\'s a pair I can never find, too! XD Double points! I thought I was the only person interested in this pair. >_> Apparently not! Well done!

Poor Yamcha! I feel so bad for him! Awaiting the next chapter!!

*Cries....wails....sniffs and wipes eyes* Oh man! The first ever story on this site to make me cry so hard!! And I\'m glad it was a Y/V fic....those fics are so rare these days....I thought they way you had Pa\'ur leave Yam-chan because of all the stress brilliant!! Anyother reason for Yam-chan to get all angsty. I just hope Vegeta realizes what he\'s doing to Yam-chan is horrilble and that he develops emotions for him soon.....in a complicated angsty-filled plot twist of course.

I\'m back. Seems like you got a fan. I\'m so proud, I actually read this chapter without getting cringey. (Don\'t know if it\'s a real word, don\'t care.) Anyway I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.

Nice chap,
but I am gonna have to say I really hate Puar. I think it is so stupid that she wouldn\'t help him, it\'s not his fault he got raped. She should at least tell someone. I feel really bad for Yamcha and I do hope things get better for him very soon. I really like the fic, and I like where you ended it. Now I\'m wondering like Yamcha what did Vegeta mean by that last sentence he spas has he left the room.
update soon

I really love Vegeta/Yamcha pairings, and they are so rare! Well this seems prettty good so far, except I am very weary of rape, but you said eventual romance so I will keep on reading.
Update soon!

I don\'t think that it was a crappy ending. I liked this chapter. I still am waiting to be amazed. I don\'t see how this is going to be a romance. But I am hoping for one.

I can\'t believe Pu\'ar left Yamcha like that. That was so cruel! *Sigh* Now all he has is that deranged sex crazed maniac Vegeta...Hmm...

Okay I\'m not really a fan rape fics, but the summary said V/Y, and I am a fan of those. So I guess more rape and eventual romance right?

Yay! Another Yamcha and Vegeta fic. I wish that it started out a little more romatic though, But I guess u know what you\'re doing.