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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful udates! I like the t-shirt statements that you have throughout the story! They are hillarious!
Since the superstore prank, for some reason I picture Trunks pullingrankrank/surprise/tease on Goten.
Hmmmm. Example: Trunks sneaksind ind Goten and whacks him with his tail, smirks and takes off
running. Goten appears in front of Trunks and asks \"How did you get your tail back without the formula?
I havn\'t made it yet.\" Trunks: \"Wouldn\'t you like to know?\" wags tail, takes mini spraycan of pheromones
from behind back sprays a little in Goten\'s face and vanishes into thin air. Goten: Look of shock on face.
\"Tail Tharapy\" anyone? LOL
Since the superstore prank, for some reason I picture Trunks pullingrankrank/surprise/tease on Goten.
Hmmmm. Example: Trunks sneaksind ind Goten and whacks him with his tail, smirks and takes off
running. Goten appears in front of Trunks and asks \"How did you get your tail back without the formula?
I havn\'t made it yet.\" Trunks: \"Wouldn\'t you like to know?\" wags tail, takes mini spraycan of pheromones
from behind back sprays a little in Goten\'s face and vanishes into thin air. Goten: Look of shock on face.
\"Tail Tharapy\" anyone? LOL
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In the example of my last post. I forgot to say that Goten only thinks that he didn\'t drink the formula.
Tr is is a lot smarter then he appears. At least that\'s what I see in your story.
Congratulations on the new job!
Tr is is a lot smarter then he appears. At least that\'s what I see in your story.
Congratulations on the new job!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really love the way Vegeta is with Trunks:
“Go find him already Demi. I can feel him getting wimpier.”
LOL!
I really love Trunks\' observations. really love sce scene with Vegeta soothing his child whilst Goku was obviously getting the bottle ready and really love this:
\"“Good morning!” Goku said.\"
\"He mumbled something, did not have the energy this early in the morning to be cheery,\"
LOL! Yeah, I\'m not a morning person either. :-)
\"Why? Don’t want to carry my babies?”\"
\"Way. To. Early. He blinked.\"
LOL! So, Goten wants to synthesize the hormone treatment, which Bulma came up with. Rather a lot for poor ol\' Trunks to deal with. Vegeta drinking it by accident and having to deal [ which he did beautifully by the way...with the of of our wonderful Goku :-) ] is one thing, but asking Trunks to make that decision...not going to be easy on him.
\"That was too much to think about, so he did the next best thing and resolutely did not think about it.\"
LOL!
“Do you want your tail back?”
Yeah! Love the Saiyans tails :-)
“Want to be rid of that pesky virginity once and for all?”
Ahhh, this is what Goten meant when he kept calling Trunks, a virgin :-)
Still not quite able to fully get into a non-Vegeta lemon (Vegeta is the only reason I read lemons at all...before him, if there was anything on T.V. that involved nudity I was like...put your damn clothes on...I don\'t want to see it.
I could never get into naked men unless I had a deep passion for them and we were alone...I can\'t believe that the character to break me from this attitude is a frigging anime character...soooo, embarrassing...LOL!) errr, was that TMI? Anyhoo... I do like Goten and Trunks and I wanted to read, so I did it \'skimming style\' and I\'m glad I did...I loved how Trunks felt a bit embarrassed at first...it was kind of sweet :-)
\"Vegeta met his oldest in the kitchen—was starting to think that the twins camped out in there when they had something to say. Stood in the doorway and waited for whatever it was to be said.\"
Love this! Love this family!
“I’m going to go deal with Kane,” his son said, “He isn’t dropping the charges and I’m sick of him.”
Good! This definitely needs to be settled. Love how Vegeta(son) felt like he should at least inform one of his parents before he took action, and love the way Vegeta (mum) silently accepted that his son needs to do this, even though he would have liked to do it himself :-)
Love how Gina wants to call Vegeta, mum...I hope this isn\'t why they argue...I think it\'s so sweet...Vegeta didn\'t say anything...could be shock...LOL! But hopefully he\'s touched by the gesture :-)
Poor Vegeta...everyone is bumping into him...maybe he should take the hint and get out of the damn doorway...LOL! I actually love how you have him very much present, but not actually participating in any of the early morning kitchen mayhem...I can\'t fully express the picture in my head...but it has a, sort of, shambolic quality to it, which feels as though it is seen from Vegeta\'s POV. I liked it :-)
\"Goten had disappeared (bowl of cereal and all.)\"
\"“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU… GET BACK HERE!” And his mate blinked out of existence as well.\"
LOL! Totally love Goku\'s reaction to this bit of news...and loved Vegeta\'s reaction to his mate\'s reaction :-)
Shit...I worried when this day would come. I do love this universe...and yeah, you betch wou would love to see a sequel...I know that it\'s going to be G/T but I\'m hoping that the others will be there as well. I\'m sort of curious about how Trunks will deal with the hormone therapy anyway :-)
“Go find him already Demi. I can feel him getting wimpier.”
LOL!
I really love Trunks\' observations. really love sce scene with Vegeta soothing his child whilst Goku was obviously getting the bottle ready and really love this:
\"“Good morning!” Goku said.\"
\"He mumbled something, did not have the energy this early in the morning to be cheery,\"
LOL! Yeah, I\'m not a morning person either. :-)
\"Why? Don’t want to carry my babies?”\"
\"Way. To. Early. He blinked.\"
LOL! So, Goten wants to synthesize the hormone treatment, which Bulma came up with. Rather a lot for poor ol\' Trunks to deal with. Vegeta drinking it by accident and having to deal [ which he did beautifully by the way...with the of of our wonderful Goku :-) ] is one thing, but asking Trunks to make that decision...not going to be easy on him.
\"That was too much to think about, so he did the next best thing and resolutely did not think about it.\"
LOL!
“Do you want your tail back?”
Yeah! Love the Saiyans tails :-)
“Want to be rid of that pesky virginity once and for all?”
Ahhh, this is what Goten meant when he kept calling Trunks, a virgin :-)
Still not quite able to fully get into a non-Vegeta lemon (Vegeta is the only reason I read lemons at all...before him, if there was anything on T.V. that involved nudity I was like...put your damn clothes on...I don\'t want to see it.
I could never get into naked men unless I had a deep passion for them and we were alone...I can\'t believe that the character to break me from this attitude is a frigging anime character...soooo, embarrassing...LOL!) errr, was that TMI? Anyhoo... I do like Goten and Trunks and I wanted to read, so I did it \'skimming style\' and I\'m glad I did...I loved how Trunks felt a bit embarrassed at first...it was kind of sweet :-)
\"Vegeta met his oldest in the kitchen—was starting to think that the twins camped out in there when they had something to say. Stood in the doorway and waited for whatever it was to be said.\"
Love this! Love this family!
“I’m going to go deal with Kane,” his son said, “He isn’t dropping the charges and I’m sick of him.”
Good! This definitely needs to be settled. Love how Vegeta(son) felt like he should at least inform one of his parents before he took action, and love the way Vegeta (mum) silently accepted that his son needs to do this, even though he would have liked to do it himself :-)
Love how Gina wants to call Vegeta, mum...I hope this isn\'t why they argue...I think it\'s so sweet...Vegeta didn\'t say anything...could be shock...LOL! But hopefully he\'s touched by the gesture :-)
Poor Vegeta...everyone is bumping into him...maybe he should take the hint and get out of the damn doorway...LOL! I actually love how you have him very much present, but not actually participating in any of the early morning kitchen mayhem...I can\'t fully express the picture in my head...but it has a, sort of, shambolic quality to it, which feels as though it is seen from Vegeta\'s POV. I liked it :-)
\"Goten had disappeared (bowl of cereal and all.)\"
\"“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU… GET BACK HERE!” And his mate blinked out of existence as well.\"
LOL! Totally love Goku\'s reaction to this bit of news...and loved Vegeta\'s reaction to his mate\'s reaction :-)
Shit...I worried when this day would come. I do love this universe...and yeah, you betch wou would love to see a sequel...I know that it\'s going to be G/T but I\'m hoping that the others will be there as well. I\'m sort of curious about how Trunks will deal with the hormone therapy anyway :-)
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
server was busy yesterday so I couldn\'t vote. Please keep writing. I am very fond of your stories and don\'t want to lose my daily glimpse into this fun DBZ world.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...so kids is the subject of the day. I would pay to see Trunks preggers. I have never seen that in a fan fic...it would be so cool. Oh, and as you probably already know...I also love my Saiyans with tails.
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A Goten and Trunks lemon! Bless you!
I love how you got what happened with the Truth or dare game. A loverly thing for your parents to hear at breakfast. I like that Gina calls Vegeta \"Mum\", very cute. And yes, there must be a sequel...did you even have to ask?
I love how you got what happened with the Truth or dare game. A loverly thing for your parents to hear at breakfast. I like that Gina calls Vegeta \"Mum\", very cute. And yes, there must be a sequel...did you even have to ask?
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I reallly like your stories a lot! A sequel would be great. Goten finally made a sound enven if it was only a mutter, and his tail was atully touched (gasp!).
I look forward to seeing Trunks tail grow back in sequel. \"Twisted Tails\" Anyone? :-)
I look forward to seeing Trunks tail grow back in sequel. \"Twisted Tails\" Anyone? :-)
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definately another sequal. Just think of Goten as a parent....hahahaha!!!!!!
Plez keep writing...more...more.ore!ore!!!!! c\'\',)
Plez keep writing...more...more.ore!ore!!!!! c\'\',)
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely....
Vegeta smirked. It was the work of his two stupid sons.---LoL he is proud of them. I love this fic it is so great.
otenoten’s idea, doubtlessly because there was chaotic lust in it.-- LoL LoL, of course who else wouave ave chaotic lust...I mean really that phrase alone could describe his personality.
Which meant that if this Kane jerk continued to bother their son, Kakarot was going to step in. (That is, if Vegeta didn’t get there first.)--hehe yeah kick that dude\'s butt!
Knew they would not come back until tomorrow. But he wanted to see them. Felt as if a part of them had been taken away from him and did not like it at all.--That\'s so sad. He wants his sons. I love that, love how that was written. poor Geta...
“Split up and have sex,” Goten replied--rofl of course I should have known that would have been the plan.
Soft and hard, tinged with a sort of sadness when they realized that their twins were not babies anymore.--gosh, there it is again...the sadness that the twins are growing up with mates of their own. Poor Geta and Goku, at least they still have little Bardock. But gosh that makes me so sad that they are both thinking this stuff...
Thank you for the delicious lemon!!!!! Your lemons are always superb!
I think that when anybody messes with our precious saiyajins they instantly become the enemy, in this case it was Mr. Kane. So the crueler you are to him the better. I just love how Goku reacts everytime he hears about Mr. Kane and how he always has to mention his age. Awww poor Goku...he knows he is sexy! he is right up there with Vegeta, but I guess it\'s nicehearhear it sometimes.
I am totally with you about ppl and their phobias and I too try my hardest to not be prejudiced. Although yesterday with my interenet...I was losing faith in technology...not really just patience but all is well now, and my comp is normal. *cheers*
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Vegeta smirked. It was the work of his two stupid sons.---LoL he is proud of them. I love this fic it is so great.
otenoten’s idea, doubtlessly because there was chaotic lust in it.-- LoL LoL, of course who else wouave ave chaotic lust...I mean really that phrase alone could describe his personality.
Which meant that if this Kane jerk continued to bother their son, Kakarot was going to step in. (That is, if Vegeta didn’t get there first.)--hehe yeah kick that dude\'s butt!
Knew they would not come back until tomorrow. But he wanted to see them. Felt as if a part of them had been taken away from him and did not like it at all.--That\'s so sad. He wants his sons. I love that, love how that was written. poor Geta...
“Split up and have sex,” Goten replied--rofl of course I should have known that would have been the plan.
Soft and hard, tinged with a sort of sadness when they realized that their twins were not babies anymore.--gosh, there it is again...the sadness that the twins are growing up with mates of their own. Poor Geta and Goku, at least they still have little Bardock. But gosh that makes me so sad that they are both thinking this stuff...
Thank you for the delicious lemon!!!!! Your lemons are always superb!
I think that when anybody messes with our precious saiyajins they instantly become the enemy, in this case it was Mr. Kane. So the crueler you are to him the better. I just love how Goku reacts everytime he hears about Mr. Kane and how he always has to mention his age. Awww poor Goku...he knows he is sexy! he is right up there with Vegeta, but I guess it\'s nicehearhear it sometimes.
I am totally with you about ppl and their phobias and I too try my hardest to not be prejudiced. Although yesterday with my interenet...I was losing faith in technology...not really just patience but all is well now, and my comp is normal. *cheers*
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Very good chappie!
Tried to imagine just where the hell his mate was if he wasn’t trying to molest him for his morning sex.--rofl. If I was Trunks I would wonder than too, and i would also wonder if the world had ended.
“I don’t know. Just wanted to see if I could do it. Why? Don’t want to carry my babies?”--awww he is trying to get his mate preggy...that\'s so sweet.
“Are you ever going to take anything out of your pockets?”--LoL I would like to see that happen...
No. Didn’t think he’d make it through his hentai mate’s descriptions.--LoL I love Trunks, he is so cute!
“Making out with ‘Geta,” Gina said, “When they were like twelve.”--*dies* I need to know more!!!!
“I would be interested in seeing it.”--Of course that would be interesting to see, well in my case read,but you know what I mean...
That stopped Goku dead in his tracks, and Vegeta had to press a hand to his mouth to keep from bursting out in laughter at the way his mate when completely still, --rofl poor Goku. I love how Vegeta seems to take everything so easily and Goku is the one who is always flipping out and stuff.
loved those little end notes...and Joe too...LoL
You know I think I can keep being mean to him.---hehe I thought you could.
I love this ficcie, why must all good things come to an end? Why? *sobs*
Thank you for the wonderful and yummy Goten and Trunks lemon and the excellent chapter!
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Tried to imagine just where the hell his mate was if he wasn’t trying to molest him for his morning sex.--rofl. If I was Trunks I would wonder than too, and i would also wonder if the world had ended.
“I don’t know. Just wanted to see if I could do it. Why? Don’t want to carry my babies?”--awww he is trying to get his mate preggy...that\'s so sweet.
“Are you ever going to take anything out of your pockets?”--LoL I would like to see that happen...
No. Didn’t think he’d make it through his hentai mate’s descriptions.--LoL I love Trunks, he is so cute!
“Making out with ‘Geta,” Gina said, “When they were like twelve.”--*dies* I need to know more!!!!
“I would be interested in seeing it.”--Of course that would be interesting to see, well in my case read,but you know what I mean...
That stopped Goku dead in his tracks, and Vegeta had to press a hand to his mouth to keep from bursting out in laughter at the way his mate when completely still, --rofl poor Goku. I love how Vegeta seems to take everything so easily and Goku is the one who is always flipping out and stuff.
loved those little end notes...and Joe too...LoL
You know I think I can keep being mean to him.---hehe I thought you could.
I love this ficcie, why must all good things come to an end? Why? *sobs*
Thank you for the wonderful and yummy Goten and Trunks lemon and the excellent chapter!
^.*
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