schedule
March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chap!
But then, Goten wouldn’t care if a semi went through their house with forty naked dancing cheerleaders screaming his name in ecstasy. --rofl!!! That is so funny. Just imagining tha hil hilarious! *shakes head* you\'re so crazy!
And his mate actually CHOKED. Mr. I want to fuck you. Choked. Blushed.---awww how cute
Closed his eyes, because they were crossing and giving him double vision.--LoL, yeah if I was having sex with Vegeta that would happen to me too.
“He better not be talking about your asshole,” Goten said, “The only ass he needs to be concerned about is mine and his own.”--omg rofl...ths whole paragraph of conversation had me dying. I made my brother read it and he was cracking up! My poor brother, I always make him read fics with me....
Great chapter with a very yummy lemon. Goku cracks me up..he just wanted sex..plain ole sex no foreplay and didn\'t care whether he was on bottom or top... you just gotta love that guy. Oh and I love how he spared 2 seconds of brain power to think of how nice his life was.
You know I don\'t remember how I learned of fanfiction...I must have stumbled across it one day (when I was looking up DBZ stuff) and became obsessed or something. I do remember reading yaoi for the first time, and I was like ewww gross (but in the back of my head I was very curious about it)...then I read it the next day and I was like..hey this isn\'t so bad. And now I can dream of nothing else...but Vegeta and Goku...
Did your friend really decide fanfics are evil? My friend thinks Dragonball Z is evil...*sighs* Oh well what can I do...I love DBZ, and I ain\'t gonna stop!
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But then, Goten wouldn’t care if a semi went through their house with forty naked dancing cheerleaders screaming his name in ecstasy. --rofl!!! That is so funny. Just imagining tha hil hilarious! *shakes head* you\'re so crazy!
And his mate actually CHOKED. Mr. I want to fuck you. Choked. Blushed.---awww how cute
Closed his eyes, because they were crossing and giving him double vision.--LoL, yeah if I was having sex with Vegeta that would happen to me too.
“He better not be talking about your asshole,” Goten said, “The only ass he needs to be concerned about is mine and his own.”--omg rofl...ths whole paragraph of conversation had me dying. I made my brother read it and he was cracking up! My poor brother, I always make him read fics with me....
Great chapter with a very yummy lemon. Goku cracks me up..he just wanted sex..plain ole sex no foreplay and didn\'t care whether he was on bottom or top... you just gotta love that guy. Oh and I love how he spared 2 seconds of brain power to think of how nice his life was.
You know I don\'t remember how I learned of fanfiction...I must have stumbled across it one day (when I was looking up DBZ stuff) and became obsessed or something. I do remember reading yaoi for the first time, and I was like ewww gross (but in the back of my head I was very curious about it)...then I read it the next day and I was like..hey this isn\'t so bad. And now I can dream of nothing else...but Vegeta and Goku...
Did your friend really decide fanfics are evil? My friend thinks Dragonball Z is evil...*sighs* Oh well what can I do...I love DBZ, and I ain\'t gonna stop!
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schedule
March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I think you did an awesome job with it. It made perfect sense under the circumstances. Now they are all a nice happy little family. Yay!
schedule
March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The little interlude was great. I am starting to like Gina more and more.
schedule
March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vegeta what a time for his little brother to arrive. LOL!
Really happy to see the arrival of baby Bardock...personally I would have loved another birthing scene, but I understand completely what you meant about already having written enough...after all, it\'s not everyone\'s cup of tea, and you wrote the afterwards scene very nicely...I loved this:
\"Got to see their mother looking at their whimpery little baby brother. (So cute that it was actually a bit sickening.)\"
LOL! Ahh, I love cute Vegeta :-)
\"Dad came back (still mumbling about gross things and how he always got stuck doing the nasty crap)\"
LOL! Poor ol\' Goku...and he doesn\'t even get to have any sex as compensation. This\'ll teach him to work at getting Vegeta pregnant. :-)
Young Vegeta singing to Bardock. I\'m having a hard time trying to picture this, yet somehow, it seems so right :-)
I loved the night kitchen scene, with Vegeta sitting and feeding Bardock, when Young Vegeta came home and sat with him for a while. It was nicely done :-)
Really loved the tie-in scene with the end of \"Cross Eyed\" Getting to see it from Vegeta and Goku\'s perspective this time really rounded that whole scene out. Loved it!
Yes! I knew Vegeta would like Gina...okay, in truth, I was a little worried...but mainly not. :-)
Looking forward to Gina\'s story of how she and Vegeta met :-)
Loved the end dialogue :-)
Thanks for explaining about the time machine, and how Bulma knew...I must confess, I didn\'t think of that...know I should have...but I didn\'t :-)
Really happy to see the arrival of baby Bardock...personally I would have loved another birthing scene, but I understand completely what you meant about already having written enough...after all, it\'s not everyone\'s cup of tea, and you wrote the afterwards scene very nicely...I loved this:
\"Got to see their mother looking at their whimpery little baby brother. (So cute that it was actually a bit sickening.)\"
LOL! Ahh, I love cute Vegeta :-)
\"Dad came back (still mumbling about gross things and how he always got stuck doing the nasty crap)\"
LOL! Poor ol\' Goku...and he doesn\'t even get to have any sex as compensation. This\'ll teach him to work at getting Vegeta pregnant. :-)
Young Vegeta singing to Bardock. I\'m having a hard time trying to picture this, yet somehow, it seems so right :-)
I loved the night kitchen scene, with Vegeta sitting and feeding Bardock, when Young Vegeta came home and sat with him for a while. It was nicely done :-)
Really loved the tie-in scene with the end of \"Cross Eyed\" Getting to see it from Vegeta and Goku\'s perspective this time really rounded that whole scene out. Loved it!
Yes! I knew Vegeta would like Gina...okay, in truth, I was a little worried...but mainly not. :-)
Looking forward to Gina\'s story of how she and Vegeta met :-)
Loved the end dialogue :-)
Thanks for explaining about the time machine, and how Bulma knew...I must confess, I didn\'t think of that...know I should have...but I didn\'t :-)
schedule
March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter
He. Was. Going. To. Kill. Goten. Messily. --LoL poor Geta getting interruppted during his great sex! I would be mad too.
That kid had better be pretty fucking spectacular.--rofl, oh gawd that is so mean. Of course that kid is spectacular it\'s Vegeta and Goku\'s!
Pulling his pants on was made difficult by the fact that his two hands were constantly tapping against each other. ---rofl that would a hilarious sight to see.
Dad came back (still mumbling about gross things and how he always got stuck doing the nasty crap) with a wash clothe and wiped their mother’s face clean. ---LoL that is so Goku, I loved that
It took an eternity (actually it was about 45 seconds) --LoL I know how that feels
“Hi Gina,” Kakarot said. Completely undisturbed that his sons were both mated. “How are you today?” ---rofl, I can\'t believe Goku sometimes. I love how easy going and seemingly (but don\'t think he really is) oblivious he can be.
I loved this it was just great and very funny!
Goten and Vegeta are just a delight to read about, I love\'m!
and no I did not finish my report, I went to bed...eh, I don\'t care. I just gave my professor the 12 pages I wrote. and now I am in the library...once again reading your fics...
*points at you* See you\'re just as bad as me, not writing your reports so you can write fanfic! *shakes head* What have we become?
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He. Was. Going. To. Kill. Goten. Messily. --LoL poor Geta getting interruppted during his great sex! I would be mad too.
That kid had better be pretty fucking spectacular.--rofl, oh gawd that is so mean. Of course that kid is spectacular it\'s Vegeta and Goku\'s!
Pulling his pants on was made difficult by the fact that his two hands were constantly tapping against each other. ---rofl that would a hilarious sight to see.
Dad came back (still mumbling about gross things and how he always got stuck doing the nasty crap) with a wash clothe and wiped their mother’s face clean. ---LoL that is so Goku, I loved that
It took an eternity (actually it was about 45 seconds) --LoL I know how that feels
“Hi Gina,” Kakarot said. Completely undisturbed that his sons were both mated. “How are you today?” ---rofl, I can\'t believe Goku sometimes. I love how easy going and seemingly (but don\'t think he really is) oblivious he can be.
I loved this it was just great and very funny!
Goten and Vegeta are just a delight to read about, I love\'m!
and no I did not finish my report, I went to bed...eh, I don\'t care. I just gave my professor the 12 pages I wrote. and now I am in the library...once again reading your fics...
*points at you* See you\'re just as bad as me, not writing your reports so you can write fanfic! *shakes head* What have we become?
^.*
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schedule
March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter!
I like Vegeta and Gina they a cua cute little co........
A whole lot of energy that wasn’t getting a focus and Goku loved his son, but if this went on for very much longer he was going to toss Goten through a mountain and leave him there.--rofl! I loved that
Considered what would happen if he didn’t bring breakfast.---hehe, that would be really mean if he didn\'t get breakfast. I thought this line was great it madelauglaugh to think Goku would even consider such a thing.
“Right. You’re right.shoushould have been more attentive to the customer and I wasn’t. I failed to uphold the level of conduct and all that bullshit. And I quit.”---rofl she has an attitude! sheesh, I sometimes wonder if she is part saiyajin.
Because Goku would kill them if they even so much as thought about trying to find out.---@_@ LoL Goku is so cute, I loved everything he was thinking during this part. You make the sweetest and most loving relationships.
yeah I some sleep...but now I am back at square one and I am as tired as ever! I had to write this crappy 15 report -_- I am still doing it...only on page 12. Oh well...I lied I am not writing it anymore, I stopped to come read your fics because they make me happy ^.^ So thanks for a wonderful chapter that kept me highly entertained.
woo hoo and Time Machine fun!!!!! (I love Trunks too!!!)
^.*
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I like Vegeta and Gina they a cua cute little co........
A whole lot of energy that wasn’t getting a focus and Goku loved his son, but if this went on for very much longer he was going to toss Goten through a mountain and leave him there.--rofl! I loved that
Considered what would happen if he didn’t bring breakfast.---hehe, that would be really mean if he didn\'t get breakfast. I thought this line was great it madelauglaugh to think Goku would even consider such a thing.
“Right. You’re right.shoushould have been more attentive to the customer and I wasn’t. I failed to uphold the level of conduct and all that bullshit. And I quit.”---rofl she has an attitude! sheesh, I sometimes wonder if she is part saiyajin.
Because Goku would kill them if they even so much as thought about trying to find out.---@_@ LoL Goku is so cute, I loved everything he was thinking during this part. You make the sweetest and most loving relationships.
yeah I some sleep...but now I am back at square one and I am as tired as ever! I had to write this crappy 15 report -_- I am still doing it...only on page 12. Oh well...I lied I am not writing it anymore, I stopped to come read your fics because they make me happy ^.^ So thanks for a wonderful chapter that kept me highly entertained.
woo hoo and Time Machine fun!!!!! (I love Trunks too!!!)
^.*
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schedule
March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it\'s drawing closer now...almost time for the twins to start their journey...
\"...But sheesh, you’d think that the Almighty Vegeta, son of the Great Vegeta, would just say he wanted to go instead of this mumbling shit.\"
LOL! That\'s never going to happen any time soon :-)
Simply love the way Goku is when he\'s watching Vegeta sleep [and waiting for him to wake up ] :-)
\"...was nestled inside his Mother’s warm body. (Which, sadly, Goku was not.)\"
LOL!
\"...he had the sneaking feeling that if he woke up his mate before his mate was good and ready to be awake he was going to end up with a face full of ‘fuck you’ and a knee to the unmentionables.\"
ROTFL! Loved this! Can easily see this happening :-) I wonder if this is instinctual knowledge of his mate, or if Goku has received this type of response before...he can be just a teensy bit impatient when he\'s waiting for his morning nookie. LOL!
\"Bulma told him that Goten had fixed it,...\"
Is this open knowledge now, or is Goten not as crafty as he thought he was? :-)
\"...but Vegeta said that their children, while he loved them, were idiots and could not possibly understand what they were doing.\"
LOL! I see that Vegeta has the same faith in his offspring that most parents have. :-)
Poor ol\' Goku...waiting all that time for Vegeta to wake up and then he has to go and fix breakfast...LOL!
\"“Telling my mom about you would guarentee death, Gina,” Vegeta replied.\"
LOL! He\'s not going to react that badly is he?
“Right. You’re right. I should have been more attentive to the customer and I wasn’t. I failed to uphold the level of conduct and all that bullshit. And I quit.”
LOL! See...I\'m sure that she and Vegeta will get on like a house on fire :-)
I think I\'ve said this a million times before and you\'ll probably hear it a million times more...but I love your lemons! :-)
“I want Ice cream,” is what Vegeta said. “Strawberry ice cream.”
Oh, this was just so damn irresistibly cute...I bet Goku is a puddle on the floor...either that, or he\'s really pissed off that he has to trudge back down to the kitchen again :-)
Yeah! Looking forward to the birth :-)
Loved the dialogue at the end :-)
\"Gina finding out about the Saiyans… I bet that’ll come out when Lil’Geta finally tells his parents. So will how they met too.\"
Good. Looking forward to this. Should hopefully be fun :-)
\"...And meanie Goku chuckling at him; but I think he made up for it.\"
He certainly did :-) I loved the idea of Vegeta bumping his head...it\'s realistic and funny :-)
\"...But he doesn’t seem to really care that he got killed.\"
I know...sigh...hopefully Trunks will change that attitude :-)
\"...But sheesh, you’d think that the Almighty Vegeta, son of the Great Vegeta, would just say he wanted to go instead of this mumbling shit.\"
LOL! That\'s never going to happen any time soon :-)
Simply love the way Goku is when he\'s watching Vegeta sleep [and waiting for him to wake up ] :-)
\"...was nestled inside his Mother’s warm body. (Which, sadly, Goku was not.)\"
LOL!
\"...he had the sneaking feeling that if he woke up his mate before his mate was good and ready to be awake he was going to end up with a face full of ‘fuck you’ and a knee to the unmentionables.\"
ROTFL! Loved this! Can easily see this happening :-) I wonder if this is instinctual knowledge of his mate, or if Goku has received this type of response before...he can be just a teensy bit impatient when he\'s waiting for his morning nookie. LOL!
\"Bulma told him that Goten had fixed it,...\"
Is this open knowledge now, or is Goten not as crafty as he thought he was? :-)
\"...but Vegeta said that their children, while he loved them, were idiots and could not possibly understand what they were doing.\"
LOL! I see that Vegeta has the same faith in his offspring that most parents have. :-)
Poor ol\' Goku...waiting all that time for Vegeta to wake up and then he has to go and fix breakfast...LOL!
\"“Telling my mom about you would guarentee death, Gina,” Vegeta replied.\"
LOL! He\'s not going to react that badly is he?
“Right. You’re right. I should have been more attentive to the customer and I wasn’t. I failed to uphold the level of conduct and all that bullshit. And I quit.”
LOL! See...I\'m sure that she and Vegeta will get on like a house on fire :-)
I think I\'ve said this a million times before and you\'ll probably hear it a million times more...but I love your lemons! :-)
“I want Ice cream,” is what Vegeta said. “Strawberry ice cream.”
Oh, this was just so damn irresistibly cute...I bet Goku is a puddle on the floor...either that, or he\'s really pissed off that he has to trudge back down to the kitchen again :-)
Yeah! Looking forward to the birth :-)
Loved the dialogue at the end :-)
\"Gina finding out about the Saiyans… I bet that’ll come out when Lil’Geta finally tells his parents. So will how they met too.\"
Good. Looking forward to this. Should hopefully be fun :-)
\"...And meanie Goku chuckling at him; but I think he made up for it.\"
He certainly did :-) I loved the idea of Vegeta bumping his head...it\'s realistic and funny :-)
\"...But he doesn’t seem to really care that he got killed.\"
I know...sigh...hopefully Trunks will change that attitude :-)
schedule
March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter!
Really like Gina! She\'s good with young Vegeta.
“Poor baby.” She said. (Didn’t really care.) Picked up another puppy and rubbed its little back. “Cleaning the whole big bad house.”
LOL! Loved this!
Loved how Gina just turned the conversation around to the currently pregnant Vegeta, whilst young Vegeta\'s mind was still on the puppies and housework...pretty much how real life conversations can suddenly make sharp turns...nice input :-)
Loved this:
\"A snort. “I do have a squalling baby brother. His name is Goten.”\"
ROTFL! Wonderful answer. LOL Everything I would expect from young Vegeta :-)
\"He was stronger, but she was the one that held the real power here.\"
*cle* le* Oh yeah! Really love this girl...the easy way she is about the Saiyans, the fact that Vegeta\'s mom is a man and this is all perfectly normal for her (would lto hto have seen her reaction when she first learned of the Saiyans) really love the fact that she is interested enough in the family to show curiosity/concern over the fact that Vegeta hasn\'t given birth yet...I look forward to the time when she is officially introduced to the family. :-)
Always ready for some G/V lemon :-)
\"Hands opened his thighs, a thumb pressed into him, and he jerked his head back, knocked his skull into the stone and as he saw stars from that movement of brilliance, he heard his mate chuckle and felt him push into him.\"
LOL! Vegeta can be such an idiot at times...LOL! I can just picture him throwing his head back in ecstatic need and clunking his head against the rocky surface behind ..Go..Goku chuckling at him wouldn\'t have helped...LOL, I love these two together :-)
\"...Whimpered and moaned and let his power level rise. That, instinctively, triggered Kakarot’s own power, and he got harder, moved faster, and Vegeta grinned.\"
(*chuckle*) Know thy mate :-) Vegeta is a cunning, sexy little bastard :-)
\"Felt the skin on his back get torn from the little sharp edges of the stone behind him, dragged his fingernails down Kakarot’s back to share that little annoyance.\"
LOL! Yes, I can definitely see Vegeta reacting this way :-)
Loved the end part of their lovemaking very much - full of emotion - wonderful :-)
Another superb lemon!
\"(At one point his parents had fought them every time they did something incredibly stupid, but after he and ‘Geta because Super Saiyans, they stopped dothatthat and settled on maid duty for misbehaving.) Stupid parents.\"
LOL! God I love Goten!
\"...He was not a fucking eight ball. “I don’t know, why is he?”\"
LOL! I love this. :-)
Goten can be such a bastard to Vegeta...I can\'t believe he allowed the Gallick Gun to hit him, although I don\'t think he realised that it was going to kill him...still, poor Veg I\' I\'m surprised he\'s not a head case with Goten for a twin. :-)
“Mom’s only carrying one baby now. It’ll probably take twice as long to be born.”
Ah Gods, poor preggie Vegeta! If I was told near the end of my pregnancy that I had a further four months to wait, I would have had a fit.
Enjoyed this chapter very much :-)
Gods, you wrote this on just two hours of sleep in over 36 hrs. I\'m stunned and more than impressed...now go get some sleep, woman :-)
Really like Gina! She\'s good with young Vegeta.
“Poor baby.” She said. (Didn’t really care.) Picked up another puppy and rubbed its little back. “Cleaning the whole big bad house.”
LOL! Loved this!
Loved how Gina just turned the conversation around to the currently pregnant Vegeta, whilst young Vegeta\'s mind was still on the puppies and housework...pretty much how real life conversations can suddenly make sharp turns...nice input :-)
Loved this:
\"A snort. “I do have a squalling baby brother. His name is Goten.”\"
ROTFL! Wonderful answer. LOL Everything I would expect from young Vegeta :-)
\"He was stronger, but she was the one that held the real power here.\"
*cle* le* Oh yeah! Really love this girl...the easy way she is about the Saiyans, the fact that Vegeta\'s mom is a man and this is all perfectly normal for her (would lto hto have seen her reaction when she first learned of the Saiyans) really love the fact that she is interested enough in the family to show curiosity/concern over the fact that Vegeta hasn\'t given birth yet...I look forward to the time when she is officially introduced to the family. :-)
Always ready for some G/V lemon :-)
\"Hands opened his thighs, a thumb pressed into him, and he jerked his head back, knocked his skull into the stone and as he saw stars from that movement of brilliance, he heard his mate chuckle and felt him push into him.\"
LOL! Vegeta can be such an idiot at times...LOL! I can just picture him throwing his head back in ecstatic need and clunking his head against the rocky surface behind ..Go..Goku chuckling at him wouldn\'t have helped...LOL, I love these two together :-)
\"...Whimpered and moaned and let his power level rise. That, instinctively, triggered Kakarot’s own power, and he got harder, moved faster, and Vegeta grinned.\"
(*chuckle*) Know thy mate :-) Vegeta is a cunning, sexy little bastard :-)
\"Felt the skin on his back get torn from the little sharp edges of the stone behind him, dragged his fingernails down Kakarot’s back to share that little annoyance.\"
LOL! Yes, I can definitely see Vegeta reacting this way :-)
Loved the end part of their lovemaking very much - full of emotion - wonderful :-)
Another superb lemon!
\"(At one point his parents had fought them every time they did something incredibly stupid, but after he and ‘Geta because Super Saiyans, they stopped dothatthat and settled on maid duty for misbehaving.) Stupid parents.\"
LOL! God I love Goten!
\"...He was not a fucking eight ball. “I don’t know, why is he?”\"
LOL! I love this. :-)
Goten can be such a bastard to Vegeta...I can\'t believe he allowed the Gallick Gun to hit him, although I don\'t think he realised that it was going to kill him...still, poor Veg I\' I\'m surprised he\'s not a head case with Goten for a twin. :-)
“Mom’s only carrying one baby now. It’ll probably take twice as long to be born.”
Ah Gods, poor preggie Vegeta! If I was told near the end of my pregnancy that I had a further four months to wait, I would have had a fit.
Enjoyed this chapter very much :-)
Gods, you wrote this on just two hours of sleep in over 36 hrs. I\'m stunned and more than impressed...now go get some sleep, woman :-)
schedule
March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
The twins are hilarious and the lemon was fantastic! You write the most juicy lemons!!!! YUM! Woo HOO I can\'t wait for Trunks to appear! YAY TRUNKS!!!! As always it was wonderful!
I am so sorry for the short review...but I am soooo tired -_- Oh and I hope you get your much needed rest, I know you need it badly! After I read your other ficcie I will be off to dreamland myself....
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The twins are hilarious and the lemon was fantastic! You write the most juicy lemons!!!! YUM! Woo HOO I can\'t wait for Trunks to appear! YAY TRUNKS!!!! As always it was wonderful!
I am so sorry for the short review...but I am soooo tired -_- Oh and I hope you get your much needed rest, I know you need it badly! After I read your other ficcie I will be off to dreamland myself....
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schedule
March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I don\'t mind the skips in the plot at all. Don\'t mind my not so entertaining review. I amtiontioning on a ridculous lack of sleep myself. Damned college.
I must address this line though: \"Because quite honestly, it was getting to the point where masturbation was better than sex, and that was just a travesty.\"
H hav have to agree with Goten on that one. Anyway, fantastic chapter and now I am on to the next one. PS: Also thought your explaination for why Vegeta was still preggers was genius.
I must address this line though: \"Because quite honestly, it was getting to the point where masturbation was better than sex, and that was just a travesty.\"
H hav have to agree with Goten on that one. Anyway, fantastic chapter and now I am on to the next one. PS: Also thought your explaination for why Vegeta was still preggers was genius.