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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter following Lemony Interlude:
Gotta love that Goten!
\"He looked down at his shirt that read: Guaranteed Orgasm. Considered putting on a lab jacket to cover it up, and then decided that he didn’t want to.\"
I do love his attitude :-)
\"He spent a few inconsequential moments to hope like hell that the man was the old-lady’s son, because if he was banging he hae had so better be getting a shitload of cash out of it.\"
LOL! He\'s a rotten sod at times, but he makes me laugh :-)
“Then I don’t see the big deal,” Ah, here came the rationale behind all of Kakarot’s thoughts: “It was just sex.”
LOL! I d exd expect no less from Kakarot...ah, and I remember when he was such a naive young soul as well...until that wickedly sexy Vegeta corrupted him...Yeah!
Loved the end scenes in the kitchen with Vegeta, Kakarot, and Vegeta...with Goten flitting in and out. As amazing as it sounds, it all sounded so very domesticated and family like...the discussions admittedly, are nothing like the boring shit I had to listen to as a youngster, but the atmosphere is similar. I love how writwrite these scenes :-)
Wow...quite a short review, but I sorta skipped over the Goten lemon, not really my cup of tea, but I\'m certainly not complaining...I very much enjoyed the lemony interlude with G/V so I\'m happy...thanks again for that :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Gotta love that Goten!
\"He looked down at his shirt that read: Guaranteed Orgasm. Considered putting on a lab jacket to cover it up, and then decided that he didn’t want to.\"
I do love his attitude :-)
\"He spent a few inconsequential moments to hope like hell that the man was the old-lady’s son, because if he was banging he hae had so better be getting a shitload of cash out of it.\"
LOL! He\'s a rotten sod at times, but he makes me laugh :-)
“Then I don’t see the big deal,” Ah, here came the rationale behind all of Kakarot’s thoughts: “It was just sex.”
LOL! I d exd expect no less from Kakarot...ah, and I remember when he was such a naive young soul as well...until that wickedly sexy Vegeta corrupted him...Yeah!
Loved the end scenes in the kitchen with Vegeta, Kakarot, and Vegeta...with Goten flitting in and out. As amazing as it sounds, it all sounded so very domesticated and family like...the discussions admittedly, are nothing like the boring shit I had to listen to as a youngster, but the atmosphere is similar. I love how writwrite these scenes :-)
Wow...quite a short review, but I sorta skipped over the Goten lemon, not really my cup of tea, but I\'m certainly not complaining...I very much enjoyed the lemony interlude with G/V so I\'m happy...thanks again for that :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ts fos for the lemony interlude, and many thanks to Getarian for persuading you to write one! YAY!
Vegeta pulled back again, arched under him and said: “This now,” squeezed Goku’s erection.--ok that line I love it! It just kept replaying in my head over and over...and over
Lo and behold; there was a nice older lady who was staring at him like he had grown a third head and started singing opera. --rofl! Poor old woman (not really) Goten will do that to ya, especially with his famous shirts. I love him, he is so insatiable and insane!
He spent a few inconsequential moments to hope like hell that the man was the old-lady’s son, because if he was banging her he had so better be getting a shitload of cash out of it. --rofl! He is so crazy, I can just picture him standing there and saying that.
Moved his hands between his and (kane’s?) body,--LoL, hmm, sounds like someone gets a little too much sex.
(More sorry for Kane, really. Because he had to go home with the old-bag-lady.)--LoL I feel sorry for that old chick, everyone , well just Goten keeps calling her a old lady! hehe thats fuuny!
“Just tell that isn’t a ‘I just destroyed the mental stability of a nation of paranoid people’ grin,” Kakarot said when their youngest son came in the door, grinning like a super-dork. --WOAH! Kakarott! *falls over* I can\'t believe that was him saying that, I was for sure it was going to be Vegeta.But he often does say very smart, and witty things from time to time.
“Did the guy say something about it?” Kakarot asked. (He too was eating, but nothing short of world destruction would stop him from enjoying his food.) -- rofl
“Here,” he said, “Put these up around your door and it should dampen all the sound and keep it from scarring ‘Geta for life.”--rofl! aww poor lil Geta, it might be too late for him.
I think Goku & Vegeta landed on the bed because they can fly. Because if I tripped over clothes I’d break my neck. So it must be some sort of Saiyan instinct to always land on the bed with your handsome mate trapped under you. --rofl! yeah it must be saiyajin instinct!
(Closet from which lemony smell is emerging *Closet where Vegeta is* has several locks on it. Cannot be opened.) *sobs and looks at locked closet* I hope he has en air air in there.... *wonders*
Another great chapter from the magnificant Card!
I absolutely loved it, and again thanks for the lemon, you truly go out of your way to make your readers happy! but even if there was no lemon (which i truly enjoy those) I would have loved the chappie regardless!
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Vegeta pulled back again, arched under him and said: “This now,” squeezed Goku’s erection.--ok that line I love it! It just kept replaying in my head over and over...and over
Lo and behold; there was a nice older lady who was staring at him like he had grown a third head and started singing opera. --rofl! Poor old woman (not really) Goten will do that to ya, especially with his famous shirts. I love him, he is so insatiable and insane!
He spent a few inconsequential moments to hope like hell that the man was the old-lady’s son, because if he was banging her he had so better be getting a shitload of cash out of it. --rofl! He is so crazy, I can just picture him standing there and saying that.
Moved his hands between his and (kane’s?) body,--LoL, hmm, sounds like someone gets a little too much sex.
(More sorry for Kane, really. Because he had to go home with the old-bag-lady.)--LoL I feel sorry for that old chick, everyone , well just Goten keeps calling her a old lady! hehe thats fuuny!
“Just tell that isn’t a ‘I just destroyed the mental stability of a nation of paranoid people’ grin,” Kakarot said when their youngest son came in the door, grinning like a super-dork. --WOAH! Kakarott! *falls over* I can\'t believe that was him saying that, I was for sure it was going to be Vegeta.But he often does say very smart, and witty things from time to time.
“Did the guy say something about it?” Kakarot asked. (He too was eating, but nothing short of world destruction would stop him from enjoying his food.) -- rofl
“Here,” he said, “Put these up around your door and it should dampen all the sound and keep it from scarring ‘Geta for life.”--rofl! aww poor lil Geta, it might be too late for him.
I think Goku & Vegeta landed on the bed because they can fly. Because if I tripped over clothes I’d break my neck. So it must be some sort of Saiyan instinct to always land on the bed with your handsome mate trapped under you. --rofl! yeah it must be saiyajin instinct!
(Closet from which lemony smell is emerging *Closet where Vegeta is* has several locks on it. Cannot be opened.) *sobs and looks at locked closet* I hope he has en air air in there.... *wonders*
Another great chapter from the magnificant Card!
I absolutely loved it, and again thanks for the lemon, you truly go out of your way to make your readers happy! but even if there was no lemon (which i truly enjoy those) I would have loved the chappie regardless!
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great chapter!
The twins were being awfully kind to Vegeta...its sweet yet suspicious
The Great Vegeta. Was blushing. And as Bulma stared at him, at the brand new bite mark on his shoulder and at the word: “GOKU’S” that was sucked into his chest --OMG!!! I can not believe Goku did that. That is so hot! And Vegeta was blushing, how cute is that! Goku is very serious about not having other ppl\'s smells on his mate.
“Did he tattoo your ass too?”
“Should we wait for your owner?”--wonderful lines. LoL
When he demanded why this had been done, the psychotic one said: --rofl I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spastic, psychotic Saiyans could also sneak up on a person, which is why he found himself staring at a fully clothed Kakarot standing in the shower, sniffing suspiciously.--OMG rofl he is crazy, but that is so cute. I love Goku. Just the vision of a clothed Kakarott sniffing his mate in the shower..gosh...that is insane, insane..but so yummy...
“But, we could be porn stars.”
“We could do kink.” --The kitchen conversation that took place containing these two lines was hilarious, and Vegeta in the midst of it all listening to them like this is sooo normal, thats great!
“With a lot of puppies,” --now I understand...why they were attacked by lots of dogs!
Just go to Aunt Bulma’s room, throw all her clothes on her bed and have sex on top of them.--Sounds like a plan to me! Goku was thinking very hard of a plan to keep Bulma\'s smell off of his mate, I hope this one works! h ash as long as Vegeta\'s in the closet able to produce lemons and breathe, thats all I am asking! ^.^
Loved this chapter!
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The twins were being awfully kind to Vegeta...its sweet yet suspicious
The Great Vegeta. Was blushing. And as Bulma stared at him, at the brand new bite mark on his shoulder and at the word: “GOKU’S” that was sucked into his chest --OMG!!! I can not believe Goku did that. That is so hot! And Vegeta was blushing, how cute is that! Goku is very serious about not having other ppl\'s smells on his mate.
“Did he tattoo your ass too?”
“Should we wait for your owner?”--wonderful lines. LoL
When he demanded why this had been done, the psychotic one said: --rofl I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spastic, psychotic Saiyans could also sneak up on a person, which is why he found himself staring at a fully clothed Kakarot standing in the shower, sniffing suspiciously.--OMG rofl he is crazy, but that is so cute. I love Goku. Just the vision of a clothed Kakarott sniffing his mate in the shower..gosh...that is insane, insane..but so yummy...
“But, we could be porn stars.”
“We could do kink.” --The kitchen conversation that took place containing these two lines was hilarious, and Vegeta in the midst of it all listening to them like this is sooo normal, thats great!
“With a lot of puppies,” --now I understand...why they were attacked by lots of dogs!
Just go to Aunt Bulma’s room, throw all her clothes on her bed and have sex on top of them.--Sounds like a plan to me! Goku was thinking very hard of a plan to keep Bulma\'s smell off of his mate, I hope this one works! h ash as long as Vegeta\'s in the closet able to produce lemons and breathe, thats all I am asking! ^.^
Loved this chapter!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well alright...I got through all of those too. It was quite kind of you to finish that lemon. I love lemons. The real ones. as much as I love the ones that involve sex. Anyway, Goten got some action...cool...but it wasn\'t Trunks...I\'ll let the pass, for now. And yes, I am afraid that to be completely fair, there must be het sex...Unfortunately, Lil\'Geta is straight *sigh* and he deserves some action too.
I love Goku\'s outlook on sex...of course he wouldn\'t see anything wrong with it.
Sorry for leaving and taking so long to review...it will never happen again...okay, I lied...but didn\'t it sound convincing. He. He.
I love Goku\'s outlook on sex...of course he wouldn\'t see anything wrong with it.
Sorry for leaving and taking so long to review...it will never happen again...okay, I lied...but didn\'t it sound convincing. He. He.
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t truly appreciate how funny the beginning scene was until I got to the scene with Vegeta and Gina and then, sudd the the beginning scene became uproariously funny! Poor Gina. LOL! You set this up beautifully!
\"(Taking the fertility pills with him, which meant that he was going to give them to Fluffers, and he spent a few moments hoping that the poor dog would be alright.)\"
Well, that explains the 20 dogs. LOL!
“I thought you’d been pinned to a wall somewhere.”
LOL! Poor Vegeta...I know Goku\'s trying to get him pregnant an\' all, but he\'s too damn sexy for his own good ;-)
Oh dear, Bulma\'s a bit careless with her scent isn\'t she...I wonder what the drastic measure that Goku is going to take will be...drooling with anticipation...yes, I have a hentai mind and you\'re seriously going to disappoint me if all that happens is that Goku sits Vegeta and Bulma down and lectures them on the perils of standing too close to each other ;-)
\"If they died, he would wish them back tomorrow.\"
LOL! About time that Goku got his priorities right ;-)
“Shit, people. Close your fucking doors.”
LOL! hat had to be young Vegeta, right?
Oh Gods! You cannot leave the lemon there...and just before the Sunday break too...Argh! Woman, cruelty is thy middle name...must continue G/V sex...I ask not for me, but for those two brave Saiyans who have to endure until Monday morning...oh, the agony they must be feeling...Oh well, I\'m off to read \'Abstinence...what\'s it good for?\' by F.U. Knott...toodles :-)
Loved the end dialogue. LOL!
\"*Glances at story, tries to find the word ‘Go.’* I don’t see it. (Ah, insanity.
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LOL! When I first read this, I thought, Huh? What\'s she talking about? I felt compelled to go back and re-read my review, and when I saw my opening line...I cracked up laughing.
\"(Taking the fertility pills with him, which meant that he was going to give them to Fluffers, and he spent a few moments hoping that the poor dog would be alright.)\"
Well, that explains the 20 dogs. LOL!
“I thought you’d been pinned to a wall somewhere.”
LOL! Poor Vegeta...I know Goku\'s trying to get him pregnant an\' all, but he\'s too damn sexy for his own good ;-)
Oh dear, Bulma\'s a bit careless with her scent isn\'t she...I wonder what the drastic measure that Goku is going to take will be...drooling with anticipation...yes, I have a hentai mind and you\'re seriously going to disappoint me if all that happens is that Goku sits Vegeta and Bulma down and lectures them on the perils of standing too close to each other ;-)
\"If they died, he would wish them back tomorrow.\"
LOL! About time that Goku got his priorities right ;-)
“Shit, people. Close your fucking doors.”
LOL! hat had to be young Vegeta, right?
Oh Gods! You cannot leave the lemon there...and just before the Sunday break too...Argh! Woman, cruelty is thy middle name...must continue G/V sex...I ask not for me, but for those two brave Saiyans who have to endure until Monday morning...oh, the agony they must be feeling...Oh well, I\'m off to read \'Abstinence...what\'s it good for?\' by F.U. Knott...toodles :-)
Loved the end dialogue. LOL!
\"*Glances at story, tries to find the word ‘Go.’* I don’t see it. (Ah, insanity.
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LOL! When I first read this, I thought, Huh? What\'s she talking about? I felt compelled to go back and re-read my review, and when I saw my opening line...I cracked up laughing.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* The cruelness!!! an incomplete lemon!!! how could you!?!?!?
I loved this chappie!
Goku grabbed his mate as soon as he stepped one foot back into their house, gathered him up and kissed him as he attempted to growl out something about how it was rude to attack the Prince. --awww I loved that, yt mat may be rude, but the outcome is a very nice on
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If they died, he would wish them back tomorrow.--LoL he really wants to have sex!
Vegeta’s back hit the door to their room, and he kissed Goku again a rea reached down and turned the knob. Goku stumbled, tripped on stray clothes and landed—perfectly—on top of Vegeta on the bed. --hm...how convienent...how come I can never do stuff like that? I\'d probably end up missing the bed and spraining my ankle somehow!
“Shit, people. Close your fucking doors.” That was one of those annoying kids. The door closed, that was all that mattered--rofl! I loved that...those poor twins. No wonder why Goten is a sex driven maniac..lol he learned it from his parents!!!!
Lil’Geta: A T-shirt collection?--LoL yeah I think that is the answer also.
(Is hiding Vegeta in closet out of which there is rising a stench of lemons.) -- *rubs hands together, with a mischievious grin* Thanks for the info...
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I loved this chappie!
Goku grabbed his mate as soon as he stepped one foot back into their house, gathered him up and kissed him as he attempted to growl out something about how it was rude to attack the Prince. --awww I loved that, yt mat may be rude, but the outcome is a very nice on
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If they died, he would wish them back tomorrow.--LoL he really wants to have sex!
Vegeta’s back hit the door to their room, and he kissed Goku again a rea reached down and turned the knob. Goku stumbled, tripped on stray clothes and landed—perfectly—on top of Vegeta on the bed. --hm...how convienent...how come I can never do stuff like that? I\'d probably end up missing the bed and spraining my ankle somehow!
“Shit, people. Close your fucking doors.” That was one of those annoying kids. The door closed, that was all that mattered--rofl! I loved that...those poor twins. No wonder why Goten is a sex driven maniac..lol he learned it from his parents!!!!
Lil’Geta: A T-shirt collection?--LoL yeah I think that is the answer also.
(Is hiding Vegeta in closet out of which there is rising a stench of lemons.) -- *rubs hands together, with a mischievious grin* Thanks for the info...
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! Right from the word go...
“I had assumed that when you said you’d beat them into a coma you were noing ing literal.”
I love this sort of dry humour :-)
\"“I’m too tired for sex,” he said.\"
OH Gods! What\'s the matter with Goku? Someone please, the poor man needs help! LOL! I never thought I\'d ever hear these words coming from the big baka :-)
\"Asshole. Just wait and see if he was going to get any. Ever.\"
Yeah, sure Vegeta...we\'ve all heard that song before ;-)
Interesting scene with the twins as they resided in Goten\'s mindscape. I like the fact that Vegeta chose to enter Goten\'s dream realm, but considering that he is trapped in there until Goten chooses to wake up, this can be quite dangerous. Another sign of the deep bond that the twins share :-)
Love how Vegeta is deeply offended for his brother\'s pride in regards to the fact that he allowed a worthless human to take him...Definite signs of his \'mothern thn these views :-)
Interesting that Goten\'s bruises didn\'t heal until his mind found an outlet of interest (i.e. the mystery of his \'mom\' & the hormone therapy) So, Goten was definitely feeling somewhat detached from his life then? Looks like Trunks was more of a Godsend than we realised :-)
\"he realized there were many reasons why it was a good thing to be Kakarot’s mate. One, as was now being demonstrated, great sex.\"
LOL! I knew it! Vegeta is just as randy as his mate...just likes to pretend that he isn\'t...Gods he\'s a sexy little beast...have I mened ned how much I love \'moaning\' \'writhing\' Vegeta? :-)
Phwoar...Goku really knows some stunning ways to wake up his mate :-)
Oh Gods, as usual I really loved the lemon...always so perfect! I especially loved the way that when Goku was murmuring \"mine\' to Vegeta, Vegeta responded with \"Kakarot\" each time...damn, I could almost hear the panting and breathy whispersmy hmy head...so hot!
“Can we pass out again?” Vegeta asked, “Because I will never recover from that.” He put his fingers in his ears and shuddered in disgust.
“What?” Goten said, “I think I’ve gone temporarily deaf.”
LOL! Poor kids, that can\'t be easy to listen to :-)
“I wish they had named me Hubert,” Vegeta muttered.
OH Gods! F*** Me...I have never laughed so hard! This is officially my favourite line in all your fics! ROTFLMAO!
\"I really like the twins. And the way the whole family interacts with one another.\"
Me too! :-)
\"I’m always grinning when I write this.\"
And it shows :-) Whilst I love your other stories, each having their own, drawing power, I have to say that \"Hormone Therapy\" and \"Mental Therapy\" will probably always be my favourites...they are such fun - The Vegeta & Goku interaction is brilliant! - The twins are the greatest! The G/V sex is supe And And the humour is the best!
“I had assumed that when you said you’d beat them into a coma you were noing ing literal.”
I love this sort of dry humour :-)
\"“I’m too tired for sex,” he said.\"
OH Gods! What\'s the matter with Goku? Someone please, the poor man needs help! LOL! I never thought I\'d ever hear these words coming from the big baka :-)
\"Asshole. Just wait and see if he was going to get any. Ever.\"
Yeah, sure Vegeta...we\'ve all heard that song before ;-)
Interesting scene with the twins as they resided in Goten\'s mindscape. I like the fact that Vegeta chose to enter Goten\'s dream realm, but considering that he is trapped in there until Goten chooses to wake up, this can be quite dangerous. Another sign of the deep bond that the twins share :-)
Love how Vegeta is deeply offended for his brother\'s pride in regards to the fact that he allowed a worthless human to take him...Definite signs of his \'mothern thn these views :-)
Interesting that Goten\'s bruises didn\'t heal until his mind found an outlet of interest (i.e. the mystery of his \'mom\' & the hormone therapy) So, Goten was definitely feeling somewhat detached from his life then? Looks like Trunks was more of a Godsend than we realised :-)
\"he realized there were many reasons why it was a good thing to be Kakarot’s mate. One, as was now being demonstrated, great sex.\"
LOL! I knew it! Vegeta is just as randy as his mate...just likes to pretend that he isn\'t...Gods he\'s a sexy little beast...have I mened ned how much I love \'moaning\' \'writhing\' Vegeta? :-)
Phwoar...Goku really knows some stunning ways to wake up his mate :-)
Oh Gods, as usual I really loved the lemon...always so perfect! I especially loved the way that when Goku was murmuring \"mine\' to Vegeta, Vegeta responded with \"Kakarot\" each time...damn, I could almost hear the panting and breathy whispersmy hmy head...so hot!
“Can we pass out again?” Vegeta asked, “Because I will never recover from that.” He put his fingers in his ears and shuddered in disgust.
“What?” Goten said, “I think I’ve gone temporarily deaf.”
LOL! Poor kids, that can\'t be easy to listen to :-)
“I wish they had named me Hubert,” Vegeta muttered.
OH Gods! F*** Me...I have never laughed so hard! This is officially my favourite line in all your fics! ROTFLMAO!
\"I really like the twins. And the way the whole family interacts with one another.\"
Me too! :-)
\"I’m always grinning when I write this.\"
And it shows :-) Whilst I love your other stories, each having their own, drawing power, I have to say that \"Hormone Therapy\" and \"Mental Therapy\" will probably always be my favourites...they are such fun - The Vegeta & Goku interaction is brilliant! - The twins are the greatest! The G/V sex is supe And And the humour is the best!
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How dare those twins interrupt a lemon!!! *shakes fists at them*
Kakarot was mumbling something about how he was going to beat his sons into a coma so they would stop making trouble and interrupted him when he was trying to have great sex. --rofl I love Goku, that is so cute!
“When I am talking to my fucking mother you will WAIT.” --LoL I can just imagine the spectators faces...
Vegeta (the pregnant one) sighed heavily. Felt one of those infamous battles coming on. Honestly didn’t care what started the fight, didn’t care if his son broke in the face of every single human here, because if they had to come up with this many people to fight against just one of his sons, the stupid asses deserved whatever was coming at them.--I really loved this, little things like this make the character so realistic to me and I totally agree with him!!!!
Vegeta thought of how ridiculous his children looked when they were trying to jerk away from their father.--yeah I bet that does look funny. I really love Goku as the father..it just makes sense to me somehow. I love it!
What\'s wrong with Goten wonder...
Oh and that is why Goku and Geta didn\'t want their children to mate...thought b/c a human does live as long and they are teenagers and stuff like that. Well looks like lil Geta threw those warnings right out the window! He had the urge...and who can control or deny the saiyajin urge to mate!!!???
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Kakarot was mumbling something about how he was going to beat his sons into a coma so they would stop making trouble and interrupted him when he was trying to have great sex. --rofl I love Goku, that is so cute!
“When I am talking to my fucking mother you will WAIT.” --LoL I can just imagine the spectators faces...
Vegeta (the pregnant one) sighed heavily. Felt one of those infamous battles coming on. Honestly didn’t care what started the fight, didn’t care if his son broke in the face of every single human here, because if they had to come up with this many people to fight against just one of his sons, the stupid asses deserved whatever was coming at them.--I really loved this, little things like this make the character so realistic to me and I totally agree with him!!!!
Vegeta thought of how ridiculous his children looked when they were trying to jerk away from their father.--yeah I bet that does look funny. I really love Goku as the father..it just makes sense to me somehow. I love it!
What\'s wrong with Goten wonder...
Oh and that is why Goku and Geta didn\'t want their children to mate...thought b/c a human does live as long and they are teenagers and stuff like that. Well looks like lil Geta threw those warnings right out the window! He had the urge...and who can control or deny the saiyajin urge to mate!!!???
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just loooooovvvveee this ficcie!
“I had assumed that when you said you’d beat them into a coma you were not being literal.”--rofl...I bet that was nice to see Goku come home with his two comafied sons!
And the whole world just turned over in their graves,--you come up with the greatest lines! that is so funny!
Vegeta was sitting on a rock—which he had conjured up out of his own mind. And he looked at his brother, sighed--LoL love that he conjured the rock from his own mind.
“There’s only so many times you can dye a nation green before the joke gets old.”--I know what ya mean kid... (not really) but I have some idea. I can\'t believe they dyed the whole nation green...talk about out of control teens!
spitspite himself, Vegeta smiled---awwwww I love that...how cute!
Uttered the insane word: “Mine”--ok I never get tired of hearing that insane word leaveu\'su\'s lips!,
“Can we pass out again?” Vegeta asked, “Because I will never recover from that.” He put his fingers in his ears and shuddered in disgust.
What?” Goten said, “I think I’ve gone temporarily deaf.”
“I wish they had named me Hubert,” Vegeta muttered--ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was great!!! hilarious! I love that Goten has gone temp. deaf.
*dies* The lemon...oh...*undies to continue writing review* The lemon you wrote was just...yum, pure yum!
Oh and thafor for writing reviews! I really appreciate that! ^.^
The writing was very good; but: HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO VEGETA?!!! Meanie! *huggles Vegeta and pets him, promises him many lemon cookies if he would just run away from Md lid live with Card forever and ever* --*sobs* I really tried not to do that to him...gosh...I wrote so many different things, tried to write a loving sappy thing....just couldn\'t do it! I\'m so sorry Geta...*appears behind you and takes back Vegeta promises to give him Kakarott* hee hee, I will never hurt him like that again...ok so that\'s a lie...*hands Vegbackback to you* Just take him before my muse comes back...
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“I had assumed that when you said you’d beat them into a coma you were not being literal.”--rofl...I bet that was nice to see Goku come home with his two comafied sons!
And the whole world just turned over in their graves,--you come up with the greatest lines! that is so funny!
Vegeta was sitting on a rock—which he had conjured up out of his own mind. And he looked at his brother, sighed--LoL love that he conjured the rock from his own mind.
“There’s only so many times you can dye a nation green before the joke gets old.”--I know what ya mean kid... (not really) but I have some idea. I can\'t believe they dyed the whole nation green...talk about out of control teens!
spitspite himself, Vegeta smiled---awwwww I love that...how cute!
Uttered the insane word: “Mine”--ok I never get tired of hearing that insane word leaveu\'su\'s lips!,
“Can we pass out again?” Vegeta asked, “Because I will never recover from that.” He put his fingers in his ears and shuddered in disgust.
What?” Goten said, “I think I’ve gone temporarily deaf.”
“I wish they had named me Hubert,” Vegeta muttered--ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was great!!! hilarious! I love that Goten has gone temp. deaf.
*dies* The lemon...oh...*undies to continue writing review* The lemon you wrote was just...yum, pure yum!
Oh and thafor for writing reviews! I really appreciate that! ^.^
The writing was very good; but: HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO VEGETA?!!! Meanie! *huggles Vegeta and pets him, promises him many lemon cookies if he would just run away from Md lid live with Card forever and ever* --*sobs* I really tried not to do that to him...gosh...I wrote so many different things, tried to write a loving sappy thing....just couldn\'t do it! I\'m so sorry Geta...*appears behind you and takes back Vegeta promises to give him Kakarott* hee hee, I will never hurt him like that again...ok so that\'s a lie...*hands Vegbackback to you* Just take him before my muse comes back...
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why is there only 7 reviews? This story is worthy of so much more!
Really enjoyed this! Poor Kakarot...no sex today...damn those pesky kids :-)
Loved the whole fighting scene, with Goten surrounded by 60 humans and young Vegeta, Kakarot and Vegeta all standing there casually watching...God I love Saiyans :-)
Cracked up at this:
“When I am talking to my fucking mother you will WAIT.”
LOL! Not a female in sight! Must have confused a number of the humans :-)
Loved this:
\"Then cleared his throat. Pointed his finger at the ground under their feet and started shooting small ki blasts at them. “He said Go Away.”\"
That\'s my Vegeta ;-)
“I was trying to have sex,” Kakarot said, “And you’re stupid little fighterrterrupted me.”
LOL! Still hasn\'t quite got that discretion thing under control has he :-) I love your portrayal of Goku!
\"Kakarot turned to look at him. “It’s my turn isn’t it?”
\"Vegeta nodded.\"
LOL! Really loved this.
I got a kick out of that walking away scene with Vegeta and his first born. There\'s a real closeness in this family that I really love :-)
Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts on Gina, but it\'s kind of sad to think that he will far outlive her because of our pathetic human lifespan.
“I asked her that too, and she just laughed and said that Mom used to be quite mouthy when it came to how much he hated Dad.”
Yeah, and they get to meet that version of Vegeta and Goku too! LOL!
Great story...I love these guys! Definitely looking forward to next chapter and lemon :-)
“No, not even twins can sense their brother’s mating bond.”
That\'s right, shit! I completely forgot about that! As for Goten being able to order Gina about, I\'m sure Vegeta will put a stop to that very rapidly :-)
Really enjoyed this! Poor Kakarot...no sex today...damn those pesky kids :-)
Loved the whole fighting scene, with Goten surrounded by 60 humans and young Vegeta, Kakarot and Vegeta all standing there casually watching...God I love Saiyans :-)
Cracked up at this:
“When I am talking to my fucking mother you will WAIT.”
LOL! Not a female in sight! Must have confused a number of the humans :-)
Loved this:
\"Then cleared his throat. Pointed his finger at the ground under their feet and started shooting small ki blasts at them. “He said Go Away.”\"
That\'s my Vegeta ;-)
“I was trying to have sex,” Kakarot said, “And you’re stupid little fighterrterrupted me.”
LOL! Still hasn\'t quite got that discretion thing under control has he :-) I love your portrayal of Goku!
\"Kakarot turned to look at him. “It’s my turn isn’t it?”
\"Vegeta nodded.\"
LOL! Really loved this.
I got a kick out of that walking away scene with Vegeta and his first born. There\'s a real closeness in this family that I really love :-)
Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts on Gina, but it\'s kind of sad to think that he will far outlive her because of our pathetic human lifespan.
“I asked her that too, and she just laughed and said that Mom used to be quite mouthy when it came to how much he hated Dad.”
Yeah, and they get to meet that version of Vegeta and Goku too! LOL!
Great story...I love these guys! Definitely looking forward to next chapter and lemon :-)
“No, not even twins can sense their brother’s mating bond.”
That\'s right, shit! I completely forgot about that! As for Goten being able to order Gina about, I\'m sure Vegeta will put a stop to that very rapidly :-)