rate_review Reviews

great

This fic was really good! I loved ideaidea of this fic. I was kind of suprised at the part where Trunks seemed to be a whore - that list in his bedroom was kind of interesting; I hope it didnt mean much for their relationship though. And so was the encounter in the cafe - that does really portray true M/M relationships well and how sad this world can be at times. Where Trunks went into a sort of crazed and frenzy phase was interesting as well, however I hoped for a longer time for which he would come out of it - Goten knocking him unconscious and him suddenly feelng all better about it was slightly too quick but overall still very good. The Saiyan\'s ability with smell was great, I really liked the impression and reaction Vegeta gave Goten - even Goku was pretty funny.
Very good fic indeed, it\'s definitely a recommended reading for me! Keep up the great work!!!

Hm, it\'s an interesting start. But I can\'t help the feeling that you wrote that chapter abit too hasitly and everything just \'went by really quickly.\' But i\'m not saying it\'s bad, it\'s pretty good so far. Continue on with the other chapter, I just adore a Trunks and Goten pairing!

Did I miss something...? It goes from DBZ to Gundam Wing in the last chapter.... Perhaps someone mixed up the word documents...?