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WHAAAAAAAAAAA! I can\'t figure out what movie that came from. I know the line but I don\'t remember the movie. *sigh* Ahhh well. I loved Vegeta\'s little rant at the beginning of the chappie. It was superb. My favorite bits...lets see...

Pride was knowing what you were. Pride was knowing what you came from. Pride was never giving up when you got knocked down. Pride was crawling back into your space ship when it took four freaking morons to defyou you and cackling as you realized that yould uld be back—would they? Pride was living after everyone else died. Pride was saving this world that you would have destroyed because it was the home your child was born on. Pride was standing with the rest of the fucking morons you would have killed years ago and proving that while THEY died, so had you, and YOU refused to give up the fight. ---This was an amazing paragraph. I think that this gives wonderful incite into the Prince and who he really is. I loved it as I loved the whole rant.

A lover that was more powerful than any enemy they had faced. An equal that had proved himself. Someone he could not destroy, did not want to destroy, and someone who was part of him because he was the only other one that could understand. Dropped on his head or not, the Saiyan was still inside Kakarot, and it would come out and play when it was needed.

Nothing was lost. -----that was soo beautiful. I think I\'m gonna cry. *Sighs* You leave me with some much to live up to in my ficcy. Thanks for the challenge. :)

Don\'t feel bad about not updating when I thought you should...what do I know anyway. :) Besides I missed class anyway. I sat down and really thought about it and a I said...Self do you really want to be bored out of you sulk so very early in the morning when you have chapters that you could be finishing...and of course we all know waht the answer to that was. He He :)

Yes, the ass clown die dieded. I know that it is not r to to celebrate a character\'s death, even Tien\'s. But you are right he was a prejudice bastard and deserved to get smoked. Besides he didn\'t REALLY die anyway and somewhere someone is writing a fan fic were he is loved and charished and is not an ass clown. No really...I believe that. ;)

Awesomeness!

Knew that Kakarot would give him only to a level of that violence he craved, knew that when the insanity passed he would be thankful for that restraint his mate had.-- Love how he knows Goku will only allow so much and how he knows he would be thankful for the boundaries. Just love how he feels about Goku and this whole relationship. Vegeta, the saiyajin we think can not be kept so speak, contained or controlled is thankful for boundaries...

he knows he needs them...and Kakarott is brave enogh to set them.

“I like to watch you fight,” was the answer, “Its so…” --Well I am going to have to say...I loved that. I swear I stared at the comp screen for like 5 minutes reading that over and over...ahh your lemons are so great and this one is especially nice. I really really loved that part. Love their relationship. I love how he did watch him when they were fighting and how he felt proud of him...and it it to carry into this conversation just adds to the reality of this fic.

The way they talk during sex is insanely delicious.
And I am glad to know they both wanted Tien dead...wish he actually was dead.

Dende got up and walked away—thankfully—and didn’t even mumble something about them making out right there on the floor of the look out where everyone could clearly see them. --ROFL!!! Poor Dende (not!) He is probably going to go watch from around a corner or something.hehe...

Wished now that he had a time machine so he could go back and defeat Tien. --me too Trunks...me too. But some things are worse than death...oh wait he said defeat Tien...man I am really obsessed with killing Tien...

“STUPID TELEMARKETER BASTARDS! I PUT A PHONE IN THE CAPSULE HOUSE FOR A…oh, Trunks. There you are.” --ROFL! I could just see her doing that...

Then she turned and waddled—oh, he would never tell her that she waddled, but she did—away from them. -- LoLThats good that he would never tell her...b/c telling that to a pregnant woman may result in a sever injury on that persons behalf...

Removing his clothes took a record-breaking second. --LoL wow that is very fast. That is a super power within itself.

Loved the end notes!

honestly couldn’t see Goku killing anyone like that, or sitting back and letting it be done. --I agree with u totally and 100% and yeah I do remember that speech with Frieza i inf infamous in this household...don\'t know why but my brother repeats phrases from it a lot... and as for the ass clown...lmao never hear of that before but saw you and JayGoose exchanging the said name. Everytime I saw it I laughed. Well anywho yeah he deserved to die...but I wouldn\'t have killed him either...so I can understand and it makes sense. I just can\'t help,you know, to hate him and want him to accidently poke his eye out on a tree branch and then stumble over the side of a cliff breaking all of his bones and die a slow and agonizingly painful death...

^.*
-MB-

:)))) Ice cream and steak. I think that they could still go out for those now. (Well, after the sex of course.*winks at Goku*)

I truely hope that Goten\'s \'feeling\' was wrong. I don\'t really care for the idea of the full bloods duking it out for real. (Of course, I don\'t think you\'ve put \'bonding\' into this story, so although they may feel bad afterward, it wouldn\'t be suicidal to kill the other mate. If you have, then I need to do some rereading, because I missed that part.) Either way, is there something to Goten we haven\'t seen yet, why he would think such things. I\'ve noticed people pass those kind of judgements based on \'what they would do if\'.

So Tein is dead. (I would do a happy dance if it wasn\'t so immature) I am glad that you gave an explination to MB about the why, i.e. Tein is the embodiment of....
Goku\'s responce was he would do laundry? Hmmmm, is this all he really wanted to say?

Does this mean Bulma is really out of danger? I seem to recall earlier in the fic. Gohan made a statement to the fact Vegeta was leaving her all alone with no protection. Just seems to be reoccurring.

*licks ice cream cone while grilling steaks.* Thanks for the idea.

Wew, what a good story, i really hope things turn out alright for Goku and Vegeta. They are the perfect couple, ^_^ Anyway whatever happens i just hope that they stay together. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

Yeah, I like your fic so far. Glad you decided to take up my challenge. ^_^ I\'m hooked. ^_^

I hate that Tien is still alive but if it leads to more Geta/Kaki banging then that is a good thing. And Trunks and Goten too...Hurray! Poor any-phone-in-Bulma\'s-general-area...:(

You probably won\'t believe this but I am actually working on my fic now. I am really. :)

I can\'t remember If I have reviewed this story yet (my mind is very small) but I have been reading from the very start :) Ewww I hate Tein for this grrrr the sad thing is I know someone who reacted that way to my one friend Bill who just happeneds to be gay. The man said he would kill Bill (hehe movie) if he ever saw him again. so this story is very close to home for me. Poor Bill used me as his freaking body gaurd (grrrrr....I am very mild mannered until you piss me off to bad hahaha no really im not which made that whole situation very amusing even though it wasn\'t) Sorry I digress (always)

I have to also say I LOVE the little comments with Geta and Goku and all the other characters at the end of the chapters they make me laugh soo hard I love them........well Like I have said before I can never get anything done if you keep writ (no (now I\'m not complaining This just gives me an entertaining reason to procrastinate.)

Noel

I like the fact you went into further detail about how the full bloods felt about the battle. I also liked the fact Vegeta didn\'t abuse Kakarrot for something he was angry with Tein about. Shows a maturing attitude on the Prince\'s part. Not that he isn\'t mature, but I see it as one of his character \'flaws\' he is finally out growing/changing. This is good.

I am glad Trunks is okay, but I could have gone for the public sex thing. I think Goten could almost agree. *Looks in Dende\'s direction* \"Don\'t like it? Then don\'t watch.\" (Although I really do think this would be way out of character for both of them)

So, Is Tein going to have a change of heart? Or is he still going to be a bastard? I really hope that he doesn\'t go after Bulma. I can see it happening, but it wouldn\'t be nice, and I think that there would have to be a paper, scissors, rock contest (probably all four/five sayians) as to who got to kill him then.

I think you already know this, so this will be the last time I write it. Update soon please. (I\'ve also noticed that this doesn\'t seem to be a problem you have. I wish I could write as fast and as good as you do.)

I wanted Tien to die, Vegeta pummling him to death would have suited me just fine. The nerve of that 3 eyed freak, attacking Goten and Trunks like that... he only succeeded in getting beaten to a pulp and making Goku and Vegeta horney. Somehow I don\'t think that was his primary objective.
At least Krillin has seen the error of his ways (though too little, too late.) But Tien... Arrrgg! He\'s a narrow-minded conceited, three-eyed bug that needs to be squished. ^-^ (Tien\'s not my favourite character as you can see. ^_^) *clears throat realising that she\'s ranting.* It\'s good to see Goku and Vegeta have made the best out of this situation. ^_~

*Grins sheepishly* You can blame the slowness of updates on two others fics I am currently working on (three as of today U_U) They\'re suchedy edy fics they are, demanding to be fed all the time. ^_^ But... this week \'hopefully\' I will update \'MPS\'
Scratch that, I\'ll try again... this week I\'ll *try* to update all of my fics. ^_^