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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!!
And that was so unlike his lover that he actually felt a momentary fear--wow...even I am scared...but seriously if Vegeta had a moment of fear then things aren\'t too good....
His son had better be alive. His son had better be more than alive, he better be fine, he better be perfect. --hell yeah he better be perfect! I hope Trunks is ok....I am not liking this at all...*is very worried*
a blind sort of anger that meant something truly horrible had happened.---what is the horrible thing..the snse nse is killing me...I must read faster!!!!! Goku having a blind sort of anger.... I hope it\'s b/c he killed Tien...
This is my fight. That was my son. This asshole wants to die so damn badly I will gladly give it to him.--yeah! that\'s right Vegeta you tear him to bloody bits!!!!!!! How dare Tien hurt Trunks!!!! How could he do that. That is so freaking rude. He talks about Vegeta being bad..look at what he is doing..sneaking up on kids and beating them to near death.
I was shaking my fist at the computer screen when I was reading it....
Smirked—that was a proud smirk.--awww he is proud! That is so adorable....*sighs dreamily thens begins reading again* I want that freak of nature (Tien) to die!
Vegeta would kill him. Destroy him and ground his bones to dust.--YESSSSSS!!!!! DESTROY HIM!!!! grind those bones and turn them into glue!!!!!
Found himself watching this and wanting it. Wanting Vegeta.--hehe...aww. Love how he admires his mate.
moved with all the rage of anything that Goku had ever considered ‘evil’ --well look at that... Tien believes Vegeta to be evil, and the one they trust most (Goku)...is looking at him the very same way...how ironic...
Goku moved forward, grabbed Vegeta.Stopped him from the murder. --ahh as much as I TRULY wanted the bastard to die, I am very happy Goku stopped him...
and thought that if Tien came after them again he would not spare his life.--rofl! I know he is very serious but that is why I laughed it is great to see Goku think like that and mean it!
Looked at Goku and demanded that he be given the release he needed so badly.--aww horny things! well I am glad Vegeta is going to get his release oone way or another just as long as he is happy!
Lovely end notes!!!
And another wonderful chap that I loved thank you!
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And that was so unlike his lover that he actually felt a momentary fear--wow...even I am scared...but seriously if Vegeta had a moment of fear then things aren\'t too good....
His son had better be alive. His son had better be more than alive, he better be fine, he better be perfect. --hell yeah he better be perfect! I hope Trunks is ok....I am not liking this at all...*is very worried*
a blind sort of anger that meant something truly horrible had happened.---what is the horrible thing..the snse nse is killing me...I must read faster!!!!! Goku having a blind sort of anger.... I hope it\'s b/c he killed Tien...
This is my fight. That was my son. This asshole wants to die so damn badly I will gladly give it to him.--yeah! that\'s right Vegeta you tear him to bloody bits!!!!!!! How dare Tien hurt Trunks!!!! How could he do that. That is so freaking rude. He talks about Vegeta being bad..look at what he is doing..sneaking up on kids and beating them to near death.
I was shaking my fist at the computer screen when I was reading it....
Smirked—that was a proud smirk.--awww he is proud! That is so adorable....*sighs dreamily thens begins reading again* I want that freak of nature (Tien) to die!
Vegeta would kill him. Destroy him and ground his bones to dust.--YESSSSSS!!!!! DESTROY HIM!!!! grind those bones and turn them into glue!!!!!
Found himself watching this and wanting it. Wanting Vegeta.--hehe...aww. Love how he admires his mate.
moved with all the rage of anything that Goku had ever considered ‘evil’ --well look at that... Tien believes Vegeta to be evil, and the one they trust most (Goku)...is looking at him the very same way...how ironic...
Goku moved forward, grabbed Vegeta.Stopped him from the murder. --ahh as much as I TRULY wanted the bastard to die, I am very happy Goku stopped him...
and thought that if Tien came after them again he would not spare his life.--rofl! I know he is very serious but that is why I laughed it is great to see Goku think like that and mean it!
Looked at Goku and demanded that he be given the release he needed so badly.--aww horny things! well I am glad Vegeta is going to get his release oone way or another just as long as he is happy!
Lovely end notes!!!
And another wonderful chap that I loved thank you!
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* what is there really to say...Tien is an ass clown...but we already know this...I guess they shouldn\'t have killed him...dammit! Oh, well, he got his ass \"Royally\" kicked...he he...I know you liked the pun. And it all ends with Trunks being alive and show adrenaline fueled banging...and everything is just about right with the world.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve finally caught up. Remind me never to let you get that far ahead of me again. It took me a couple of hours (enjoyable ones) to catch up.
Now this cliff hanger?
So, I am going to guess, Tein knew that he couldn\'t hurt the full blooded sayians, so he went after someone/thing that they care about. If I\'m right, I still want to read it. If I am not, I still want to read it.
I reviewed a little along the way (my way to let you know how much I like this fic.)
Waiting for you update.
Now this cliff hanger?
So, I am going to guess, Tein knew that he couldn\'t hurt the full blooded sayians, so he went after someone/thing that they care about. If I\'m right, I still want to read it. If I am not, I still want to read it.
I reviewed a little along the way (my way to let you know how much I like this fic.)
Waiting for you update.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My computer is screwing up, so I will try this again.
Noooooooooooooooooo! Don\'t do that. I would have fans head hunting me for centuries.
I wish that Vegeta could have maein ein dead. That\'s a very unexplored area, how would Goku react?
I think that they behaved very sayian like after the fight. I can imagine what a sayian victory party would be like after a battle. *Thinking Sayian orgy*
Update soon please, with sugar on top.
Noooooooooooooooooo! Don\'t do that. I would have fans head hunting me for centuries.
I wish that Vegeta could have maein ein dead. That\'s a very unexplored area, how would Goku react?
I think that they behaved very sayian like after the fight. I can imagine what a sayian victory party would be like after a battle. *Thinking Sayian orgy*
Update soon please, with sugar on top.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been a while since I have visited this fic. Looks as though I have a lot of catching up to do. I liked this interlude. Not my favorit couple, but it did put a smile on my face.
Now on to the next chapter.
Now on to the next chapter.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a very unexpected way for the whole Gohan situation to be cleared up. Ah, the power of writters. (not to mention muses)
As usual, a short review, but I see that I still have five or more chapters to catch up on.
As usual, a short review, but I see that I still have five or more chapters to catch up on.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know that I am suppose to be catching up, but I couldn\'t help but want to review this chapter. The carkness thing in Vegeta kind of explains a lot about their relationship being the way it is, but then it brings up more questions. I am hoping that those questions are going to be answered.
Oh, and I loved the lemons.
Oh, and I loved the lemons.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Feel the impending death on his shoulder and had to wonder just whose death was lingering there on the forefront of fate. --Oh gosh..if someone does die..I really hope it\'s TIEN!!!!!!!
“Sorry, ‘Geta, I just…like it so much I thought the poor guy needed some extra attention.” --rofl! hehe, that is so cute.
Only Kakarot could get him to refer to his penis in the third person, as if it had a separate personality. --lol it is funny yet adorable to hear Vegeta talk like thind end even sweeter that only Goku can get him to do this.
“Aw,” Kakarot said as he turned to pick up his clothes off the sink, “Did I wear him out?”--O_O hehe...it was cute..now I am just freaked out. Just kidding it\'s still cute!
“Telemarketers,” he replied.--rofl..I would love to see one of them interact with a telemarketer that would be hilarious
Talked to the telemarketers and agreed with them about everything they said, chatted to them for an hour and always hung up on them when they got to the ‘now give me your credit card number’ part.--ROFL ok retract above statement you did have one interact with a TM and it IS hilarious! When I got to the part where he hangs up on them I nealy died!
(if you count “I don’t want to get killed by you please don’t hurt me I’ll leave you alone” as an apology)’ --*falls out of chair in hysterical laughter* I could see him doing that, but then again I could see a lot of ppl doing that, seeing as who they are dealing with. Either way it is hilarious.
“I really scd upd up,” Krillin said. ---um..DUH! Gosh I really hate that. Maybe he should have just said something not so stupid! I totally agree with Goku\'s thoughts after that line. Goku should not have to tell him it\'s ok, like Krillen is the victim. Puh lease!
(Knew that Vegeta hated it when anyone so much as slightly implied he was weak and wasn’t about to do that.) --AWWWW *hugs you* I love that line. They remind me of married couple or something. I just love how much they know each other inside and out. How they can talk about anything and be comfotable with each other. You write the best stuff. It is very realistic and I dunno their emotions are just real. They have struggles and problems...and a stupid three eyed freak that is hungry for Princely blood. I read a lot of fics (duh) and I compliment a lot of ppl (douduh)duh) but I have to say you truly are one of the best. I mean that.
You update everyday, you have tons of fics so many so that I haven\'t even read two of them. Your writing is superb..there is a plot, emotion, meaning, depth, character growth. I mean we got to watch Vegeta and Goku have kids...watch their lives unfold and watch them grow up and watch those kids raise havoc in so many other fics and lives, and have kids of theri own. You can somehow conncect almost all of your fics together and make sense with it all. Genius. I am seriously impressed!
Anywho I think I have said enough for today...and I can not wait for the next chapter.
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“Sorry, ‘Geta, I just…like it so much I thought the poor guy needed some extra attention.” --rofl! hehe, that is so cute.
Only Kakarot could get him to refer to his penis in the third person, as if it had a separate personality. --lol it is funny yet adorable to hear Vegeta talk like thind end even sweeter that only Goku can get him to do this.
“Aw,” Kakarot said as he turned to pick up his clothes off the sink, “Did I wear him out?”--O_O hehe...it was cute..now I am just freaked out. Just kidding it\'s still cute!
“Telemarketers,” he replied.--rofl..I would love to see one of them interact with a telemarketer that would be hilarious
Talked to the telemarketers and agreed with them about everything they said, chatted to them for an hour and always hung up on them when they got to the ‘now give me your credit card number’ part.--ROFL ok retract above statement you did have one interact with a TM and it IS hilarious! When I got to the part where he hangs up on them I nealy died!
(if you count “I don’t want to get killed by you please don’t hurt me I’ll leave you alone” as an apology)’ --*falls out of chair in hysterical laughter* I could see him doing that, but then again I could see a lot of ppl doing that, seeing as who they are dealing with. Either way it is hilarious.
“I really scd upd up,” Krillin said. ---um..DUH! Gosh I really hate that. Maybe he should have just said something not so stupid! I totally agree with Goku\'s thoughts after that line. Goku should not have to tell him it\'s ok, like Krillen is the victim. Puh lease!
(Knew that Vegeta hated it when anyone so much as slightly implied he was weak and wasn’t about to do that.) --AWWWW *hugs you* I love that line. They remind me of married couple or something. I just love how much they know each other inside and out. How they can talk about anything and be comfotable with each other. You write the best stuff. It is very realistic and I dunno their emotions are just real. They have struggles and problems...and a stupid three eyed freak that is hungry for Princely blood. I read a lot of fics (duh) and I compliment a lot of ppl (douduh)duh) but I have to say you truly are one of the best. I mean that.
You update everyday, you have tons of fics so many so that I haven\'t even read two of them. Your writing is superb..there is a plot, emotion, meaning, depth, character growth. I mean we got to watch Vegeta and Goku have kids...watch their lives unfold and watch them grow up and watch those kids raise havoc in so many other fics and lives, and have kids of theri own. You can somehow conncect almost all of your fics together and make sense with it all. Genius. I am seriously impressed!
Anywho I think I have said enough for today...and I can not wait for the next chapter.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just so damn good. What else can I say? Sex does balance angst... even if there is no humor. *sigh* I think I\'ll survive.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Glares* What an evil evil cliffhanger
My attempt to \'borrow\' Vegeta was thwarted by Goku... *sniffles*
But it doesn\'t ma suc sucking up wasn\'t needed... just my winning smile and charming personality. (Ok ok they must\'ve forgotten) U_U
*gives up glaring, distracts Goku with a donut and makes another attempt to \'borrow\' Vegeta... fails horribly*
My attempt to \'borrow\' Vegeta was thwarted by Goku... *sniffles*
But it doesn\'t ma suc sucking up wasn\'t needed... just my winning smile and charming personality. (Ok ok they must\'ve forgotten) U_U
*gives up glaring, distracts Goku with a donut and makes another attempt to \'borrow\' Vegeta... fails horribly*