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Oww...was that a cliffy? A very nice one too. That is exactly how they should be. I am excited and ready for more. Oh...and Tien is stillss css clown.

Wow, great chapter, but that´s not much of a surprise considering what a talented author you are... Anyway, ^-^ I really loved it! And the plot is really thickening now (and into a direction I especially like)... very nice cliffhanger, I hope you do update tomorow... I don´t think I could survive weekend without the next chapter... AND WHAT THE **** DID GOKU SEEEEEEEEEEEEEE? Oh, the suspense... it´s killing me! ;) By the way, you made me write again... I`ve been having a writers block for month now and all of a sudden I can write again. Thanks! Have a nice day. ~kodachi~

Alright - where\'s Trunks and what did Goku see when he IT\'d to Goten?!?! You know you promised some humor IN your fics soon - maybe not this one specifically but all this angsty stuff is killing me! I need to see some good sex or some real laughter (no evil laughs!) or something that isn\'t making me cry or worry bite marks into my pencils! Argh!!!!

Oh, I\'ve got a definite bad feeling about all of this. I\'m pretty certain that I know what it is that Goku saw, I just hope it\'s not as definite as the feeling that Vegeta had in the beginning.

Speaking of which...

Amazing shower scene. The total sense of \'oneness\' between these two men, was very evident in this scene. The way they spoke to each other, the way they interacted, particularly this:

\"“I’m fine, Kakarot,” he replied. Released the wrists and let his lover finish shampooing his hair.\"

So amazingly loving and extremely sensual. ove ove the distracted attitude of Vegeta and the way he didn\'t even notice that Goku was seeing to his needs until Goku started drying in a more southerly region. Loved this:

\"“Kakarot…” he said. Crossed his aoverover his chest and frowned at the grinning Saiyan.\"
\"“Sorry, ‘Geta, I just…like it so much I thought the poor guy needed some extra attention.”\"

LOL! Really love the way these two play. Enjoyed this:

\"...“Leave him be, he needs his sleep.” Only Kakarot could get him to refer to his penis in the third person, as if it had a separate personality.\"

LOL! This is just too sweet. Just so long as they don\'t give it a name, like \"Little General\" *chuckle* Who said that once? Was it Joey from friends? Sounds like him. :-)

\"“Aw,” Kakarot said as he turned to pick up his clothes off the sink, “Did I wear him out?”\"

LOL! Love Kakarot\'s teasing response. They are so comfortable around each other, and so happy. It\'s a damn shame that others are so intent on ruining it for them.

Loved the bit about telemarketers. Loved that Goku would happily answer every phone call no matter what they were doing or about to do. Loved that Vegeta got so pissed off that he blasted the phone. Totally loved that Goku would chat endlessly to the telemarketer and then hang up when it got to giving out credit card details...LOL!

At least it\'s just down to Tien being an arsehole now. But something tells me that he\'s gone one step further than just being an annoyance and I am feeling very worried.

Good chapter. Enjoyed it, and looking forward to the next one. :-)

Loved the end dialogue, particularly this:

\"Gk: THAT’S IT! I was promised sex! I did not get sex!\"

LOL!

I loved this chapter...

He was flying, thinking these amusing, content little thoughts, when he was brought out of that mid-afternoon thought by a certain pair of freaks that showed up. --really really hate that someone is about to ruin Vegeta\'s good thoughts and his good day.

“Your mangled body being burned alive,” the triclops said. -hatehate Tien, I really do. I mean that is so extreme...and like that would EVER happen. and if it did I would love to see what Goku would do. Although it would be nice to see Tien\'s body burned alive...*smiles*

Moved forward with (definitely) unimpressing speed, and punched at him. --ROFL!!! Oh gosh...what were they expecting to accomplish?

Heard baldy say: “You’ll never change!” --*is shocked beyond breathing* WHAT!!! They came to him!!! Oh gosh...I soooo hate them! How could they be so stupid... And really that is so unfair to say. What did they expect Vegeta to do? They are harassing The They are the ones who never change! jerks...!

let me bash your face in’ road --rofl *cheers* GO VEGETA!!!!

Aww I loved when Goku showed up! I loved that he was powering up and not even knowing it letting his earth side go. Then when he watched Vegeta fight and how he admired it...ah I loved that too.

Wrapped his whole body around Vegeta and held him still. “What happ?” h?” he asked. --Goku never ceases to amaze me. I have always loved from the start of this fic how Goku has NEVER once failed to comfort Vegeta in the open or not. He is always there for him. And vice versa b/c Vegeta did the same for him too before...

He and Tien were chummy there for a little bit when they had the ‘I hate Vegeta’ fanclub.” --LoL, that is so not a popular fan club! -_- Yes Goten you talk to your brother. This fighting must end. Vegeta wants it to.

“PINK?! For a Saiyan?”--LoL...uh *looks at Goku* Did you forget all about Vegeta\'s badman shirt? hm...?

In response to what you said to hecate18...Gk: There there, dearie, Vegeta is mine and nobody is going to take him anywhere.--*gasp* how can this be...I have Vegeta right here tied to..err I mean happily sitting on this bed.

I love kidnapping your characters...although I know most of them are not owned by you, but you do make them very, very, desriable...

I love Angel too!!!! Watch it ever so faithfully and Spike is da best!!!!!! Angel ain\'t so bad either.

^.*

Very nice...

Aww poor Goten having to sleep on Gohan\'s couch.

So, he found himself watching crappy TV (The WB, surprise, surprise) and after a rather angsty episode of ‘Smallville’ --I love that show, that and One Tree Hill...

Of course, this happy realization—well, it made him happy anyway—was interrupted by his sister-in-law going into LABOR. Stupid girl.---LoL, yes she is very stupid.

When his niece was FINALLY born six hours later--rofl!!! Aww it is taking him forever to get to Trunks. Poor guy.

I totally loved the whole thing with the peanut butter very delicious! Thank you JayGoose for suggessting it and Card for writing it! Yummy!

I am glad the the two demi\'s made up! YAY! That lemon was very nice though. Also glad that they realized they are a couple like their fathers...^.^

*Vegeta glares at MB. * “Look missy, either you wash your head or we’ll never have sex again.--*triple gasp* NO!!!! You must have sex! I will wash my head every minute of every day if I must! The sex must go on!
*G
*Goku grabs MB and drags her to shower.*--WOO HOO looks like he is going to have sex with me!!!! j/k but Goku dragging me to the shower is die worthy soooo...*dies* I will never wash my body again...just kidding!

^.*
-MB-

*Sigh* When are Krillin and Tien going to stop interfering in other people\'s lives and just get on with their own? I find it pretty ironic that they\'ve got this huge hate on for Vegeta because they believe he is some sort of threat, and yet the only one\'s doing the terrorising (well...attempted terrorising) are these two idiots.

\"Heard baldy say: “You’ll never change!”\"

LOL! How exactly is Vegeta supposed to act when he\'s being attacked? The hypocrisy of Krillin\'s statement is too amusing to take seriously.

Totally loved that Goku went \'all Saiyan\' for a while there. *sigh* Yeah, I know, we can\'t have him killing those two, because it would just eat at him, but I wish that Goten and Trunks hadn\'t arrived quite so soon. A nasty beating may just have been the trick to tell the two idiots that they should just get over it and bugger off.

Really love the way that Goku calms Vegeta, and totally love the fact that Vegeta allows himself to be calmed. Hated Tien\'s gutless attack against Goku and Vegeta. He seriously needs a major beating.

So it looks like possible trouble is brewing. Interested in seeing how Gohan is going to react to all of this now that he\'s a father.
e hoe how Goku and Vegeta took everything in their stride, and immediately started talking about Bulma and the baby. Loved this:

“PINK?! For a Saiyan?”
“Yes, Kakarot. But she says that she’s only going to have one daughter she’s going to do all the female things with her she can.”
“Oh…man, but pink?”

LOL! So, I guess that Goku blotted out the \'badman\' shirt that Vegeta wore back in the early days. :-D

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Loved the enalogalogue :-)

Responding to your response to MB

\"I’m a sucker for Angel.\"

Me too! Love Angel. Love Spike. Love them all! Really annoyed that it\'s all ending soon. :-(

\"Now the day Cross-Eyed gets a thousand hits I’ll just die from happiness. ;)\"

I\'m actually a little stunned that it hasn\'t had a thousand hits already, but it\'s a great fic, so it\'ll get there.

I still have \"Never Before\" to read and review, and I\'ll definitely read it, as MLS was the last fic I read and reviewed, and I want to go to bed on something light, but it\'s super late so I probably won\'t review it until tomorrow.

Yay! 100 reviews! This will make it 101...Hey, congratulations. About time your stuff was appreciated on this level. :-)

Nice to see that Goten finally decided it was time to sort things out with Trunks. He\'s right, sooner or later it would have all just festered between them if they didn\'t get it sorted.

A little sad to think that he doesn\'t enjoy his sparring sessions wVegeVegeta, but I suppose the demi\'s never really did take training as seriously as their father\'s...sigh.

Ooh, wonderful little peek into the world of Vegeta and Goku. Love the whole \"just passing, thought I\'d drop in\" attitude of Goten\'s, as he quickly tell\'s them about Pan\'s birth and then takes off, without batting an eyelid at what he had just walked in on. :-)

Nice work-in of Jaygoose\'s peanut butter idea. Glad to see that Goten made a firm point about not taking any shit from Trunks. Loved how Trunks likened their feelings for each other, to those of their fathers, and then felt a momentary panic, when he wasn\'t sure if Goten felt the same way. Loved Goten\'s reaction, and Trunks\' obvious relief at that reaction. Loved this:

“No, I think that’s a fine way to be.”
“Do you know what they were doing last time I saw them?”

Totally loved Trunks\' uncertain \"what\" and Goten\'s \'answer\' was the best ever....Hmm, so that\'s what he walked in on. ;-)

...And that\'s pretty much where I left it..nearly got all the way through. :-)

Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)
Oh, Oh, goodness dear. You worry an awful lot...\"

I know. Drives me crazy. Totally enjoyed the rest of what you wrote, ending up laughing pretty hard. :-D

Oww...a good fight is always good. Tien has now be crowned the King of Ass Clowns. I never liked him. It just something about having three eyes that really bothers me. How dare he even think he had a chance against the mighty Prince of Saiyans?! And...Krillin that noseless, boot licking, ass clown lackey...

Another great chapter!

\"Please tell me you remember whou aou are doing.\" LOL

Also I have posted part of my first fic.

I\'ve had the idea before, but reading your work
was the inspiration I needed.