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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter. I know I\'m skipping ahead but I\'m still grinning over this line:
\"“My child is an idiot.” Like he was at an anonymous meeting: ‘My name is Vegeta, and my son is an idiot.’\"
Cracked me up :-D
Anyway, yup, I have to agree with Vegeta\'s sentiments here. From what I can understand here, Goten has asked Trunks about being uke, probably due to the fact that Goten was uke the first time, and Trunks does not want that position, now if it\'s because it\'s not for him and Goten won\'t accept that, then I suppose that it\'s as well that they go no further in their relationship. But if Trunks\' only reason for not taking turns with his partner is because he has this hang-up about it being for weaklings and women only, then he deserved every punch he got...little shit.
He not only deeply insulted his best friend, but also unknowingly, his father.
I totally loved the scenes with Goku and Goten. The way Goku felt totally out of his depth in knowing how to deal with all this. His inner thoughts as he listened to Goten ranting on, was very well done and very much in character. I loved it :-)
I really hope that Goten doesn\'t feel like the lesser of the two, simply because he was willing to be uke. This position is not cut out for everyone, but Trunks could have handled it a whole lot better than he apparently has. I don\'t know how he is going to smooth things over with Goten, but something tells me that a box of chocolates ain\'t gonna do it.
I really love the way that you introduce all these side plots along the way, seemingly without effort, and I am looking forward to seeing how this all plays out. :-)
Really loved the end dialogue :-D
\"...Thank you so much. I don’t think I can say that enough. Just thank you. All of you that review.\"
You deserve everyone\'s reviews, you write such wonderful stuff, you update at an amazing rate, you can suddenly twist the plot out of nowhere and make it all flow, and you can evoke a number of emotions with your words and style...pretty impressive stuff :-)
\"“My child is an idiot.” Like he was at an anonymous meeting: ‘My name is Vegeta, and my son is an idiot.’\"
Cracked me up :-D
Anyway, yup, I have to agree with Vegeta\'s sentiments here. From what I can understand here, Goten has asked Trunks about being uke, probably due to the fact that Goten was uke the first time, and Trunks does not want that position, now if it\'s because it\'s not for him and Goten won\'t accept that, then I suppose that it\'s as well that they go no further in their relationship. But if Trunks\' only reason for not taking turns with his partner is because he has this hang-up about it being for weaklings and women only, then he deserved every punch he got...little shit.
He not only deeply insulted his best friend, but also unknowingly, his father.
I totally loved the scenes with Goku and Goten. The way Goku felt totally out of his depth in knowing how to deal with all this. His inner thoughts as he listened to Goten ranting on, was very well done and very much in character. I loved it :-)
I really hope that Goten doesn\'t feel like the lesser of the two, simply because he was willing to be uke. This position is not cut out for everyone, but Trunks could have handled it a whole lot better than he apparently has. I don\'t know how he is going to smooth things over with Goten, but something tells me that a box of chocolates ain\'t gonna do it.
I really love the way that you introduce all these side plots along the way, seemingly without effort, and I am looking forward to seeing how this all plays out. :-)
Really loved the end dialogue :-D
\"...Thank you so much. I don’t think I can say that enough. Just thank you. All of you that review.\"
You deserve everyone\'s reviews, you write such wonderful stuff, you update at an amazing rate, you can suddenly twist the plot out of nowhere and make it all flow, and you can evoke a number of emotions with your words and style...pretty impressive stuff :-)
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was the most touching, yet heartbreaking, lemon I have ever read.
I\'m not sure if my review is going to do justice to the depths of emotions I felt as I read through this, but heres ans anyway:
It has been obvious premuchmuch all along that Vegeta loved Goku, that he wanted to share his life with him, be a part of him, but what has never really been certain, is why he has been so willing to be uke. This chapter clarifies this uncertainty in, what is probably, one of the better reasons for why Vegeta would so willingly submit, when his nature has always been somewhat aggressive.
I myself could offer up many reasons, and have on occasion done so, but none fit quite as well as the fact that, Vegeta is being ruled by his fear, his own fear of finding his one time rival so vulnerably placed before him, thereby; in a moment of sheer dominance, placing Vegeta in the supreme position of finally facing up to all those moments when he had hoped to defeat Kakarot.
Okay, it has probably already been established that I\'m a complete softy where Vegeta is concerned, and yes, I felt deeply sad that this proud man, is so fearfulhis his darker side emerging, so afraid that everyone is right about him after all, that he cannot allow himself such a moment wthe the man he now loves. To hold back, and finally decide that he should find an alternative, safer (and nowhere near as satisfying) method, in which to please his mate.
The fact that he knows that Goku would never hurt him, but he fears very much that he may hurt Goku, really is tremendously sad...my hearallyally goes out to him, as he battles with some pretty serious self-doubts.
Goku\'s thoughts on his first experience as uke, was deeply touching, especially when he read the fear in Vegeta\'s dark expression, and no doubt expered ied it in his touch. I felt his sorrow, when he realised that Vegeta was succumbing to his own belief that he is possibly not good enough for Goku.
The following morning, when Goku awoke to find Vegeta, still up, obviously not having slept or if so, not very well, followed by the scene in the shower, was so heartwrenching.
Vegeta placing Goku at his entrance, re-establishing his role as uke, feeling safith ith it being this way...the background emotions I felt from both of the men and throughout this entire chapter, was pretty heartbreaking.
But what I got from this most of all, was the deepest sense of love between these two strong, independant men.
You outdid yourself on this one Card. It was an exceptional chapter!
Looking forward to the next :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)
I\'m not sure if my review is going to do justice to the depths of emotions I felt as I read through this, but heres ans anyway:
It has been obvious premuchmuch all along that Vegeta loved Goku, that he wanted to share his life with him, be a part of him, but what has never really been certain, is why he has been so willing to be uke. This chapter clarifies this uncertainty in, what is probably, one of the better reasons for why Vegeta would so willingly submit, when his nature has always been somewhat aggressive.
I myself could offer up many reasons, and have on occasion done so, but none fit quite as well as the fact that, Vegeta is being ruled by his fear, his own fear of finding his one time rival so vulnerably placed before him, thereby; in a moment of sheer dominance, placing Vegeta in the supreme position of finally facing up to all those moments when he had hoped to defeat Kakarot.
Okay, it has probably already been established that I\'m a complete softy where Vegeta is concerned, and yes, I felt deeply sad that this proud man, is so fearfulhis his darker side emerging, so afraid that everyone is right about him after all, that he cannot allow himself such a moment wthe the man he now loves. To hold back, and finally decide that he should find an alternative, safer (and nowhere near as satisfying) method, in which to please his mate.
The fact that he knows that Goku would never hurt him, but he fears very much that he may hurt Goku, really is tremendously sad...my hearallyally goes out to him, as he battles with some pretty serious self-doubts.
Goku\'s thoughts on his first experience as uke, was deeply touching, especially when he read the fear in Vegeta\'s dark expression, and no doubt expered ied it in his touch. I felt his sorrow, when he realised that Vegeta was succumbing to his own belief that he is possibly not good enough for Goku.
The following morning, when Goku awoke to find Vegeta, still up, obviously not having slept or if so, not very well, followed by the scene in the shower, was so heartwrenching.
Vegeta placing Goku at his entrance, re-establishing his role as uke, feeling safith ith it being this way...the background emotions I felt from both of the men and throughout this entire chapter, was pretty heartbreaking.
But what I got from this most of all, was the deepest sense of love between these two strong, independant men.
You outdid yourself on this one Card. It was an exceptional chapter!
Looking forward to the next :-)
Enjoyed the end dialogue :-)
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so exhausted. I\'m sorry I can\'t really review properly. I like the Goten and Trunks thing, though.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-You know, I love this fic too. But sometimes I wish I was just reading it instead of writing it. That way I could look at it and just enjoy it.- That is so true, I wish that too sometimes. I thought that it was just me. I think everything I write is lame anyway...and it is wierd that other people like it. So I thought that maybe if I were on the outside looking in that I would see what everyone else does. Oh, well not going to happen so must deal with it.
Oh, and I have excepted the fact that you are indeed not trying to kill me...you\'re just trying to make me stronger. ;)
I liked how your Vegeta is still obviously struggling with his feelings for Goku. It just is never that easy...especially for the sweet Prince. It just wouldn\'t be fun if it was anyway.
Oh, and I have excepted the fact that you are indeed not trying to kill me...you\'re just trying to make me stronger. ;)
I liked how your Vegeta is still obviously struggling with his feelings for Goku. It just is never that easy...especially for the sweet Prince. It just wouldn\'t be fun if it was anyway.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, even if there is no mpreg. (fooey)
I reviewed yours, Review mine!
I reviewed yours, Review mine!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, another great chapter... I never thought one could lenghten and thicken the plot so expertly... normaly it always seems a little forced, but with your story it comes so- natural. You go into detail with things nobody has thought of before (like Gohans feelings about Chichi´s death), but when you mention them I can only think: Yeah, she´s right, what IS wrong with Gohan... In other words, you give your characters depth(!) which is very important for a good story I believe... it´s not like: Gohan is bad, Goku is good, Yamcha is plain mean, Bulma is angtc. tc. It´s so interesting to see the characters change their point of view, develope and interact with each other... I LOVE IT! And I love the fact that you go on with your story AFTER the initial Goku/Vegeta-sex and really explain their relashionship and most importantly, one can really FEEL the love they share... it´s not just the: He has a cute ass, sexy body and so on, but they base their relashionship more on their individual personalities and HOW they see each other rather than WHAT they can plain see.. meaning it´s not just the body but the person they fall in love with .... I´m rambling :( ... Anyway, I´m impatiently waiting for the next update. Till then: Have a nice day and friendly greetings, ~kodachi~
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful...
That stupid green thing had always seemedlikelike the pimple pest. --hehe that is so gross!
Thought back to Radditz and Nappa and smirked in satisfaction that if they had tried to tell him that he shouldn’t be with Kakarot that he would have beat their heads in until they apologized for their stupidity and swore on the blood spewing from their wounds that they would never say such a thing again.---ROFL!!! I totally loved that. I wish I could have witnessed a display like that from Vegeta...hilarious, yet so true to who he is. Perfect.
Oh. Joy. He was so very thrilled to hear that. Watch him dance a little jig.--GAH!!! ROFL!!! I love when he thinks things like this. Inside of Vegeta\'s head, what a wonderful place to be... wouldn\'t mind watching him dance a jig either.
Now partpart in this plan was complete.--hehe oh yes...he did so much. Said one little sentence...*pats Vegeta\'s back*
It was sending the very person he was trying to protect into face the very thing he wanted to bash the head in of.--LoL, love that! especially the part where Vegeta calls him a thing...
You knew and you spent all that time with that stupid, stuck-up bitch.--*gasp* stupid stuck up bitch?!?!?! No one disrespects my Vegeta!!! Gohan better get his act together or else I am gonna have to jump in this fic and hurt him...although I doubt I would do much harm...but my words can be cruel!!!! *throws harsh words at Gohan* TAKE TH!
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“Oh,” Chichi said, rolled her eyes, “That’s nothing. I always knew you’d end up with that snob eventually. Can’t help but be who you are.”--h I l I love this side of ChiChi. And I am so happy she didn\'t freak out in her screaming bitch mode. I\'m glad things are starting to and hopefully looking up for this couple. Loved that ChiChi asked Gohan how school was...hehe very good!
I loved the little end notes.
Wonderful chap as always I luv this fic!
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That stupid green thing had always seemedlikelike the pimple pest. --hehe that is so gross!
Thought back to Radditz and Nappa and smirked in satisfaction that if they had tried to tell him that he shouldn’t be with Kakarot that he would have beat their heads in until they apologized for their stupidity and swore on the blood spewing from their wounds that they would never say such a thing again.---ROFL!!! I totally loved that. I wish I could have witnessed a display like that from Vegeta...hilarious, yet so true to who he is. Perfect.
Oh. Joy. He was so very thrilled to hear that. Watch him dance a little jig.--GAH!!! ROFL!!! I love when he thinks things like this. Inside of Vegeta\'s head, what a wonderful place to be... wouldn\'t mind watching him dance a jig either.
Now partpart in this plan was complete.--hehe oh yes...he did so much. Said one little sentence...*pats Vegeta\'s back*
It was sending the very person he was trying to protect into face the very thing he wanted to bash the head in of.--LoL, love that! especially the part where Vegeta calls him a thing...
You knew and you spent all that time with that stupid, stuck-up bitch.--*gasp* stupid stuck up bitch?!?!?! No one disrespects my Vegeta!!! Gohan better get his act together or else I am gonna have to jump in this fic and hurt him...although I doubt I would do much harm...but my words can be cruel!!!! *throws harsh words at Gohan* TAKE TH!
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“Oh,” Chichi said, rolled her eyes, “That’s nothing. I always knew you’d end up with that snob eventually. Can’t help but be who you are.”--h I l I love this side of ChiChi. And I am so happy she didn\'t freak out in her screaming bitch mode. I\'m glad things are starting to and hopefully looking up for this couple. Loved that ChiChi asked Gohan how school was...hehe very good!
I loved the little end notes.
Wonderful chap as always I luv this fic!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally understood Vegeta\'s thoughts at the start. It all must be very difficult for the Saiyan Prince to hold his natural instincts in where all this is concerned, after all, this is all interfering in his bonding process with his mate.
Really enjoyed this:
\"“Yamcha has decided to stop fighting,” Piccolo said.\"
\"Oh. Joy. He was so very thrilled to hear that...\"
LOL! Well that must be a load off Vegeta\'s mind :-D
“Bulma said that someone needs to ‘talk’ to the fucking moron.”
LOL! I\'m pretty sure that those weren\'t exactly her words...but good enough :-D
Really liked the end bit between Vegeta, Goku and Piccolo, just before Goku was to take off to see hin. n. I thought that the moment between Goku and Vegeta, followed by the kiss was really nicely done. Very touching. Loved the fact that Vegeta had every intention of making sure he would be near enough to Goku, should he need him. Very loving :-)
Hmm, what to say about Gohan? Looks like he\'s been bottling up his true feelings all along. I thought that ChiChi not informing her family of her illness would have repercussions, but when none happened (or so I thought) guregured that I was wrong. Guess I couldn\'t see the wood for the trees.
I undertand his general sense of anger, totally sympathise with it, and guess I can even see why he directed this anger at his father and Vegeta, but I still think that he overreacted and caused huge problems when none were necessary. He should have pulled his father aside and told him what was in his heart, and yes, Goku should have sat down with his boys after ChiChi\'s death and tried to see how they were handling it. Shame that Vegeta had to bear the brunt of everyone\'s wrath.
I\'m glad thaku fku finally came up with the idea to take Gohan to otherworld to see his mother. Good idea, by the way, I love it :-)
Whilst I understand Gohan\'s actions a bit more now, I still think he\'s a complete snot, as are the others.
Good chapter.
Looking forward to the next one...Hurry back! :-)
\"Vegeta: YOU FREAKING DISAPPEARED! Think of what I must be thinking!\"
Never even thought of this. Poor Vegeta must be freaking out :-(
Really enjoyed this:
\"“Yamcha has decided to stop fighting,” Piccolo said.\"
\"Oh. Joy. He was so very thrilled to hear that...\"
LOL! Well that must be a load off Vegeta\'s mind :-D
“Bulma said that someone needs to ‘talk’ to the fucking moron.”
LOL! I\'m pretty sure that those weren\'t exactly her words...but good enough :-D
Really liked the end bit between Vegeta, Goku and Piccolo, just before Goku was to take off to see hin. n. I thought that the moment between Goku and Vegeta, followed by the kiss was really nicely done. Very touching. Loved the fact that Vegeta had every intention of making sure he would be near enough to Goku, should he need him. Very loving :-)
Hmm, what to say about Gohan? Looks like he\'s been bottling up his true feelings all along. I thought that ChiChi not informing her family of her illness would have repercussions, but when none happened (or so I thought) guregured that I was wrong. Guess I couldn\'t see the wood for the trees.
I undertand his general sense of anger, totally sympathise with it, and guess I can even see why he directed this anger at his father and Vegeta, but I still think that he overreacted and caused huge problems when none were necessary. He should have pulled his father aside and told him what was in his heart, and yes, Goku should have sat down with his boys after ChiChi\'s death and tried to see how they were handling it. Shame that Vegeta had to bear the brunt of everyone\'s wrath.
I\'m glad thaku fku finally came up with the idea to take Gohan to otherworld to see his mother. Good idea, by the way, I love it :-)
Whilst I understand Gohan\'s actions a bit more now, I still think he\'s a complete snot, as are the others.
Good chapter.
Looking forward to the next one...Hurry back! :-)
\"Vegeta: YOU FREAKING DISAPPEARED! Think of what I must be thinking!\"
Never even thought of this. Poor Vegeta must be freaking out :-(
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for reviewing so late, had work yesterday got a little bit drunk after (we were supposed to be doing college work) then went to work today... so glad I\'ve got the day off tomorrow. ^-^
Chapter 20...
\'Because he was sick and tired of Trunks always staring at his ass like it was the most interesting thing in the whole universe—which it was, but occasionally his ass needed a break from the intense observation.\' - I guess if you have a nice ass you should no it! ^O^
I\'d have to say this was a very \'nice\' interlude; it’s always nice to read some lemon after some heart aching angst. ^_^
\'(memo to self, never eat food that has been prepared unless you have watched Goten wash his hands.)\' - Yeah he might have been \'preparing\' something else first. ^_~
It was sooooo cute how inexperienced Trunks was, it was a change cus you\'pectpected Goten to be the shy one... since he\'s the chibi...\'Goten giggled. The chibi, he giggled.\' Sooooo cute awwww, I love this version of Goten though, cute nut naughty. ^-^
\"Well I\'m gonna go take a dip in take a dip in the lake over here. Wanna come?\" - Who in their right mind would say no (I definitely don\'t think Trunks would! ^_~)
Chapter 21…
‘just bristling with anger at the idiot thing that accidentally shared Kakarot’s genetics.’ - I agree, it’s a disgrace tha hol holds the same genes, but I guess he’s human, more so then he should be…how disappointing. U_U
‘He was going to try punching the kid.’ – That’s another way of talking to Gohan, so he knows exactly what needed to be said and will remember it. ^-^
‘Smiled as it took him, and thought that this was everything good.’ – That was beautiful, that’s my review summed for this chap! ^_^
Chapter 23…
‘pimple pest. ‘ *laughs till she can’t breath* I know… I know I’m easily amused! U_U;
And whoa! I did not expect Gohan to have all that pent up tension, Gohan and his father needed to talk about this a long time ago, but its good that Goku knows now. All that hate and anger couldn’t have all been directed toward Vegeta,
And Chi-chi definitely has mellowed out since she died, but I guess you can relax when you die… unless your in hell… O_o
It’s cool that Chi-chi’s ok with this though, Gohan needed that, he needs his mother.
It’s kinda sweet. ^-^
Anyways I enjoyed all 3 chand nnd now I’m off to write my story… then go to bed, cus I is sleepy. ^_^
Your going!!! *sniff sniff* who else am I gonna review late?... You\'ll be back??? *grins* thats ok then! See ya soon, and have a good easter! ^_^
Chapter 20...
\'Because he was sick and tired of Trunks always staring at his ass like it was the most interesting thing in the whole universe—which it was, but occasionally his ass needed a break from the intense observation.\' - I guess if you have a nice ass you should no it! ^O^
I\'d have to say this was a very \'nice\' interlude; it’s always nice to read some lemon after some heart aching angst. ^_^
\'(memo to self, never eat food that has been prepared unless you have watched Goten wash his hands.)\' - Yeah he might have been \'preparing\' something else first. ^_~
It was sooooo cute how inexperienced Trunks was, it was a change cus you\'pectpected Goten to be the shy one... since he\'s the chibi...\'Goten giggled. The chibi, he giggled.\' Sooooo cute awwww, I love this version of Goten though, cute nut naughty. ^-^
\"Well I\'m gonna go take a dip in take a dip in the lake over here. Wanna come?\" - Who in their right mind would say no (I definitely don\'t think Trunks would! ^_~)
Chapter 21…
‘just bristling with anger at the idiot thing that accidentally shared Kakarot’s genetics.’ - I agree, it’s a disgrace tha hol holds the same genes, but I guess he’s human, more so then he should be…how disappointing. U_U
‘He was going to try punching the kid.’ – That’s another way of talking to Gohan, so he knows exactly what needed to be said and will remember it. ^-^
‘Smiled as it took him, and thought that this was everything good.’ – That was beautiful, that’s my review summed for this chap! ^_^
Chapter 23…
‘pimple pest. ‘ *laughs till she can’t breath* I know… I know I’m easily amused! U_U;
And whoa! I did not expect Gohan to have all that pent up tension, Gohan and his father needed to talk about this a long time ago, but its good that Goku knows now. All that hate and anger couldn’t have all been directed toward Vegeta,
And Chi-chi definitely has mellowed out since she died, but I guess you can relax when you die… unless your in hell… O_o
It’s cool that Chi-chi’s ok with this though, Gohan needed that, he needs his mother.
It’s kinda sweet. ^-^
Anyways I enjoyed all 3 chand nnd now I’m off to write my story… then go to bed, cus I is sleepy. ^_^
Your going!!! *sniff sniff* who else am I gonna review late?... You\'ll be back??? *grins* thats ok then! See ya soon, and have a good easter! ^_^
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
What kind of moron just SITS down when he could be getting revenge on the ingrates?--aww it\'s ok Vegeta...just count to 10 like me....
Oh, right, because he respected Kakarot --hehe LoL, yeah that\'s why, please don\'t ever forget that. We don\'t want you goon aon a killing spree...well I do...if its aimed at Gohan. But for Goku\'s sake I don\'t...See even Goku keeps me level headed! Wow! whata great guy affecting lives all around the world...
She sighed. “Yeah, you’re right, Vegeta. But I was just saying. Maybe someone should try talking to him.”
He was going to try punching the kid. That seemed to shut his fat mouth rather effectively.---rofl *falls over laughing*
She hugged him then,--- I really, really love Bulma in this fic. She has been through so much, and yet she is still standing by Vegeta and Goku\'s sides. Even encouraging the Prince to go get \'his man\' You really gotta love her. It is quite amazing...
(Which Goku had the feeling he was only doing because Trunks was blushing from his toes to his hair.)--LoL Trunks is so adorable! *shakes head* even his hair is blushing...hehe
Took Goku’s hand in his and wound their fingers—with no glove in the way—and pressed their palms together---hm..ok *feels heartbeat* Ok good foromenoment I could have sworn I died....sheesh, how do you do it woman??? HOW??? The way you write, how you write it...I mean I am envious! It is superb! I loved that. I think Vegeta is awesome for going to find Goku and comforting him in this way. Not hesitating...I just love their relationship and how proud they are of one another. How much they love each other.
Goku snorted, “At least we have all our clothes on.”--LoL, not for long..I hope...
They were wrong. Goku knhat.hat. So very wrong about Vegeta.---AH! *pulls hair out* You are doing it again! Making me crazy...I love that line...Goku is so sweet and he is right. They are wrong about Vegeta...I hope they can see that, and if they can\'t I hope they all go to hell or at least someplace really really hot like..uh...the core of the earth... Nah, I just hope they get what they deserve! I just want Vegeta and Goku to be happy.
I like angst too. But I think it’s become my trademark to combine angst and humor.---yeah I think that is your trademark. You are super good at it! ^.~
Hope you don’t get sick again (not because you didn’t review but because being sick isn’t any fun.)---Eh, I will get sick again...I am sick right now, just not as sick as I was...so thats good!
Anyway thanks for the wonderful chapter.
I loved it as always...
and again have fun on your trip.
keep up the excellence
^.*
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What kind of moron just SITS down when he could be getting revenge on the ingrates?--aww it\'s ok Vegeta...just count to 10 like me....
Oh, right, because he respected Kakarot --hehe LoL, yeah that\'s why, please don\'t ever forget that. We don\'t want you goon aon a killing spree...well I do...if its aimed at Gohan. But for Goku\'s sake I don\'t...See even Goku keeps me level headed! Wow! whata great guy affecting lives all around the world...
She sighed. “Yeah, you’re right, Vegeta. But I was just saying. Maybe someone should try talking to him.”
He was going to try punching the kid. That seemed to shut his fat mouth rather effectively.---rofl *falls over laughing*
She hugged him then,--- I really, really love Bulma in this fic. She has been through so much, and yet she is still standing by Vegeta and Goku\'s sides. Even encouraging the Prince to go get \'his man\' You really gotta love her. It is quite amazing...
(Which Goku had the feeling he was only doing because Trunks was blushing from his toes to his hair.)--LoL Trunks is so adorable! *shakes head* even his hair is blushing...hehe
Took Goku’s hand in his and wound their fingers—with no glove in the way—and pressed their palms together---hm..ok *feels heartbeat* Ok good foromenoment I could have sworn I died....sheesh, how do you do it woman??? HOW??? The way you write, how you write it...I mean I am envious! It is superb! I loved that. I think Vegeta is awesome for going to find Goku and comforting him in this way. Not hesitating...I just love their relationship and how proud they are of one another. How much they love each other.
Goku snorted, “At least we have all our clothes on.”--LoL, not for long..I hope...
They were wrong. Goku knhat.hat. So very wrong about Vegeta.---AH! *pulls hair out* You are doing it again! Making me crazy...I love that line...Goku is so sweet and he is right. They are wrong about Vegeta...I hope they can see that, and if they can\'t I hope they all go to hell or at least someplace really really hot like..uh...the core of the earth... Nah, I just hope they get what they deserve! I just want Vegeta and Goku to be happy.
I like angst too. But I think it’s become my trademark to combine angst and humor.---yeah I think that is your trademark. You are super good at it! ^.~
Hope you don’t get sick again (not because you didn’t review but because being sick isn’t any fun.)---Eh, I will get sick again...I am sick right now, just not as sick as I was...so thats good!
Anyway thanks for the wonderful chapter.
I loved it as always...
and again have fun on your trip.
keep up the excellence
^.*
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