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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was...sweet and angsty. But I\'ve decided that you are trying to kill me with these cliffies.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I could be misinterpreting the beginning, but I get this feeling that the Prince is just a teensy bit annoyed :-D
\"Squash them in his hands and fucking LAUGH as they were pounded into the ground.\"
LOL! Can picture this so well :-D
Completely agreed with all of Vegeta\'s thoughts. I am amazed that he held himself in check at all. He has really fallen hard for his Kakarot :-)
Poor Goku seems a bit shell-shocked at the moment. Can\'t believe what a little shit, Gohan turned out to be. >:-(
\"Oh. He should never have told her about the uke thing...\"
*chuckle* Sweet Vegeta. I love how he anlma lma are with each other :-) Loved his thoughts following the \'uke thing\' Yeah, you betcha, Vegeta is all man. ;-)
LOL! Goku sprung Goten and Trunks...how embarrassing :-)
Oh, completely loved that kiss between Vegeta and Goku. It was pure magic :-)
Loved this:
\"“Gross,” Trunks said.\"
\"Goku snorted, “At least we have alr clr clothes on.”\"
ROTFL!
Really enjoyed Vegeta\'s recognition of what he missed and his gentle teasing of Trunks :-)
Loved the lemon...always love the lemon :-)
Really enjoying the direction you have taken with this fic, added more angst, showing the conflicting reactions between Vegeta and Goku in this new situation, yet keeping them strong, and allowing growth between the two as they recognise each other\'s needs. Love this!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the end dialogue :-D
\"See, I have this fear that everyone that’s like ‘Oh, I love your fanfics Card,’ will be like ‘AH. This original crap is so crappy’ and I’ll only sell books to my relatives. *sigh *\"
LOL! Sorry, definitely not laughing at your fear, just the bit about selling to your relatives :-)
The fear is completely understandable, I bet every author goes through that, and it probably wouldn\'t help, if when you send it to publishers they return it saying \'no thanks\' - I understand that happens alot. But should that happen, never let it stop you, keep trying, send your story to lots of different publishers (what one will turn their nose up at, another may snap up in an instant) also, try sending in different sto...t...try sending short stories to readers digest and the like, to see how that goes...
I don\'t know, I know I\'m never going to be a true author, it\'s not in my blood, so I\'m not sure if my words of encouragement is good advice or not, but I think a fair percentage of authors start off writing short stories for magazines and the like and work their way up...not all, some strike golettyetty much straight away, but I think the majority have to go about it the long, hard, and often, discouraging route...and sometimes, sadly, not everyone makes it. This doesn\'t mean that they\'re no good, just not writing the \'in\' stuff. (always remember that, because you are not a crappy writer.)
But if it\'s your dream, and you have a shot at it, you should take it, (unfortunately, there is always the risk of not realising your dream.) but trying and not succeeding is better than spending the rest of your life wondering \'what if\'
Pearls of wisdom from the completely unsuccessful, and of late, lethargic, chaser of dreams, but there they are for what it\'s worth anyway, but only you know what you are capable of handling, so it is really only up to you in the end...either way, hang in there :-)
\"Squash them in his hands and fucking LAUGH as they were pounded into the ground.\"
LOL! Can picture this so well :-D
Completely agreed with all of Vegeta\'s thoughts. I am amazed that he held himself in check at all. He has really fallen hard for his Kakarot :-)
Poor Goku seems a bit shell-shocked at the moment. Can\'t believe what a little shit, Gohan turned out to be. >:-(
\"Oh. He should never have told her about the uke thing...\"
*chuckle* Sweet Vegeta. I love how he anlma lma are with each other :-) Loved his thoughts following the \'uke thing\' Yeah, you betcha, Vegeta is all man. ;-)
LOL! Goku sprung Goten and Trunks...how embarrassing :-)
Oh, completely loved that kiss between Vegeta and Goku. It was pure magic :-)
Loved this:
\"“Gross,” Trunks said.\"
\"Goku snorted, “At least we have alr clr clothes on.”\"
ROTFL!
Really enjoyed Vegeta\'s recognition of what he missed and his gentle teasing of Trunks :-)
Loved the lemon...always love the lemon :-)
Really enjoying the direction you have taken with this fic, added more angst, showing the conflicting reactions between Vegeta and Goku in this new situation, yet keeping them strong, and allowing growth between the two as they recognise each other\'s needs. Love this!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the end dialogue :-D
\"See, I have this fear that everyone that’s like ‘Oh, I love your fanfics Card,’ will be like ‘AH. This original crap is so crappy’ and I’ll only sell books to my relatives. *sigh *\"
LOL! Sorry, definitely not laughing at your fear, just the bit about selling to your relatives :-)
The fear is completely understandable, I bet every author goes through that, and it probably wouldn\'t help, if when you send it to publishers they return it saying \'no thanks\' - I understand that happens alot. But should that happen, never let it stop you, keep trying, send your story to lots of different publishers (what one will turn their nose up at, another may snap up in an instant) also, try sending in different sto...t...try sending short stories to readers digest and the like, to see how that goes...
I don\'t know, I know I\'m never going to be a true author, it\'s not in my blood, so I\'m not sure if my words of encouragement is good advice or not, but I think a fair percentage of authors start off writing short stories for magazines and the like and work their way up...not all, some strike golettyetty much straight away, but I think the majority have to go about it the long, hard, and often, discouraging route...and sometimes, sadly, not everyone makes it. This doesn\'t mean that they\'re no good, just not writing the \'in\' stuff. (always remember that, because you are not a crappy writer.)
But if it\'s your dream, and you have a shot at it, you should take it, (unfortunately, there is always the risk of not realising your dream.) but trying and not succeeding is better than spending the rest of your life wondering \'what if\'
Pearls of wisdom from the completely unsuccessful, and of late, lethargic, chaser of dreams, but there they are for what it\'s worth anyway, but only you know what you are capable of handling, so it is really only up to you in the end...either way, hang in there :-)
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just when I thought that Gohan could not become more of an ass...he goes and proves me wrong. *Sigh* I am glad that Bulma isn\'t so upset anymore. And of course that Goten and Trunks are banging regularly. And yet another Goku/Geta lemon. Wonderbar!
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really loved the scene at the beginning, with Vegeta and Trunks. Trunks was so funny in a, \'distressed\' sort of way :-)
Loved how Vegeta didn\'t even have to say a word, yet Trunks continued on as if he had, and when Vegeta finally did respond, I\'ll bet Trunks wish that he hadn\'t. His reaction to Vegeta\'s suggestion that he, do something about his \'problem\', was really funny, in a \'I feel sorry for the poor guy\' kind of way. Really love Vegeta\'s, father and son, talks :-D
\"Now he just had to endure her endless smirk every time he showed up at Capsule Corp. Because he had done the unthinkabnd cnd confessed his uke status to her.\"
Ahh, Wonderful Vegeta. He was so sweet to tell her this rather personal thing. I don\'t exactly know why, but I wouldn\'t mind betting, that he did this to help ease her pain at him leaving her. She would now know that it wasn\'t because he was unsatisfied with her as a partner so much, as he needed something else, something she couldn\'t give him, something that was all part and parcel of being uke, and not just the incredible sex - although that is a huge plus. :-) She would also now be aware of the fact that he was truly in love with Kakarot, to surrender to him this way, and he didn\'t just leave her on a whim. :-)
Naughty Bulma has had her fun, now she should stop smirking at the poor guy. *chuckle*
I am glad that Vegeta and Bulma are on good terms again :-)
\"...That twerp was not good enough for her, and he wasn’t about to allow her to settle for someone that was familiar because she was afraid she might have lost her appeal.\"
Yay Vegeta! Dead right too! Yamcha\'s days with Bulma are past, she needs to find someone who will fit her so much better. I love the idea of Vegeta still being her protector :-)
Loved the scene with Goku and Vegeta, when Goku came home and asked Vegeta what was going on with Goten and Trunks. Love that Vegeta knows Goku so well, that he usually knows the right way to deal with him, and love the fact that Goku can upset that firm belief:
\"Hn. Perhaps it was time to rethink this strategy.\"
LOL! Well done...I loved this :-) A partner should never know their mate that well, otherwise...booooring :-)
\"...Which was fine, because if Kakarot didn’t tell him today, Trunks would fess it up tomorrow. Neither one of them were particularly skilled at keeping things a secret.\"
LOL! Loved this too!
I\'m pleased to see that Piccolo has decided to stop being a complete arse :-)
“Dad,” he sa“Why“Why the hell is Trunks trying to molest me every time we fight?”
LOL! Not the question to ask Goku :-D
\"...and could only stare at his child like it had grown a fifth head. Reply, eloquently: “Huh?”\"
ROTFL!
Damn, that whole scene with Goten and Goku was extremely funny...if I kept up highlighting I was have just ended up cutting and pasting the whole thing...loved it :-D
\"Vegeta rolled his eyes and said: “You need to go take a shower. You smell.” Polite as ever.\"
LOL! Ah, the fine art of diplomacy. :-)
\"...Dying evening light spilling in through the windows and silhouetting him in the dusky shadows. The scene was painfully beautiful.\"
Such a moment...Goku has such a romantic heart :-)
\"Vegeta turned, looked at him, sniffed and said: “You smell much better now.”\"
LOL! Hey, err, this could be...err, romantic too...on Vegetasei *cough*
Wonderful lemon!
\"I don’t think that counts as an incomplete lemon.\"
Hell no! That was absolutely incredible. As hot as ever. :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
ROTFL! Loved the end dialogue :-D
\"...About the posting, just close your eyes and hit the button. Or give the story to someone and let them gush about how good it is, then you’ll have more confidence.\"
Thanks for this :-) I\'m the only one I know who reads yaoi, so I\'m going to have to go with option A...pretty much what I did when I posted the \'Balcony scene\' - typed it in, let my finger hover over the review button and just waited until I hit that \'what the hell\' moment, and just pressed :-)
\"I don’t see the purpose of really putting down a character. (Especially since its funnier to do it with humor.)\"
Totally agree :-) Making them the bad guy is one thing, can be fun even, and it\'s good to be able to explore other possible aspects of a character\'s personality, tweak with them, sort of thing, give them faults...as you may have noticed in the case of your Gohan, it can give good results :-D ...but hateful bashing, I agree...that\'s a definite no-no. Probably why I\'ll neveve Tve Tien in any of my fics, otherwise I would be way too tempted to put in snide comments, without any real purpose.
\"Nope! No mind reading! Just something that Piccolo realized… (intentionally trying to be vague here.)\"
And doing a damn good job of it too :-)
\"Oh, the ‘Like my brother!’ outburst....\"
Ah! Thanks, it now makes sense. Armed with this new-found knowledge I went back and re-read the scene and completely cracked up at Vegeta\'s response, and Trunks\' reaction...Vegeta can be a real bastard sometimes...LOL!
Loved how Vegeta didn\'t even have to say a word, yet Trunks continued on as if he had, and when Vegeta finally did respond, I\'ll bet Trunks wish that he hadn\'t. His reaction to Vegeta\'s suggestion that he, do something about his \'problem\', was really funny, in a \'I feel sorry for the poor guy\' kind of way. Really love Vegeta\'s, father and son, talks :-D
\"Now he just had to endure her endless smirk every time he showed up at Capsule Corp. Because he had done the unthinkabnd cnd confessed his uke status to her.\"
Ahh, Wonderful Vegeta. He was so sweet to tell her this rather personal thing. I don\'t exactly know why, but I wouldn\'t mind betting, that he did this to help ease her pain at him leaving her. She would now know that it wasn\'t because he was unsatisfied with her as a partner so much, as he needed something else, something she couldn\'t give him, something that was all part and parcel of being uke, and not just the incredible sex - although that is a huge plus. :-) She would also now be aware of the fact that he was truly in love with Kakarot, to surrender to him this way, and he didn\'t just leave her on a whim. :-)
Naughty Bulma has had her fun, now she should stop smirking at the poor guy. *chuckle*
I am glad that Vegeta and Bulma are on good terms again :-)
\"...That twerp was not good enough for her, and he wasn’t about to allow her to settle for someone that was familiar because she was afraid she might have lost her appeal.\"
Yay Vegeta! Dead right too! Yamcha\'s days with Bulma are past, she needs to find someone who will fit her so much better. I love the idea of Vegeta still being her protector :-)
Loved the scene with Goku and Vegeta, when Goku came home and asked Vegeta what was going on with Goten and Trunks. Love that Vegeta knows Goku so well, that he usually knows the right way to deal with him, and love the fact that Goku can upset that firm belief:
\"Hn. Perhaps it was time to rethink this strategy.\"
LOL! Well done...I loved this :-) A partner should never know their mate that well, otherwise...booooring :-)
\"...Which was fine, because if Kakarot didn’t tell him today, Trunks would fess it up tomorrow. Neither one of them were particularly skilled at keeping things a secret.\"
LOL! Loved this too!
I\'m pleased to see that Piccolo has decided to stop being a complete arse :-)
“Dad,” he sa“Why“Why the hell is Trunks trying to molest me every time we fight?”
LOL! Not the question to ask Goku :-D
\"...and could only stare at his child like it had grown a fifth head. Reply, eloquently: “Huh?”\"
ROTFL!
Damn, that whole scene with Goten and Goku was extremely funny...if I kept up highlighting I was have just ended up cutting and pasting the whole thing...loved it :-D
\"Vegeta rolled his eyes and said: “You need to go take a shower. You smell.” Polite as ever.\"
LOL! Ah, the fine art of diplomacy. :-)
\"...Dying evening light spilling in through the windows and silhouetting him in the dusky shadows. The scene was painfully beautiful.\"
Such a moment...Goku has such a romantic heart :-)
\"Vegeta turned, looked at him, sniffed and said: “You smell much better now.”\"
LOL! Hey, err, this could be...err, romantic too...on Vegetasei *cough*
Wonderful lemon!
\"I don’t think that counts as an incomplete lemon.\"
Hell no! That was absolutely incredible. As hot as ever. :-)
Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
ROTFL! Loved the end dialogue :-D
\"...About the posting, just close your eyes and hit the button. Or give the story to someone and let them gush about how good it is, then you’ll have more confidence.\"
Thanks for this :-) I\'m the only one I know who reads yaoi, so I\'m going to have to go with option A...pretty much what I did when I posted the \'Balcony scene\' - typed it in, let my finger hover over the review button and just waited until I hit that \'what the hell\' moment, and just pressed :-)
\"I don’t see the purpose of really putting down a character. (Especially since its funnier to do it with humor.)\"
Totally agree :-) Making them the bad guy is one thing, can be fun even, and it\'s good to be able to explore other possible aspects of a character\'s personality, tweak with them, sort of thing, give them faults...as you may have noticed in the case of your Gohan, it can give good results :-D ...but hateful bashing, I agree...that\'s a definite no-no. Probably why I\'ll neveve Tve Tien in any of my fics, otherwise I would be way too tempted to put in snide comments, without any real purpose.
\"Nope! No mind reading! Just something that Piccolo realized… (intentionally trying to be vague here.)\"
And doing a damn good job of it too :-)
\"Oh, the ‘Like my brother!’ outburst....\"
Ah! Thanks, it now makes sense. Armed with this new-found knowledge I went back and re-read the scene and completely cracked up at Vegeta\'s response, and Trunks\' reaction...Vegeta can be a real bastard sometimes...LOL!
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
‘worewore that if it laughed at him he was going to rip its antennas off and fry them in butter like frog legs. Then he would feed them back to the Namekian. While he GRINNED in AMUSEMENT.’ – that’s one way to deal with your problems! ^_^
I think Vegeta’s so sweet, He loves him…awww
‘Because he loved all of them. Loved this world. And he loved Vegeta, and he would fight for all of it. Not even their hate could change that.’ – that was so… beautiful *sniffs*
I really really hate Gohan, Goku should have let Vegeta carry on beating him. Stupid brat!
All of them acting like children; they don’t seem to mind Vegeta when he’s helping defend the planet!
I for one don’t mind you going homicidal and killing Gohan and Tien… really I don’t mind. ^-^
Looking forward to next chapter! ^_^
I think Vegeta’s so sweet, He loves him…awww
‘Because he loved all of them. Loved this world. And he loved Vegeta, and he would fight for all of it. Not even their hate could change that.’ – that was so… beautiful *sniffs*
I really really hate Gohan, Goku should have let Vegeta carry on beating him. Stupid brat!
All of them acting like children; they don’t seem to mind Vegeta when he’s helping defend the planet!
I for one don’t mind you going homicidal and killing Gohan and Tien… really I don’t mind. ^-^
Looking forward to next chapter! ^_^
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!!!
*sobs* I didn\'t review yesterday...I was sick...I didn\'t even get on the comp! -_-
Anyway enough of my sickly life and onto your wonderful chappie that I loved!!!!
“Ever since you asked about Goten I’ve been thinking about it. Do you know how hard it is to spar with someone that you’re visualizing naked?”--rofl, hmm.no Trunks I don\'t know how HARD it is...why don\'t you tell us...hm...
This was a great conversation. All he had to do was look at his child, and his son just continued on without even waiting for a response.--LoL That sounds like a conversation Vegeta would love.
“I fail to see how this is a big problem,” Vegeta said, “Do you not know what you’re doing?”--rofl...poor Trunks. Vegeta is funny!
“Dad,” he said, “Why the hell is Trunks trying to molest me every time we fight?”--rofl!!!!!!!!! Poor Goten....not really. Just have sex with the guy and get it over with
If he had been flying at the time he probably would have fallen straight down through the planet.--oh gosh LoL hehe through the planet...that a great way to describe his reaction. I loved it!
Gk: Oi. ‘Geta, what did we say about reading the thesaurus?--LoL
Great chappie, as always!
^.*
-MB-
*sobs* I didn\'t review yesterday...I was sick...I didn\'t even get on the comp! -_-
Anyway enough of my sickly life and onto your wonderful chappie that I loved!!!!
“Ever since you asked about Goten I’ve been thinking about it. Do you know how hard it is to spar with someone that you’re visualizing naked?”--rofl, hmm.no Trunks I don\'t know how HARD it is...why don\'t you tell us...hm...
This was a great conversation. All he had to do was look at his child, and his son just continued on without even waiting for a response.--LoL That sounds like a conversation Vegeta would love.
“I fail to see how this is a big problem,” Vegeta said, “Do you not know what you’re doing?”--rofl...poor Trunks. Vegeta is funny!
“Dad,” he said, “Why the hell is Trunks trying to molest me every time we fight?”--rofl!!!!!!!!! Poor Goten....not really. Just have sex with the guy and get it over with
If he had been flying at the time he probably would have fallen straight down through the planet.--oh gosh LoL hehe through the planet...that a great way to describe his reaction. I loved it!
Gk: Oi. ‘Geta, what did we say about reading the thesaurus?--LoL
Great chappie, as always!
^.*
-MB-
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts as he watched the way Piccolo kept grinning at him. Loved the way Piccolo kept grinning at him and absolutely loved this:
\"He swore that if it laughed at him he was going to rip its antennas off and fry them in butter like frog legs. Then he would feed them back to the Namekian. While he GRINNED in AMUSEMENT.\"
LOL! My, the Prince seems to be a shade testy, doesn\'t he? :-D Very Vegeta...I loved it.
Completely enjoyed Vegeta\'s reaction when Piccolo stated, that Vegeta loved Goku. He certainly didn\'t seem to expect this and I love the way it totally threw him. Also thought it was sweet that ultimately, he was okay with Piccolo knowing this...just so long as he didn\'t spread it around. :-)
Loved the initial scenes when Goku finally turned up. Loved it when Vegeta had regained his composure and got into a fighting stance, talking about sparring, just after Goku made a point of getting a response from him and calling him \'Geta...loved how Piccolo saw right through this...LOL!
...And this is where the fun stopped, and the idiot brigade showed up.
Gutless bastards...they were playing on the fact that Goku wouldn\'t fight his own son, probably hoping that Vegeta would, and there would end the relationship. I\'m so proud of Vegeta for being able to turn the other cheek...it would not have been easy...I was ready to beat the shit out of them all, myself.
None of this can have been easy on Goku either...he tried to keep it civil, but they wouldn\'t comply. I love this bit:
\"Turs bas back on them like they had done to him and tell them that should they need someone to save their planet they needed to remember that the four of them were so muchter ter than he was. Filth like him didn’t deserve to save their world.\"
I know that he would never do this, not just for their sake, but for the planet itself and the billions of people he shared the Earth with, but just for once, it would be nice if he just gave them the finger and took off into space with Vegeta, leaving them to their \'holier than thou\' lives.
Gods I hate Tien! Really loved the way Piccolo was unfazed by Gohan\'s attempt at emotional blackmail...yay Piccolo!
Don\'t blame Vegeta for his outburst at all. Thought that Goku handled him wonderfully, simply restraining him, without hurting him, showing no anger at his actions, silently, yet obviously, supporting him, whilst not actually allowing him to further hurt his son...beautifully handled.
Totally loved his answer to the dweeb team:
“Maybe I think he’s better than the alternative.”
Well said Goku! :-)
Truly, seriously and deeply annoyed with Tien. Very pleased that Goku told them nothing. He shouldn\'t have tstifstify their status for them to approve of the relationship. Goku doesn\'t need their approval, what he needs is to go out and get some new friends. He\'s already got the best anyway, with Vegeta and Piccolo :-)
\"But he looked at Goku, told him without having to speak that he was willing to give him this because he cared about Goku and was willing to stand by his decision.\"
Got all misty eyed at this.
I love how Piccolo stepped up to bat for them. Although, for me, a le Mle Masenko, would go down well just about here :-)
Felt bad for Goku, because this hurt him, but I personally think that he\'s better off without them.
\"Reached out and touched Vegeta, felt strong, gloved fingers on his wrist, and closed his eyes, concentrated on where he wanted to go and instant transmissioned them out.\"
Really loved the scene which culminated in the above sentence ...A whole wealth of emotion in this. Very well done!
\"ASSHOLES! * Goku calmly h bac back author-ess as she attempts to get close enough to keyboard to accidentally kill Gohan & Tien. *\"
Damn that instant tansmission, isn\'t he supposed to be with Vegeta? LOL!
Hmm, I\'m sort of curious as to where Goku is taking Vegeta as well.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter :-)
LOL! Totally loved the end dialogue :-D
\"He swore that if it laughed at him he was going to rip its antennas off and fry them in butter like frog legs. Then he would feed them back to the Namekian. While he GRINNED in AMUSEMENT.\"
LOL! My, the Prince seems to be a shade testy, doesn\'t he? :-D Very Vegeta...I loved it.
Completely enjoyed Vegeta\'s reaction when Piccolo stated, that Vegeta loved Goku. He certainly didn\'t seem to expect this and I love the way it totally threw him. Also thought it was sweet that ultimately, he was okay with Piccolo knowing this...just so long as he didn\'t spread it around. :-)
Loved the initial scenes when Goku finally turned up. Loved it when Vegeta had regained his composure and got into a fighting stance, talking about sparring, just after Goku made a point of getting a response from him and calling him \'Geta...loved how Piccolo saw right through this...LOL!
...And this is where the fun stopped, and the idiot brigade showed up.
Gutless bastards...they were playing on the fact that Goku wouldn\'t fight his own son, probably hoping that Vegeta would, and there would end the relationship. I\'m so proud of Vegeta for being able to turn the other cheek...it would not have been easy...I was ready to beat the shit out of them all, myself.
None of this can have been easy on Goku either...he tried to keep it civil, but they wouldn\'t comply. I love this bit:
\"Turs bas back on them like they had done to him and tell them that should they need someone to save their planet they needed to remember that the four of them were so muchter ter than he was. Filth like him didn’t deserve to save their world.\"
I know that he would never do this, not just for their sake, but for the planet itself and the billions of people he shared the Earth with, but just for once, it would be nice if he just gave them the finger and took off into space with Vegeta, leaving them to their \'holier than thou\' lives.
Gods I hate Tien! Really loved the way Piccolo was unfazed by Gohan\'s attempt at emotional blackmail...yay Piccolo!
Don\'t blame Vegeta for his outburst at all. Thought that Goku handled him wonderfully, simply restraining him, without hurting him, showing no anger at his actions, silently, yet obviously, supporting him, whilst not actually allowing him to further hurt his son...beautifully handled.
Totally loved his answer to the dweeb team:
“Maybe I think he’s better than the alternative.”
Well said Goku! :-)
Truly, seriously and deeply annoyed with Tien. Very pleased that Goku told them nothing. He shouldn\'t have tstifstify their status for them to approve of the relationship. Goku doesn\'t need their approval, what he needs is to go out and get some new friends. He\'s already got the best anyway, with Vegeta and Piccolo :-)
\"But he looked at Goku, told him without having to speak that he was willing to give him this because he cared about Goku and was willing to stand by his decision.\"
Got all misty eyed at this.
I love how Piccolo stepped up to bat for them. Although, for me, a le Mle Masenko, would go down well just about here :-)
Felt bad for Goku, because this hurt him, but I personally think that he\'s better off without them.
\"Reached out and touched Vegeta, felt strong, gloved fingers on his wrist, and closed his eyes, concentrated on where he wanted to go and instant transmissioned them out.\"
Really loved the scene which culminated in the above sentence ...A whole wealth of emotion in this. Very well done!
\"ASSHOLES! * Goku calmly h bac back author-ess as she attempts to get close enough to keyboard to accidentally kill Gohan & Tien. *\"
Damn that instant tansmission, isn\'t he supposed to be with Vegeta? LOL!
Hmm, I\'m sort of curious as to where Goku is taking Vegeta as well.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter :-)
LOL! Totally loved the end dialogue :-D
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review was getting a tad long, so I thought I\'d post responses here.
Loved your response to Jaygoose...LOL!
\"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You’re reviewing right as I am writing the responses!\"
Uh, yeah...sorry about that. I sorta noticed that myself, when I posted the second review. Got caught up in a million things today and didn\'t get home until late. When I saw that you were posting, I was frantically trying to keep ahead...kinda funny when you think about it...:-D
\"Yeah, your thoughts were my thoughts on Vegeta’s thoughts about Bulma.\"
LOL! Cool :-)
\"Yeah, if they were on Vegeta-sei, Vegeta would be a big ole softy full of Shakespearean-type romance. “You smell much better now.” (Sadly, in my version of the Saiyan world, that’s probably true.)\"
LOL! And I think your version of the Saiyan world is probably more realistic, they\'re warriors...not namby pamby rose sniffers :-) A good strong clean scent is probably a big deal amongst the horny ones...LOL!
\"...So you’ll be abo loo look forward to me gushing about your fics. *nods like this makes all the difference in the world. *\"
ckleckles* And, thank-you. :-) It actually does make all the difference. Naturally, I would love for many people to like my stories, but if just one person does, then that\'s enough to keep me going...unless I was doing this for a living, then it would really suck...LOL!
\"I don’t like Tien either. Hopefully I won’t be tooooooo mean to him.\"
Tempting...very tempting. :-)
Loved your response to Jaygoose...LOL!
\"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You’re reviewing right as I am writing the responses!\"
Uh, yeah...sorry about that. I sorta noticed that myself, when I posted the second review. Got caught up in a million things today and didn\'t get home until late. When I saw that you were posting, I was frantically trying to keep ahead...kinda funny when you think about it...:-D
\"Yeah, your thoughts were my thoughts on Vegeta’s thoughts about Bulma.\"
LOL! Cool :-)
\"Yeah, if they were on Vegeta-sei, Vegeta would be a big ole softy full of Shakespearean-type romance. “You smell much better now.” (Sadly, in my version of the Saiyan world, that’s probably true.)\"
LOL! And I think your version of the Saiyan world is probably more realistic, they\'re warriors...not namby pamby rose sniffers :-) A good strong clean scent is probably a big deal amongst the horny ones...LOL!
\"...So you’ll be abo loo look forward to me gushing about your fics. *nods like this makes all the difference in the world. *\"
ckleckles* And, thank-you. :-) It actually does make all the difference. Naturally, I would love for many people to like my stories, but if just one person does, then that\'s enough to keep me going...unless I was doing this for a living, then it would really suck...LOL!
\"I don’t like Tien either. Hopefully I won’t be tooooooo mean to him.\"
Tempting...very tempting. :-)
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for \'Lemony Interlude\' Tr/Gt
\"...but occasionally his ass needed a break from the intense observation. After all, even rear-ends got shy.\"
LOL!
\"Just so they could go back to being the way they were before Trunks realized that he had hormones and thought about sex and that he was attracted to his best friend.\"
Ah, dear, sweet, innocent Goten. There\'s no going back. Gotta love his naiveté :-D
Oh poor Trunks, so flustered, so horny and so very, unsure. Goten really surprised me :-)
\"(Who put screw tops on lube? Sheesh, horny people did not want to waste time opening the damn thing.)\"
LOL!
“Alright, now you need to get your hand off my dick and put your fingers to good use.”
LOL! And they say romance is dead :-D
\"(Memo to self, never eat food that Goten has prepared unless you hwatcwatched him wash his hands.)\"
ROTFL!
Okay. I\'m amazed I made it as far as I did, but once it started to get into the nitty gritty, I got to skimming again...honestly don\'t know why...I love it when Goku and Vegeta do it, you\'d think I\'d be able to fully make it through a non-Vegeta one...oh well. Nonetheless, I really enjoyed the beginning of it all.ry ary amusing :-D
\"...but occasionally his ass needed a break from the intense observation. After all, even rear-ends got shy.\"
LOL!
\"Just so they could go back to being the way they were before Trunks realized that he had hormones and thought about sex and that he was attracted to his best friend.\"
Ah, dear, sweet, innocent Goten. There\'s no going back. Gotta love his naiveté :-D
Oh poor Trunks, so flustered, so horny and so very, unsure. Goten really surprised me :-)
\"(Who put screw tops on lube? Sheesh, horny people did not want to waste time opening the damn thing.)\"
LOL!
“Alright, now you need to get your hand off my dick and put your fingers to good use.”
LOL! And they say romance is dead :-D
\"(Memo to self, never eat food that Goten has prepared unless you hwatcwatched him wash his hands.)\"
ROTFL!
Okay. I\'m amazed I made it as far as I did, but once it started to get into the nitty gritty, I got to skimming again...honestly don\'t know why...I love it when Goku and Vegeta do it, you\'d think I\'d be able to fully make it through a non-Vegeta one...oh well. Nonetheless, I really enjoyed the beginning of it all.ry ary amusing :-D
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He...he...Goten is the super freak in this one. Good, Trunks always gets that wrap because he\'s Vegeta\'s son. Why does everyone think that Vegeta is a perv? Anyway, very creative Truten lemon. I liked it alot.