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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that that fight between Goten and Gohan was bound to happen. And the way that Vegeta handled Piccolo was hilarious. I feel bad for Goku though...Gohan is an ass.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I´ve been with you for weeks now, impatiently waiting for the next chapter and loving each and every one of them... anyway, you have an amazing style and put so much emotion into your words and sentences it´s a real pleasure getting to read them. I think the way you write one can truly call it \"art\" in a sense... Of all your DBZ-fictions this is probably my favorite and I´d hate to see it end anytime soon... I praise everyone who inspired you to write and thicken the plot and I´m eternally gratefull to those that encouraged you to poste your stories in the first place... Love them!!! Love your style... it´s improving the more you write (IF there is anything to improve) and you are already on my personal list of my favorite DBZ-authors (meaning you´ve got a place in my book and that´s a honour in itsself since I´m really picky about it...) ^-^ Keep it up and keep going. *huggs you*
Greetings,
~kodachi~
Greetings,
~kodachi~
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was loverly. I love Goku/Geta lemons. It doesn\'t matter how many I read, I always find them fascinating. He He. I maybe a Geta fan but I also apprieciate a well written Goku. He is the star you know. :)
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I love it..such emotion...
“Why would I stop them?” Vegeta asked.\"--LoL hehe yeah that sounds like Geta...*shakes head* he knows why he should stop them, for Goku\'s sake not stupid Gohans...
\"Silently prayed that Kakarot got in a few punches before he showed up and tried to split up a fight that he just wanted to egg on.\"--LoL thats so funneeeee. I silently prayed that too. stupid Gohan!!!
“Vegeta!” the bald one said (as if he needed to let everyone know the Prince’s name.)--Krillen, bleh!...but have you ever noticed that he always finds a way to say Vegeta\'s name on DBZ no matter what is happeneing....
“Get out of here,” Piccolo said, “We don’t want you around us.”--WHAT!!! UGH! I am seriously dissapointed in Piccolo...I really can\'t believe him. Out of everyone on that lookout he should identify w/ Vegeta the most.
“I don’t have to ask him,” Kakarot said—he was almost growling out the words—“Because I trust him.”---aww of course he trusts Vegeta...who wouldn\'t? Oh wait...lemme guess everyone on the lookout!
This coming from she who tossed in a plot twist?--hehe oh yeah, I did do that...didn\'t I?
I loved this chapter and I feel really bad for Bulma, but she seems to be holding her ground fairly well. Although it\'s all still upsetting, it just seems like one big mess, and I hope Goku and Geta can be happy together...err...*reads end of last chapter* well it seems as if they are already very happy ^.^ So scratch that.
Your fic brings up a good point that my brothers and I have always argued about and still do. The fact that sometimes on DBZ ppl never trust Vegeta even though he has fought alongside them for years but yet Krillen marries 18 and no one cares. No one ever distrusts her, then Piccolo no one ever second guesses him (but Piccolo seems to always understand Vegeta, thats why I like that green bean, not to mention he said Vegeta is the greatest tactician/strategist and noone can ever tell if he is bluffing or not)...and Yamcha the former desert bandit...and Tien the stupid 3 eyed pervert, I just always hated Tien. For the simple fact that he was always rude to Vegeta for what Nappa did to him. Oh get over it 3 eyes! But anyway I just think Vegeta deserves a liitle more trust than he gets...Me luvs my Geta!
Anyway I can\'t wait for the update tomorrow.
Thanks for another drama filled lemon yummed exciting chapter!
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“Why would I stop them?” Vegeta asked.\"--LoL hehe yeah that sounds like Geta...*shakes head* he knows why he should stop them, for Goku\'s sake not stupid Gohans...
\"Silently prayed that Kakarot got in a few punches before he showed up and tried to split up a fight that he just wanted to egg on.\"--LoL thats so funneeeee. I silently prayed that too. stupid Gohan!!!
“Vegeta!” the bald one said (as if he needed to let everyone know the Prince’s name.)--Krillen, bleh!...but have you ever noticed that he always finds a way to say Vegeta\'s name on DBZ no matter what is happeneing....
“Get out of here,” Piccolo said, “We don’t want you around us.”--WHAT!!! UGH! I am seriously dissapointed in Piccolo...I really can\'t believe him. Out of everyone on that lookout he should identify w/ Vegeta the most.
“I don’t have to ask him,” Kakarot said—he was almost growling out the words—“Because I trust him.”---aww of course he trusts Vegeta...who wouldn\'t? Oh wait...lemme guess everyone on the lookout!
This coming from she who tossed in a plot twist?--hehe oh yeah, I did do that...didn\'t I?
I loved this chapter and I feel really bad for Bulma, but she seems to be holding her ground fairly well. Although it\'s all still upsetting, it just seems like one big mess, and I hope Goku and Geta can be happy together...err...*reads end of last chapter* well it seems as if they are already very happy ^.^ So scratch that.
Your fic brings up a good point that my brothers and I have always argued about and still do. The fact that sometimes on DBZ ppl never trust Vegeta even though he has fought alongside them for years but yet Krillen marries 18 and no one cares. No one ever distrusts her, then Piccolo no one ever second guesses him (but Piccolo seems to always understand Vegeta, thats why I like that green bean, not to mention he said Vegeta is the greatest tactician/strategist and noone can ever tell if he is bluffing or not)...and Yamcha the former desert bandit...and Tien the stupid 3 eyed pervert, I just always hated Tien. For the simple fact that he was always rude to Vegeta for what Nappa did to him. Oh get over it 3 eyes! But anyway I just think Vegeta deserves a liitle more trust than he gets...Me luvs my Geta!
Anyway I can\'t wait for the update tomorrow.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was Hott!!! ^_~
And it was so sweet.
I liked the way you put a little realism in it \'morning breath\' LOL ^-^ It\'s true just because it\'s a fanfic doesn\'t mean it can\'t be included.
And I liked Vegeta\'s reply at the end, he\'s extremely talkative isn\'t he! ^_^
You reviewed my story! Yay!!! I found it when I logged on, I was like \'hey I\'m sure I didn\'t have that many reviews before\' and I found your reviews, I was so happy *hugs*
Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
And it was so sweet.
I liked the way you put a little realism in it \'morning breath\' LOL ^-^ It\'s true just because it\'s a fanfic doesn\'t mean it can\'t be included.
And I liked Vegeta\'s reply at the end, he\'s extremely talkative isn\'t he! ^_^
You reviewed my story! Yay!!! I found it when I logged on, I was like \'hey I\'m sure I didn\'t have that many reviews before\' and I found your reviews, I was so happy *hugs*
Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m pleased that when Vegeta found out about Bulma\'s pregnancy, he went straight to her. Chuckled when as soonhe lhe landed, Bulma made a grab for him and starting cursing out all Saiyans :-)
“You need to go stop them before Gohan gets hurt.”
\"“Why would I stop them?” Vegeta asked.\"
LOL! Love this! Honest and straight to the point. Very Vegeta :-D
\"...There was bitterness in that, the implication that somehow she was better than Kakarot because she was not going to try to ‘steal’ Vegeta....\"
Can\'t blame her for her tone, it\'s pretty natural...even though it definitely takes two to tango, and Vegeta chose to go with Goku, she has a right to feel this way about Goku (and no doubt be equally pissed at Vegeta). Can\'t help but feel sorry for her, loving someone whose heart is elsewhere, is very sad :-(
Love that she still has attitude with Vegeta. :-D
\"Silently prayed that Kakarot got in a few punches before he showed up and tried to split up a fight that he just wanted to egg on.\"
LOL! Vegeta to the rescue? Don\'t hold your breath Gohan :-D
\"“Vegeta!” the bald one said (as if he needed to let everyone know the Prince’s name.)\"
LOL! Krillin is such a loser.
“Get out of here,” Piccolo said, “We don’t want you around us.”
Really disappointed in Piccolo...hello, Earth to Piccolo? Ex demon Lord...remember?
“Yeah,” Baldy said, “I should have killed you when d thd the chance.”
Maybe you should have Krillin, you\'ll never get that opportunity again. Threats from the man who ran around in circles, whilst androids 17 & 18 were beating the shit out of everyone...and then went all gooey when android 18 gave him a peck on the cheek...what a girl!
\"Kakarot touched down next to him, stood in front of him enough that it was understood who’s side he was really on without being too blatant in his body language.\"
Yeah Kakarot! The two strongest in the universe - side by side. If s a s a member of Gohan\'s groupies, I\'d be wetting myself about now :-D
“I don’t have to ask him,” Kakarot said—he was almost growling out the words—“Because I trust him.”
Yes! I love this guy! :-)
\"He couldn’t remember a time when he liked that kid.\"
LOL! Annoying little snot!
Loved how Goku faced up to them all, loved hogetageta stood at his side and didn\'t incite any trouble, and I totally sympathised with Goku\'s thoughts in regards to the others...He must have been so disappointed in his \'friends\' Liked this:
\"...and then there was Yamcha. Who actually he couldn’t think of anything about and spared the man from his momentary dislike.\"
Makes a nice change in fanfiction to not have Yamcha as the loud troublemaker...
\"...Wasn’t so sure that it was the best course of action because he knew as well as the next that if she asked him to leave Vegeta he would. Then he wouldn’t like Bulma anymore and he didn’t want either of those things to happen.\"
Really liked this. Goku\'s still battling with his inner feelings, his love for his friend and the fact that he knows that he let her down, and his love for Vegeta, whom he never wants to let down.
\"That made Goku shake his head to realize that Vegeta was trying not to make things diffi for for him by speaking against his son.\"
Love Vegeta (no surprise there) :-D Love how he\'s keeping his opinions to himself for the sake of Goku...must be hard for the arrogant Prince :-)
\"Personally, I’m pissed. But I’m the only one that has a right t.”\".”\"
Well said! The others have no right to interfere with things that have nothing to do with them.
\"Had the suspicious that a hot iron and his genitals would probably be involved.\"
LOL! Oooo, Ouchi
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\"...Because if he apologized that would mean he was sorry he was with Vegeta now and he wasn’t, he was just sorry that he had hurt Bulma.\"
Ah, this is so sweet, yet so sad...
Really liked how Bulma handled herself with the two Saiyans and really liked the fact that Vegeta knew when it was time to leave...I feel so guilty for being pleased that Goku and Vegeta are together. :-(
Loved Goku\'s reflections on Vegeta\'s current frame of mind. I do see how his love for Bulma and his kids would have Vegeta having a battle with his conscience, but it\'s something that he would definitely keep to himself, deal with in his way,way, and not let interfere with his choices...I like that Goku can pick up on this anyway :-)
\"...So he crossed the room, kissed him. Felt Vegeta’s hands curl up in his clothes and pull on him. Felt the violent shudders as he felt the teeth biting at his lips and his tongue.\"
Gods...so good!
\"And that was fine, but as he started to hum, he thought that maybe next time he should use a pillow or something to put under his knees.\"
ROTFL! Gods woman, you are not supposed to make me laugh when I am enjoying a hot G/V scene. :-D
Can\'t wait for this to continue...have to wait until Monday...Argh!
Loved the end dialogue :-)
“You need to go stop them before Gohan gets hurt.”
\"“Why would I stop them?” Vegeta asked.\"
LOL! Love this! Honest and straight to the point. Very Vegeta :-D
\"...There was bitterness in that, the implication that somehow she was better than Kakarot because she was not going to try to ‘steal’ Vegeta....\"
Can\'t blame her for her tone, it\'s pretty natural...even though it definitely takes two to tango, and Vegeta chose to go with Goku, she has a right to feel this way about Goku (and no doubt be equally pissed at Vegeta). Can\'t help but feel sorry for her, loving someone whose heart is elsewhere, is very sad :-(
Love that she still has attitude with Vegeta. :-D
\"Silently prayed that Kakarot got in a few punches before he showed up and tried to split up a fight that he just wanted to egg on.\"
LOL! Vegeta to the rescue? Don\'t hold your breath Gohan :-D
\"“Vegeta!” the bald one said (as if he needed to let everyone know the Prince’s name.)\"
LOL! Krillin is such a loser.
“Get out of here,” Piccolo said, “We don’t want you around us.”
Really disappointed in Piccolo...hello, Earth to Piccolo? Ex demon Lord...remember?
“Yeah,” Baldy said, “I should have killed you when d thd the chance.”
Maybe you should have Krillin, you\'ll never get that opportunity again. Threats from the man who ran around in circles, whilst androids 17 & 18 were beating the shit out of everyone...and then went all gooey when android 18 gave him a peck on the cheek...what a girl!
\"Kakarot touched down next to him, stood in front of him enough that it was understood who’s side he was really on without being too blatant in his body language.\"
Yeah Kakarot! The two strongest in the universe - side by side. If s a s a member of Gohan\'s groupies, I\'d be wetting myself about now :-D
“I don’t have to ask him,” Kakarot said—he was almost growling out the words—“Because I trust him.”
Yes! I love this guy! :-)
\"He couldn’t remember a time when he liked that kid.\"
LOL! Annoying little snot!
Loved how Goku faced up to them all, loved hogetageta stood at his side and didn\'t incite any trouble, and I totally sympathised with Goku\'s thoughts in regards to the others...He must have been so disappointed in his \'friends\' Liked this:
\"...and then there was Yamcha. Who actually he couldn’t think of anything about and spared the man from his momentary dislike.\"
Makes a nice change in fanfiction to not have Yamcha as the loud troublemaker...
\"...Wasn’t so sure that it was the best course of action because he knew as well as the next that if she asked him to leave Vegeta he would. Then he wouldn’t like Bulma anymore and he didn’t want either of those things to happen.\"
Really liked this. Goku\'s still battling with his inner feelings, his love for his friend and the fact that he knows that he let her down, and his love for Vegeta, whom he never wants to let down.
\"That made Goku shake his head to realize that Vegeta was trying not to make things diffi for for him by speaking against his son.\"
Love Vegeta (no surprise there) :-D Love how he\'s keeping his opinions to himself for the sake of Goku...must be hard for the arrogant Prince :-)
\"Personally, I’m pissed. But I’m the only one that has a right t.”\".”\"
Well said! The others have no right to interfere with things that have nothing to do with them.
\"Had the suspicious that a hot iron and his genitals would probably be involved.\"
LOL! Oooo, Ouchi
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\"...Because if he apologized that would mean he was sorry he was with Vegeta now and he wasn’t, he was just sorry that he had hurt Bulma.\"
Ah, this is so sweet, yet so sad...
Really liked how Bulma handled herself with the two Saiyans and really liked the fact that Vegeta knew when it was time to leave...I feel so guilty for being pleased that Goku and Vegeta are together. :-(
Loved Goku\'s reflections on Vegeta\'s current frame of mind. I do see how his love for Bulma and his kids would have Vegeta having a battle with his conscience, but it\'s something that he would definitely keep to himself, deal with in his way,way, and not let interfere with his choices...I like that Goku can pick up on this anyway :-)
\"...So he crossed the room, kissed him. Felt Vegeta’s hands curl up in his clothes and pull on him. Felt the violent shudders as he felt the teeth biting at his lips and his tongue.\"
Gods...so good!
\"And that was fine, but as he started to hum, he thought that maybe next time he should use a pillow or something to put under his knees.\"
ROTFL! Gods woman, you are not supposed to make me laugh when I am enjoying a hot G/V scene. :-D
Can\'t wait for this to continue...have to wait until Monday...Argh!
Loved the end dialogue :-)
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another long review...so responses to your responses are here:
Responding to your response to Jaygoose:
\"No, Goku’s not the idiot everyone wants him to be. But then, we shouldn’t have thought he was. (Ah, showing my colors as a Goku fan.)\"
Never bought into that idiot bit either...thought he acted pretty damn annoying at times...but then again so did my Vegeta ;-) Come to think of it...everyone did :-D But yeah, Goku was way too sharp on the battlefield to ever be considered an idiot...except for when he let Freiza live...still scratching my head on that one, but then again, I\'m still scratching my head on Vegeta allowing Cell to absorb 18...and Future Trunks not killing 18 when he had the chance...which would have prevented the absorption...ah well...
Totally understand your \'showing of colours\' I get pretefenefensive of Vegeta...it\'s natural :-D
In your responses to me:
Thanks for answering my question about Goten :-)
Glad you like my theory :-) I have a slight confidence problem and am now terrified that you\'re going to read my stories and think they suck...visualising future review:
Uh...Yeah...That was...err, interesting (yeah that will do) interesting. Uh. looking forward to yoext ext chapter...but no rush...
Or... Man! That totally sucked! :-D
\"And uhh…there was something else I wanted to say…Gee. Brain not working. *goes back to read review * Oh! Got it now.\"
(chuckle) I like the conversational tone of this :-)
You sound like a good friend. I like that. I hope that you have someone whom you can rely on too. It\'s good that you recognise the \'moochers\' though, otherwise you could get seriously hurt. I\'m the loyal type too and have had my share of bad experiences with \'friends\' I now mainly have aquaintances, but have two friends whom I truly call friend, and I consider myself damn lucky...they\'re the best. :-)
\"So I’m not that fond of it, but it’s what I do most and best. If that makes sense.\"
I guess yeah, if you have a flair for that genre, it would explain why you write it the most and the best, even if it\'s not your first love...but I\'m glad that you write in other areas, because I love these fics you\'re writing now, and you do these very well. I\'m assuming that your sci/fi and fantasy works are original? If they get published, there is a good chance that I will end up with a few copies of your work on my shelves...especially the fantasy...love the genre :-)
Responding to your response to Jaygoose:
\"No, Goku’s not the idiot everyone wants him to be. But then, we shouldn’t have thought he was. (Ah, showing my colors as a Goku fan.)\"
Never bought into that idiot bit either...thought he acted pretty damn annoying at times...but then again so did my Vegeta ;-) Come to think of it...everyone did :-D But yeah, Goku was way too sharp on the battlefield to ever be considered an idiot...except for when he let Freiza live...still scratching my head on that one, but then again, I\'m still scratching my head on Vegeta allowing Cell to absorb 18...and Future Trunks not killing 18 when he had the chance...which would have prevented the absorption...ah well...
Totally understand your \'showing of colours\' I get pretefenefensive of Vegeta...it\'s natural :-D
In your responses to me:
Thanks for answering my question about Goten :-)
Glad you like my theory :-) I have a slight confidence problem and am now terrified that you\'re going to read my stories and think they suck...visualising future review:
Uh...Yeah...That was...err, interesting (yeah that will do) interesting. Uh. looking forward to yoext ext chapter...but no rush...
Or... Man! That totally sucked! :-D
\"And uhh…there was something else I wanted to say…Gee. Brain not working. *goes back to read review * Oh! Got it now.\"
(chuckle) I like the conversational tone of this :-)
You sound like a good friend. I like that. I hope that you have someone whom you can rely on too. It\'s good that you recognise the \'moochers\' though, otherwise you could get seriously hurt. I\'m the loyal type too and have had my share of bad experiences with \'friends\' I now mainly have aquaintances, but have two friends whom I truly call friend, and I consider myself damn lucky...they\'re the best. :-)
\"So I’m not that fond of it, but it’s what I do most and best. If that makes sense.\"
I guess yeah, if you have a flair for that genre, it would explain why you write it the most and the best, even if it\'s not your first love...but I\'m glad that you write in other areas, because I love these fics you\'re writing now, and you do these very well. I\'m assuming that your sci/fi and fantasy works are original? If they get published, there is a good chance that I will end up with a few copies of your work on my shelves...especially the fantasy...love the genre :-)
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah I just wanted ay Iay I really hate Gohan, Piccolo, and Krillen in this fic! *kicks them all* How dare they think Vegeta will use Goku...I mean really! They are just jealous and stupid! Especially Gohan! I really did not expect that from Piccolo...UGH! I wish Goku was more saiyajin so he could blow their asses into oblivion! WOO HOO!!! And that is why I love the fic...so much drama...I also love how Vegeta handles this all, and he wants to be hated and feared by the Z fighters...
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is the best G/V get together that somewhat ressembles their real personalities. So... when are you going to update?
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love Vegeta\'s interpretation of the word \'practical\' LOL!
“Alright guys,” that was his son, “Break it up in there, lunch is getting cold.”
Oh good! Trunks seems to be aware of his father\'s relationship with Goku and seems to be okay with it :-)
\"Regretted not having locked the doors and put a huge ‘GO AWAY’ sign on the front lawn.\"
LOL! That\'s my Vegeta :-) Glad that he is willing to miss out on some \'Goku time\' to be with his son though :-)
“Hey, Dad, why is Gohan so pissed?\"
Does Goten not know then? or is he just confused about the perversion part, because he doesn\'t see it that way...and rightly so, I might add :-)
\"...Couldn’t make that decision for Kakarot, but didn’t want to have to listen to some stupid human answer coming from the Saiyan.\"
\"...Wanted to find the baldy and the string-bean and beat the shit out of them. Because they could influence Kakarot in a way that not even his son could.\"
Poor Vegeta...he is not happy to have to sit back and possibly listen to Goku feeling the need to justify his life to everybody, but at the same time is not willing to interfere with Goku\'s relationship with his eldest, which sort of leaves him in that limbo state of not really having much of an input into his own life choice. I can understand his fear of the others having a possible influence over Goku\'s ultimate decision...he hasn\'t been with Goku long enough to be sure that Goku wouldn\'t back out under pressure.
\"Trunks punched Kakarot’s brat and hissed: “I told you so!”\"
Yay Trunks! :-)
“They’re your friends, Kakarot. I do not care if they like me or not.” A wolfish grin. “I prefer it when they do not like me.”
LOL! Gotta love this attitude, particularly with the way they areatinating Goku...bloody cheek!
\"Sighed. Scratched that place on the back of his head that always tickled when he got nervous.\"
Got a theory about that head scratching thing...wanna hear it? Too bad, I\'m telling ya anyway :-)
I\'m thinking this is the spot that got bopped when he hit his head as a child, and when he is faced with something that really bothers him (or contradicts/confusis Sis Saiyan side) he feels his Saiyan side emerging, he shuts it down with this subconscious action...or some such bullshit...either way, it\'s connected to his Saiyan nature ...that\'s my theory, for what it\'s worth :-)
\"Vegeta stepped up into his line of sight, said: “Don’t let them make you feel bad about who you are. You are a Saiyan. Remember it.” Then he was kissed, just a quick kiss, and Vegeta nodded, crossed his arms over his chest and waited for Goku to leave.\"
Really loved this! Especially the quick kiss...so loving and supportive :-)
\"...and Krillin shrieked (sort of like a girl)...\"
LOL!
\"Hn. So did Chichi. But he actually cared about what she had hated,...\"
ROTFL!
“Why would you be worried?” He cocked his head to one side, played the cheerful idiot one more time for the sake of humanity, “Does it matter?”
Really loved that entire passage...especially loved this bit...there was a sense of menace about Goku that really suits him :-)
\"Goku repressed the snort and the laughter that was in his chest at the hypocrisy of that statement coming from the man who married the former android.\"
Indeed! Goku shouldn\'t have repressed... and he shouldn\'t be made to feel like he has to justify his decision to those idiots...what a huge bunch of hypocrites! Goku deserves better from his so called friends.
\"If he had used the dragon balls to revive Freiza, Kooler, Kid Buu and Cell so he could have a rousing game of tag than he would feel as if he needed to take time out of his busy schedule of fighting to explain to his friends that he was just bored stiff and needed the entertainment.\"
ROTFL! I loved this...you know, if I didn\'t hold back on some of my \'cut and pastes\' I\'d just be highlightinur wur whole fic everytime I review :-)
\"(Again, unless he and ‘Geta banded together and decided to kill the planet for old times’ sake.)\"
LOL! Love it when Goku gets sarcastic :-)
“Yes he is,” that was a new voice, his son, and there was an angry glare on his facHe lHe left Bulma pregnant… Or didn’t he tell you?”
Oh F***! Well that definitely threw a spanner in the works didn\'t it?...can\'t help but feel that Gohan is really loving this fact, just because it gives him a weapon against Vegeta and not out of any real pity for poor old Bulma...little bastard!
Roll on the next chapter...definitely need to know how, both Goku and Vegeta deal with this.
Loved the end dialogue :-)
Thanks for your answer about my plagiarism fear...I feel much relieved. Yeah, not reading while you\'re writing makes alot of sense, but unfortunately, I can go days without being hit with any inspiration...I truly wish I had your gift for writing. And yeah, you betcha, I will definitely let you know when I finally finish my fics...I would love for you to read them :-)
\"I think I heard somewhere that DBZ fans are the second most loyal (Trekkies being the first.)\"
Wow, second most loyal...impressive! This pleases me no end! Yeah, Trekkies are pretty loyal...love Star Trek and all the follow up shows myself...real big Sci-fi fan...just not at Trekkie level :-)
“Alright guys,” that was his son, “Break it up in there, lunch is getting cold.”
Oh good! Trunks seems to be aware of his father\'s relationship with Goku and seems to be okay with it :-)
\"Regretted not having locked the doors and put a huge ‘GO AWAY’ sign on the front lawn.\"
LOL! That\'s my Vegeta :-) Glad that he is willing to miss out on some \'Goku time\' to be with his son though :-)
“Hey, Dad, why is Gohan so pissed?\"
Does Goten not know then? or is he just confused about the perversion part, because he doesn\'t see it that way...and rightly so, I might add :-)
\"...Couldn’t make that decision for Kakarot, but didn’t want to have to listen to some stupid human answer coming from the Saiyan.\"
\"...Wanted to find the baldy and the string-bean and beat the shit out of them. Because they could influence Kakarot in a way that not even his son could.\"
Poor Vegeta...he is not happy to have to sit back and possibly listen to Goku feeling the need to justify his life to everybody, but at the same time is not willing to interfere with Goku\'s relationship with his eldest, which sort of leaves him in that limbo state of not really having much of an input into his own life choice. I can understand his fear of the others having a possible influence over Goku\'s ultimate decision...he hasn\'t been with Goku long enough to be sure that Goku wouldn\'t back out under pressure.
\"Trunks punched Kakarot’s brat and hissed: “I told you so!”\"
Yay Trunks! :-)
“They’re your friends, Kakarot. I do not care if they like me or not.” A wolfish grin. “I prefer it when they do not like me.”
LOL! Gotta love this attitude, particularly with the way they areatinating Goku...bloody cheek!
\"Sighed. Scratched that place on the back of his head that always tickled when he got nervous.\"
Got a theory about that head scratching thing...wanna hear it? Too bad, I\'m telling ya anyway :-)
I\'m thinking this is the spot that got bopped when he hit his head as a child, and when he is faced with something that really bothers him (or contradicts/confusis Sis Saiyan side) he feels his Saiyan side emerging, he shuts it down with this subconscious action...or some such bullshit...either way, it\'s connected to his Saiyan nature ...that\'s my theory, for what it\'s worth :-)
\"Vegeta stepped up into his line of sight, said: “Don’t let them make you feel bad about who you are. You are a Saiyan. Remember it.” Then he was kissed, just a quick kiss, and Vegeta nodded, crossed his arms over his chest and waited for Goku to leave.\"
Really loved this! Especially the quick kiss...so loving and supportive :-)
\"...and Krillin shrieked (sort of like a girl)...\"
LOL!
\"Hn. So did Chichi. But he actually cared about what she had hated,...\"
ROTFL!
“Why would you be worried?” He cocked his head to one side, played the cheerful idiot one more time for the sake of humanity, “Does it matter?”
Really loved that entire passage...especially loved this bit...there was a sense of menace about Goku that really suits him :-)
\"Goku repressed the snort and the laughter that was in his chest at the hypocrisy of that statement coming from the man who married the former android.\"
Indeed! Goku shouldn\'t have repressed... and he shouldn\'t be made to feel like he has to justify his decision to those idiots...what a huge bunch of hypocrites! Goku deserves better from his so called friends.
\"If he had used the dragon balls to revive Freiza, Kooler, Kid Buu and Cell so he could have a rousing game of tag than he would feel as if he needed to take time out of his busy schedule of fighting to explain to his friends that he was just bored stiff and needed the entertainment.\"
ROTFL! I loved this...you know, if I didn\'t hold back on some of my \'cut and pastes\' I\'d just be highlightinur wur whole fic everytime I review :-)
\"(Again, unless he and ‘Geta banded together and decided to kill the planet for old times’ sake.)\"
LOL! Love it when Goku gets sarcastic :-)
“Yes he is,” that was a new voice, his son, and there was an angry glare on his facHe lHe left Bulma pregnant… Or didn’t he tell you?”
Oh F***! Well that definitely threw a spanner in the works didn\'t it?...can\'t help but feel that Gohan is really loving this fact, just because it gives him a weapon against Vegeta and not out of any real pity for poor old Bulma...little bastard!
Roll on the next chapter...definitely need to know how, both Goku and Vegeta deal with this.
Loved the end dialogue :-)
Thanks for your answer about my plagiarism fear...I feel much relieved. Yeah, not reading while you\'re writing makes alot of sense, but unfortunately, I can go days without being hit with any inspiration...I truly wish I had your gift for writing. And yeah, you betcha, I will definitely let you know when I finally finish my fics...I would love for you to read them :-)
\"I think I heard somewhere that DBZ fans are the second most loyal (Trekkies being the first.)\"
Wow, second most loyal...impressive! This pleases me no end! Yeah, Trekkies are pretty loyal...love Star Trek and all the follow up shows myself...real big Sci-fi fan...just not at Trekkie level :-)