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You do a fabulous job of keeping everyone in character in even these not so canon moments. And I absolutely hate your Gohan...but I guess that was the point. He He. I do love your \'spoiled uke\' Vegeta. Hmm...I love your anything Vegeta. I am a \'Geta fan ofcourse.

loved this chapter.

Regretted not having locked the doors and put a huge ‘GO AWAY’ sign on the front lawn. --rofl, hehe that\'s a good idea.

Gave him the false impression that something had gone right in his life after all.--aww that isn\'t a fals impression something is going right in his life...at least I hope it is...

“Hey, Dad, why is Gohan so pissed? He’s been telling everyone that Vegeta is manipulating you into…” he paused there for a second “Perversion I think he said.”---AH! Can anyone hate Gohan as much as I hate him right now? HE is so annyoying...why is he telling everyone that it is perversion...please!!!!!! Gohan is the perverted o.heh.hehe but then again...oh nevermind...I just hate Gohan! *

He didn’t even breathe as he waited to see what Kakarot was going to do. Didn’t want to be the one to remind everyone that what Gohan thought was about equal to the shit that he scrapped off his shoes. --rofl!!! That\'s right Vegeta. that exactly what Gohan is! Aww he didn\'t want to breathe....

Assuming that he was after something as if he wasn’t good enough for their precious savior of the world.--he ismore than good enough, forget what everyone says!

He just blinked, stared at Vegeta, found that he was being more and more amazed by this man. Thought that he had reached his ability to be shocked out of his mind when he had slept with him, and found that apparently the shocks were just starting.--LoL who knew someone could be more shocked than having sex with Vegeta...that a deadly delicious shock within itself...

Vegeta stepped up into his line of sight, said: “Don’t let them make you feel bad about who you are. You are a Saiyan. Remember it.” Then he was kissed, just a quick kiss, and Vegeta nodded, crossed his arms over his t ant and waited for Goku to leave. --oh...no...*dies* that was so wonderful! I loved that so much. It is like something an actual coupl would do...so cute.

Ok, I guess Goku was right more shocks are coming...*faints* Bulma is pregg!?!?!?!?!? What is going to happen?????????????????

Gk: I better get the besx ofx of the century for this.--LoL, hehe I hope you do to..then I get to read all about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once again an amazing chapter...with a surprisngly pregnant Bulma, that I can\'t wait to read about.
Darn Goten and Trunks for breaking up the beautiful lemon that was about to happen...*shakes fists at them*

^.*
-MB-

@.@ Okay, wow, that was totally unexpected. Cool. Love that you Goku is not as dumb as everyone likes to think he is and I love that Krillin is turning out to be as dumb as I think he is. Did that make sensnywanyway, this story is turning out to be so much fun!

Supposed to be at college today, but I forgot my train pass. So now I\'ve got the day off! ^_^

I\'m glad that Trunks and Goten are ok with Goku and Vegeta being together, they seem to be the only mature ones about this. But I can\'t believe the nerve of Krillin and Piccolo (who I may add is the former demon king) and Krillin who married and had a kid with android 18.

Enough of my rant and may I say OMG!!! Bulma\'s pregnant?!? (I\'ll probably review the next chap on sunday cause work have decided to be so nice and make me start at 9.00am instead of 12noon. -_-)

Off to do some work now, so I don\'t feel so guilty about my \'day off\'. ^_^

Love is in the air...and sex...
which is always very good!

and while Vegeta was resolutely not ashamed of his choice to continue this with Kakarot he was not about to put up posters and invite everyone to the show. --LoL aww why not I kinda wanted to see... Its funny how Goku seems to not mind that they are outside but Vegeta is very reserved and doesn\'t want to show off his or Goku\'s goods out in the open for the world to see.

to let him down out of his embrace and that meant he could not longer thrust his hips into Kakarot, and he found that he did not like that at all.--rofl oh...how I love that...poor Geta...he shouldn\'t have said stop. That was nice of Goku to stop when asked to stop also. He is such a gentleman.

Couldn’t stand the thought of handing anyone that kind of ammunition.--Oh wow, that is a wonderful line. Very Vegeta...but I think he is handing over that ammunition whether he knows it or not...and that\'s not a bad thing, at least I hope it\'s not. I love how Goku affects Vegeta...it\'s beautiful

Vegeta rolled his eyes and went inside, didn’t even pause to look at the kitchen or the living room, just went straight to the bedroom and pulled his gloves off, set them on the dresser. --he is very determined isn\'t he..and for a man who doesn\'t want anyone to see GokuGoku is effecting him he sure has a one track mind on getting lube...*shakes head* oh Vegeta, he is just too much!

So I can tap dance on the toilet, he thought. --GAH!!!!!! ROFL!!!!! These are the times I yell for my twin brother and my younger brother Lucas and we all laugh because that is so freaking hilarious! Love it when Vegeta thinks things like that, but never says them.

Wouldn’t be able to hear the breathy voice that was refusing to moan but wanted to.--aww Vegeta dont be so trapped and uptight...let your man hear you scream!

“I’m glad I found you, too, Kakarot,” Vegeta said. --oh gosh, *puts hand over heart* I loved that...

Wowsers!!! Thanks for another amazing lemon! I really don\'t know how you do it, but you rule!!!!!!! You are awesome! *bows to you*
*scratches head* Uh...*mumbles* sorry about that plot twist... *coughs* not really...
Anywho I loved this chap, I love this fic, and most of all I love you... *is standing outside of your window* Hiya, I thought I would start stalking you since I love your fics so much...just cant get enough of you...
ok.......just kidding I was starting to freak myself out a little bit! I am soooooo not a stalker, unless I saw Vegeta of course....

QUICK! DUCK! There’s a flying plot twist!
Gk: Where?!
Card: Don’t know. But Mechanical Butterfly tossed one in here, so beware.--*looks around sheepishy then runs off laughing* I did it!!!! WOO HOO!!!

Gk: As if the great Vegeta, Prince of All Saiyans really listens to the rules of rabid fangirls.---*points to shirt that says: Rabid FanGirl, then smiles*

Getarian:Also, many thanks to Mechanical Butterfly for her ingeniously executed flying plot twist :-)---you are so very welcome, I didn\'t know what else to do...I was at my wits end. I love this fic so much, I didn\'t want it to end!!!

^.*
-MB-

Yay! Lemonade. Wonderfully refreshing and 100 times better for u that soda pop. He He. Okay so it\'s obvious that I really don\'t have anything else insightful to say other than...more please...that was really good.

So sad, that bit with Vegeta and Bulma...If only he had a twin...but then maybe not...they both might have fallen for Goku...LOL! Sorry, had to lighten my mood :-)

I loved Vegeta\'s thoughts about Bulma and Trunks. I\'m glad that he is determined to remain a part of their lives, but I can understand him needing to follow his heart, he would have done Bulma no favours staying with her when his heart was elsewhere...Time to move on.

Bulma handled herself well...I\'m proud of her :-)

Loved that Vegeta told her that he was sorry, not exactly something Bulma really needed to hear at that point, but eventually she\'ll see it for what it was :-)

\"The gloriously over-bright sun had returned and so had the gloriously over-angry Son. Gohan.\"

LOL! Don\'t know if this was meant to be funny, but I cracked up anyway :-)

“I know how you feel,” he said, “Now listen to me while I tell you how I feel.”

Oh yeah! Love this! :-)

I won\'t touch what Gohan said with a barge pole...but I loved the silent \"end of discussion\" attitude of Goku\'s :-)

\"Had his arms crossed over his chest, scowling and doing that sneer thing...\"

ROTFL! Love the way that Goku appraises Vegeta :-)

Really loved all of this, the way Vegeta and Goku interacted with each other, not letting what happened sit heavily on them, catching and eating breakfast, sparring and then finally coming together in a kiss...loved it all :-)

Oh noooo...it can\'t be drawing to an end...I so love this fic!


\"You know I just recently figured out that I drop the subject when I write.\"

Yes, and that\'s one of the things that I love about your writing! The way you drop the subject allows for a better flow of actions and something that would normally be a good read, suddenly becomes highly erotic...you\'re right about the reader being \'right there with them.\' I often become so engrossed with a well written scene (and you do that alot) that I not only visualise the scene but can sometimes hear and smell the surroundings as well (providing sounds and smells are present)...okay, it\'s possible that I just shared too much...I\'m honestly not as weird as I sound :-)

\"(Sorry that I felt compelled to share that insight with you. I just now noticed that I do that.)\"

LOL! No need to apologise...I enjoy reading these extra\'s...plus, in case you haven\'t noticed, I tend to do that too :-)

\"Er… How about he just thinks about it real generally and not anyone specifically.\"

(chuckle) Sounds good to me :-)

there\'s gonna be a real quick review here, I\'ve gotten leave for work in a few!

As always I loved the chapter (I love the entire fic!)
\'He said that like he was trying to find an appropriate excuse, which he probably was because it didn’t seem to bother him that people might randomly walk up and see the two of them. Probably didn’t.\' - I found that totally hilarius LMAO ^_^

And there\'s a plot twist? YAY!!! you know I\'m looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
BYE!

An enjoyable chapter :-)

\"and while Vegeta was resolutely not ashamed of his choice to continue this with Kakarot he was not about to put up posters and invite everyone to the show.\"

LOL! Really love Vegeta\'s inner thoughts :-)

“Yeah,” the big one said, “I guess we should. It might…uh…rain.”

(chuckle) Can definitely see Goku saying this :-)

\"...Now it was asking him why the hell it had listened to his brain in the first place when it was his throbbing erection that should have been allowed to make the decisions.\"

LOL! Yep...Definitely male :-)

Loved it when they were looking for an area to place the house and Vegeta cut off Goku\'s \'sales pitch\' because he just wanted a place to continue their \'activities\' and not a lecture on the wonders of nature...Vegeta and Goku to perfection :-)

“Wow!” that was Kakarot—still in the kitchen—“There’s tons of food in here!”

LOL! Kakarot you fool...there\'s a much more appetizing feast waiting for you upsta...Oooo, doughnuts... :-)

“Why are you in the bathroom ‘Geta?”
\"So I can tap dance on the toilet, he thought.\"

LOL! Love sarcasm :-)

Amazing lemon! These two are really something together :-)

\"“I’m glad I found you, too, Kakarot,” Vegeta said.\"

I love this...but feel a little strange as well...I\'ve got a similar kind of action in one of my stories...although the words are different...and it\'s between Vegeta and Radditz...if I keep it, does that now make it plagiarism?

Also thought I\'d mention, (with you being a fan fan) I also have two G/V stories in the works as well...sort of working on all three at once...depending on what mood I\'m in...Gods, I hope there\'s still a love for this fandom by the time I finish these buggers...LOL!

Really enjoying this story and Yay... \"QUICK! DUCK! There’s a flying plot twist!\"

Extended story! Thank-you, thank-you, thank-you :-) o, mo, many thanks to Mechanical Butterfly for her ingeniously executed flying plot twist :-)

\"...Sm gom going to have to leave dopey little notes.\"

(chuckle) That\'s fine :-) Thanks for responding to my query about the \"overly bright Son & Sun\" line. :-)

Really loved the way Vegeta was responding to Goku\'s caresses. Loved the thoughts flitting across his mind, the way his body rocked back against Goku\'s fingers...the imagery was impressive :-)

Really loved the way Goku was looking at Vegeta :-)

\"...and if he didn’t pick up on the rest from there than Vegeta was not going to waste his time trying to explain it.\"

Liked this! Very Vegeta :-)

\"The fingers were moving, slicked with the oily lubricant. He caught Kakarot’s eyes, stared back at him. Panted and pushed back.\"

Oh swoon! Very erotic!

\"he wiped his fingers on the blanket\"

Way to kill the mood. LOL!

\"Vegeta picked the stupid tube up again, squeezed it out on his palm,.... Used the hand he wrapped around Kakarot to guide him to where he was needed.\"

Ah, Vegeta, Vegeta, Vegeta...what happened to your resolve...LOL!

Oh f***! That was one incredible lemon!

Loved Goku\'s afterthoughts...really loved this:

\"Apparently the Saiyans didn’t have words for things like this either. Because Vegeta was just looking back.\"

Nicely described...could feel the stunned after-effects of their lovemaking. I imagine that neither of them expected it to be that explosive. :-)

\"Thought that: “Shower?” would suffice for now.\"
LOL!

Loved this:
\"Thought of how strong the shorter Saiyan had to be to hold onto that part of himself through all the shit his life had given him.\"

\"There was a snort and Vegeta said, rather dryly: “Very few people ever get to have sex that good, Kakarot.\"

Got that right! That\'s \'cause these two were made for each other... the they\'re both hot. :-)

\"“Oh.” Thought with a bit of blush that this was not the first time he had thought about other guys.\"

Oh, I wonder who? Please, not Yamcha...although, he is a more realistic choice than say, Krillin or Tien :-)

\"...Because there was nothing to be ashamed of. Vegeta was perfect. He was Saiyan.
And Goku liked him. That was all that mattered.\"

Yeah! You te'em 'em Goku!

Loved the end dialogue...and I\'m with Goku...I don\'t wonder why either...just grateful, very grateful...I love when Vegeta writhes and growls too :-)

\"Yep. I’m cruel. But I try to make up for my cruelness. *mostly, anyway.*\"
You do...very nicely too :-)

\"And writing this fic is making me like the Prince more and more. Every time I write about him I start to understand him a little more and ERG because I like Goku. *sheeeeesh *\"

LOL! Yeah, I know what you mean though, I sort of had an \"eh\" attitude towards Yamcha, until I started to give him the (hopefully)funny lines in one of my fics, they seemed to suit his character, and I ended up likthe the character better than before :-)

...And Yeah! More Saiyan Goku! Love his Kakarot side gently mixed with his Goku side.