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Loved this. :-)

\"...He had never tried it with Nappa, because same species or not, he and Nappa were just not compatible in that respect.)\"

LOL! Ya think? :-D

Love the \'foreplay\' - Goku caught on pretty quick I see. :-) Love this:

“Got you.”

Ooo, very sexy. :-)

\"There were those weird ass feelings in his chest again\"

Wondering about this... did I miss something earlier? \'Weird ass feelings in the chest\', are usually not good... I\'m wondering if Vegeta is experiencing some sense of panic that he is not yet fully aware of. Hmm, either that, or I\'m reading too much into this. :-)

\"...(and admittedly much lower) he smirked right back up at Kakarot and lifted his leg—slowly, so as not to get his whole body pinned to the ground—and he rubbed his thigh between Kakarot’s,\"

Oh, very sensual! I loved this scene. :-)

LOL! Loved Goku\'s response to Vegeta\'s question of \"Understand?\" He cracks me up sometimes. :-D

“Is the next lesson what I’m supposed to do with you now?”
\"Lesson? Right. Lesson.\"

LOL! Now who\'s the baka? I love that Vegeta got so distracted by what Goku was doing that he forgot he was supposed to be teaching him about Saiyan instincts... although, on second thoughts... he was sort of showing him some Saiyan instincts. :-D

\"...was still moving his hips in jerking little thrusts against him and he asked ‘what next?’\"

\"As if.\"

LOL! I\'m so loving these lessons... I don\'t know if I\'m reading this correctly, but I definitely saw that as Goku teasing him at this point. Gotta love that. :-)

Loved Goku\'s checklist. :-)

\"...Still, Vegeta was not naked. And they were out in the open. (Not really that large of a problem, but considering this was just a lesson and not the real thing, he figured they should move inside.)\"

Hmm, interesting... could be very interesting. I like that at this point he is still following his \'Earth raised\' conventions, but is already aware on some level, that this may not always be the case... some part of me is a little worried about that, whilst at the same time, I find myself being deeply interested in finding out just who Goku will be by the time he finishes his lessons. Suspenseful. :-)

Something tells me that Vegeta doesn\'t really have to teach Goku anything, he seems to already know... I think what he really needed was someone to coax the Saiyan ou him him... and Vegeta is definitely the one for that... Godoku oku has some hentai little thoughts... Yeah! Go Kakarot! :-)

\"This earned him a slightly amused look from his mate. “Impatient?”\"

\"“For you, always,” he replied.\"

Oh, I loved this! So loving. :-)

Amazing lemon! The way you write these two together is incredible. Loved it. :-)

Wonderful chapter... looking forward to the next.

Loved the end dialogue :-D

\"...that ficcie, Never Before, I wrote so I could “see” what Vegeta and Bulma were like, how close they were at one point. It’s not a ‘prequel’ to this, but that was one of the reasons I wrote it. ;)\"

Well all I can say is that, you have amazing vision... because that was one of the best B/V get-togethers that I have ever read... and trust me, I\'ve read *alot* :-)

\"And you know folks, I was thinking of breaking this fic off when it got to like chapter 40 or 45 and starting a new ‘story.’ I might not. But I might. Just so this one doesn’t get too large. …whatcha dink?\"

There is no such thing as too large when the story is this good! If you still have more to tell then I would love to see this keep going. If however; you have an idea to branch this story into an entirely new direction, then yes... a sequel would work... as with your other universes. But, if you\'re asking... \"More of this, or something new entirely?\" then I vote for \'More of this\' - I love this story. :-)

That was a truly amazing lemon. I loved the bit with the false tears, it highlighted the intensity of Vegeta\'s feelings extremely well.

\"Saw the dark eyes glittering in amusement as he was watched and sneered at Kakarot. Tried very hard to stop wriggling and failed, decided there were other ways to get what he wante.\" .\"

Goku\'s control over Vegeta was very masterful, and he certainly seemed to know what he was doing, and seemed to be enjoying that fact very much... evil Kakarot :-) Loved how Vegeta did indeed get Goku to do what he wanted, very skilled... these two are bloody hot together. :-)

\"His wrists were bruising now too. Which made Goku want to grin with pride and go around and show everyone what he had done.\"

Sounds very Saiya:-) :-) Glad that he has that possessive streak though, \'cause the only ones to show (apart from Bulma and the boys) aren\'t worth showing it too, nor would they understand the nature of it... not sure that I do to be honest... but I figure that it\'s along the same lines as marking a mate, such as a claim bite. :-)

\"Him, because only he should see the Prince at his most vulnerable, at his most desirable, and Vegeta because he should look at them and remember what had just happened.\"

I really love this... it\'s almost poetic. :-)

\"It was nice to have people that you could hang out with and not have to worry about defending your every move.\"

Yeah, this is nice. I am a bit surprised that Vegeta is okay with the bruising, but if it\'s a Saiyan type thing, then yeah, he\'s probably secretly proud of his mate, and he knows that Bulma and the boys don\'t judge them, so yeah... as I said, this is nice. :-)

Lothe the end dialogue. :-)

\"...They will be explained as the ‘Saiyan enlightenment’ goes on\"

Ah... okay. :-)

\"*grin * Yeah, Goku was teasing.\"

(smiles) Good. I thought he was... it was so funny. :-)

\"Let the monkeys out to play I say. (Without dancing.)\"

ROTFL!

Very pleased to see that this fic is only ending as far as the title is concerned... looking forward to \"Saiyan Enlightenment\" very much. :-)

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Panted and felt false tears in his eyes, felt them fall down the side of his face, and this brought the baka’s attention back to him, as he licked the trail of the stupid false tears and then murmured something nonsensical and slowed back down. --*looks for oxygen mask as I feel death approaching* I love that...that is beautiful. This is all so sensual and loving.

Said his name louder.--evil evil saiyajin Prince...
This apparently knocked the breath right out of Kakarot, because he was suddenly struggling to breathe.--*dies, then undies remembering I have oxygen mask* Looks like the Prince\'s little plan worked not that I ever thought it wouldn\'t.

His wrists were bruising now too. Which made Goku want to grin with pride and go around and show everyone what he had done.--Why do I love that? Why does reading that drive me insane? I am a HENTAI!!!!! *says this like I never knew I was one*

Him, because only he should see the Prince at his most vulnerable, at his most desirable, and Vegeta because he should look at them and remember what had just happened.--Aww I loved that. That is so true. That is so sweet, I love this couple *sobs*

Which meant what? That they wouldn’t care or that Vegeta didn’t care if they saw him all bruised?--I totally loved this and the whole ending. I am so glad that Vegeta doesn\'t mind going around his family, with a bruise on his neck. That says a lot to me about Vegeta.

lmao at end notes...poor Geta

*shudders * If you ever come across a Nappa & Vegeta fic NEVER tell me about. *shudders more *--rofl!!!!! Don\'t worry I will~
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WoOt a sequel yeah!!!!!!!!!
Well I thought this story ennded very very nicely!
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Very Interesting. Vegeta has been enlightened on how to love. And Goko has been enlightend on pride.

Vegeta has been enlightened on how to be at peace. Goku has been enlightend on the sex. LOL

I forsee Goku becoming more Saiyan. And Vegeta..... That\'s a tough one atm.

Remember you have enslaved yourself to your exuberant fans. Muahahahah.

Nah, take your time. Chapter six should be up by this afternoon, evening or tommorow morning.

Current time: 7:30 a.m. PDT (5-7-2004)

One more thing...

I have been buried in work. That\'s why I didn\'t update.

a sequel?! I\'d say that\'s wonderful news, but i\'m still trying catch my breath with the tempo of this one alone! I don\'t recall reading anything of yours before this... gotta start. Took me four days just to get this far on this one. I couldn\'t tear my eyes away from the computer screen. God! I\'m astounded that anyone could write so... amazing? \'Well\' just doesn\'t cut it. I\'m in awe here. Geeze. Please forgive me, I\'m truly at a loss for intelligent words. I would\'ve reviewed every chappie before this, but... I kinda forgot with all the excitement and violence. Let me start off by saying that you gave Goku a very interesting personality. Unique, even. It suits him quite well. The relationship between he and Vegeta is agressive, but no complaints here. It\'s not everyday you run into a great work like this. It seems like they\'re constantly thinking of one another, touching, or doing something together. And the way Vegeta referrs to Piccolo is downright hilarious. I love the little nicknames he\'s given him, \'it\' and \'green thing\'. You\'ve really put some depth into their personalities and their relationship. This fic is one of those where you to to begin at chapter one and end at chapter, whatever the last one is. There\'s so much that it\'s mind blowing. That whole gohan fiasco just keeps the temper up. The potential for violence is pretty much always there. Adds to the thrill of the experience. I\'m so relieved that Tien died. I hated him. I hope goku can handle his son, though. This is a very inadeq pra praising of your story, but I really can\'t put much into word at the moment. Let\'s hope that Goku learns to control his saiyajin side better before another explosion takes place. I just got sucked right into the fic. you\'ve got quite a bit of talent.

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He had never tried it with Nappa, because same species or not, he and Nappa were just not compatible in that respect.) --LMAO!!! good, b/c that is just gross. I wonder if there are any Vegeta/Nappa fics out there...I have never come across one.

and stared down at Vegeta—grinning—pinned his wrist to the left side of his body,--so far I am REALLY liking this fight. hehe

went Super Saiyan and grinned all the brighter, tightened his hold on the hands.
“Got you.”--LOVE IT!!! I love when Goku goes super saiyajin...he is so yum!!!!

Rubbed against it until Vegeta was gasping for breath and with that same smirk his lover said: “Understand?”--um...*dies* that was so sexy!!!!

Kakarot kept his one hand wrapped around both of his wrists --he only has one hand on both wrists...X_X *dies again*

Vegeta. Check. Sweating. Check. Trapped under him. Check. Naked. Not so check. --LoL, oh we have to work on that last one. We need nakedness!!!

and his throat was bruising, but that didn’t bother Goku too much, other than it made his mate’s voice huskier, scratchier and that was shiver-worthy. --hell yeah that is shiver worthy!!! *shivers*

Or moaning or groaning or possibly all three. --ALL THREE!!!!!! *cross fingers* please oh please let all 3 happen.

“You need to prepare yourself.” --*wind blows and lemons roll by b/c I am still dead* That is just..gosh you and lemons...damn you!!! you rule the lemon world!!!!

looked at Vegeta and saw his head tipped back, neck bared, shining in the light and bronzed, bruised lightly. With his fingers. Marked by him.
His.
All his.--I love when Goku thinks like this. I just love everything that is happening right now.

(Hard enough that Goku was worried he might be missing a patch of hair.)--lmao!!!!! aww poor Goku. *hands him some rogaine*

We’re still on day one of the ‘Saiyan enlightement.’ --*gasp* really, wow!!! This shall get very interesting indeed.

end notes lol!!!

That lemon was beyon amazing!!!! Beyond I tell you!!!!! I loved it and I will be drooling for days. You rock! I still love their relationship and I love what Goku is learning so far about how to be saiyajin.

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Nice finish off, like Goku\'s fixation with the bruse,lol. I\'ll take a look at the site i\'m always up for anything with the word saiyan in it. Haha. Well am off, Ja ne! ^_^

Cap? CAP?! What the **** is a cap!?!??! Continuation?! @_@ Possibly no story tomorrow!?!?

Damn... u r SOOOOOOOOO lucky my senior prom is tomorrow and I probably won\'t have the time to go near a computer all weekend... -_-0 Gr, I tell u, gr....

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*kidnaps Goku and \'Geta and takes them to prom w/ her*

^^ Mwahahahahahahahaaa!

XD Because name changing is FUN! ^^

<(\' \'<) *looks to the left*

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