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*looks to the left (since the stupid $@(*@^$(^(*!@ computer won\'t let me make a kirby looking LEFT!!!!*

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*kidnaps Goku and Vegeta and take them to prom w/ her*

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA! U can have \'em back when I\'m done... ^^

PS- ...XD Because name changing is fun!

Hey, thanks for the heads up that I could IT also, but I also just read your responce to jaygoose, where toldtold her that stalking sayians wasn\'t the best idea. Are you trying to set me up?!

Ah, I think that your idea to create the sequel because of a shift in the story is a good idea. Vegeta\'s meaning of Pride has been revealed, and now...On to the sayian Enlightenm *s *stands up and pulls pom poms off of ground.* Hey just in case, there may be a possiblility that I could use them, without distracting Goku.

I like that Goku was concerned about Vegeta\'s bruises, and the possiblily that anybody else might see them, but that was certainly a human responce.

I get the feeling from Vegeta\'s sayian point of view, they may be something to be proud of.

Large? This fic ain\'t that large. You could turn it into a sort of epic-size thing. Heh, \'Goku and the quest for sex\', volume 25. Kind of has a ring to it.

WOOO nice. ~Grins~ I have no words for perfection, hehe. I\'m being corny ^_^ sorry! Well gotta go, Ja ne!

Oy... \"Onomotopia\" not \"Onompetia\" *shrugs* Oh well, not like I\'m gonna use the same name each time.... :D That would be too easy.

^_^ Dunno what Goku\'s so freaked out about... I\'m all for them having sex in all the chapters.... ~_^ Smut is good! (No hooting and hollering, dancing monkeys though XD) *posts Pro-Goku and \'Geta sex signs all about the reviewing response space* Mwahahaha...

*sees Vegeta glaring at her purposefully with death in his eyes for encouraging the baka* O-o Eep! Uh... Keep up the good work, Card!!! *runs far away*

\'New story\' as in sequel/continuation or completly independant? That makes a huge difference... I withhold my opinion until I\'m better informed. I will tell you this tho- I - I will never vote for an END ending to this fic - just ain\'t gonna happen. I love your worlds to much to willingly lose one. New fics from you are always good *carefully ignores a certain monkey dance thing* and I dearly look forward to any new AU\'s you create. So... what kind of \'end this fic\' did you mean?

I am glad that Bulma didn\'t seem upset when Vegeta said he had finally killed Tien.

And then she pointed out that it was about damn time, because Kakarot had been ‘rubbing off’ on him for just about long enough.--thats an interesting way to look at it, although very true...

Because, he thought to himself, you wanted to strip me naked and fuck me until I was screaming your name. Of course he didn’t impart this to him, just gave him a dead-stare until Kakarot squirmed and gave up. (For now.) --Ah
whats so bad about that, sounds very inviting to me...But I understand where Vegeta is coming from....and I very much enjoyed that line...^.~

He looked a bit silly with the begging look on his face and the chest full of muscles just out in the open for anyone to come by and see. --silly eh...sounds more like a possesive Vegeta. That line was so cute.

Where was a brick wall when you needed one? --GAH!!!ROFL!!!! Aww but Vegeta is being VERY patient with Goku. I am very proud of the Prince, and proud of his restraint for not bashing his head in somewhere.

(Only because he knew that if Vegeta asked he would let him go and he wasn’t forcing him to do anything, just holding him down.)--I love that...^_^

Evil, evil Prince.--he is evil!!!! *hugs Vegeta* and I love it...loved the way he looked at Goku. And I really loved when Goku kept having flashes of holding Vegeta down. And wondering why that aroused him... WOO HOO HOT SAIYAJIN KNITTING IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I can hardly wait!!!! I guess they should knit a bag or something to carry all of theirons ons in...

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Ah, an agressive Goku lemon chappie. I loved it. The fact tGokuGoku was still thinking it was a lesson has me concerned for the Prince later on.

Any way, I think that Goku has a much better hobby, Vegeta! Oh, and becoming more sayian.

I\'ll stay really quite and not cheer. (although I want to.) *Watches as Goku IT\'s the two of them somewhere else and sighs* I can\'t IT, I guess reading the fic. will have to suffice for the rest of the show.

Now that fresfreshing. Yover ver can go wrong with two incredibly sexy Saiyans rolling around on the ground together getting all hot and sexy...the lemon was very good too. *Sighs dreamily* I envy Macha\'s view.

Loved Vegeta\'s thoughts on Kakarot and his emerging Saiyan nature. I loved how his thoughts travelled back to his latest conversation with Bulma. Loved this:

\"...And then she pointed out that it was about damn time, because Kakarot had been ‘rubbing off’ on him for just about long enough.\"

(smiles) I loved her loyalty to Vegeta. It\'s really nice. :-)

Love this:
\"Saiyans, she seemed to think, were intense and somewhat violent. (Where she got these assumptions, he did not know.)\"

LOL! He can\'t be serious. :-D

Enjoyed Vegeta\'s thoughts as he pondered over what to do about helping Kakarot bring out his Saiyan nature and understand it better. Totally loved this:

\"What to do?\"
\"(This thought process would take him a while, considering that part of coaxing out the Saiyan would include violent fighting, angry sex and fighting for ‘dominance.’) (Whom was he kidding? He was a Saiyan, after all, one that had been trapped up in a box of nice behavior for too long and had just been offered a new playmate.)\"

LOL! Yeah, this sounds very Vegeta-like, he\'s definitely going to want to enjoy his new playmate. :-)

Loved the question and answer scene between Goku and Vegeta. Vegeta\'s inner thoughts as he tried to patiently answer all of Goku\'s questions were very well done. I could definitely imagine him getting all annoyed at having to answer these type of questions when he\'d rather not, but at the same time, acknowledge to himself that this is what he wanted... a more Saiyan Kakarot. I enjoyed this very much. :-)

(Chuckle) Poor Goku, I could feel his apprehension building as his need to keep asking these questions washed through him whilst noticing that Vegeta was getting less and less happy about answering them... what\'s an emerging Saiyan to do? :-)

Loved Goku\'s thoughts when Vegeta told him that they should work on his Saiyastinstincts. Particularly enjoyed his trip down memory lane when he had been confronted by his \"so very nice and homicidal older brother\" LOL!

Oh I so loved this:
\"“So, where are we going to start?” Vegeta gave him an amused look, then he dropped his gaze from Goku’s eyes, down his chest to his ‘personal area.’ Looked at him pointedly.\"
\"Smirked. “Where would you like to start, Kakarot?”\"
\"Evil, evil Prince...\"

(chuckle) Yes, evil... and very, very sexy. ;-)

I really enjoyed this chapter. Looks like where heading into a very interesting area, and I am very much lookingwardward to the next chapter... especially considering the way this one ended. ;-)

\"I was considering scrapping the whole fight scene for a nice steamy lemon at that point. (wouldn’t have been realistic, but it would have been satisfying.)\"

Oh yes, I agree... it most certainly would have been... *sigh*

\"See? I wanted to say all that part about the Vegeta asked Goku ‘can you handle me’ and now it was Vegeta’s turn to figure out if he could handle Goku two chapters ago when I was biting my tongue.\"

Ahh, well you\'re right, it was a very good question... worth the tongue biting. ;-)

\"I often tell people that they argue like a ‘woman.’ (Never mind I too am one.) But as my brother once told me Women tend to argue the ‘what ifs.’ Poor Prince-y poo.\"

LOL! poor \'Prince-y poo\' (love that) He probably thought he would be avoiding these sort of pitfalls pairing up with a Saiyan male... :-D

\"...So I think Goku is looking for someone to tell him that he is *right * either as a ‘earthling’ or a ‘Saiyan’ and Vegeta is the man to go to if you want to be ‘Saiyan.’ \"

Of course, yeah... I was still thinking of him as thinking in human terms only... this makes sense. :-)

\"(Can you tell I have theories abounding about Goku’s thought processes?)\"

(chuckle) Yeah, but that\'s pretty normal... I could spend a lifetime pondering on the complexities that make up The Saiyan Prince. That\'s why we love them. :-)

\"(Which is fine, I always like to see brand new baby reviews be born.)\"

LOL!