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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!
If I was straight, or if I was female and gay, I would force you to marry me, just so I could see you when you wrote these masterpieces!
cause that\'s what this story is, and nothing short of it. I don\'t want to make you feel like some there\'s some lvl of expectation either...but it is.
I read it all in one sitting, because every time I would turn to close it or go away, I had to rush right back and continue. Took me about 6 hours......but I did it! ^_^
all I have to say, bascially, is that THIS is one of those you read about and they make you want to cry cause they\'re so beautiful. Seriousl.I c.I could barely read half ot his, I was sobbing so hard at points. Its such an AWESOME fic.....and I\'m a rabid Goku fan. ^_^
and you did what I didn\'t was possible. YOU MADE ME LIKE VEGETA!!!!!! XD
ya see, I used to HATE Vegeta. I was SOOO full of hatred for him. I dunno why, I jsut hated his char. Then you have to go and write this fic, and explain what his char is all about.....and it made SENSE!
so now I have no more anger.....just love. And 3-somes....*grabs Goku and Vegeta and carts them of_^
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well, that\'s all for now. Can\'t wait for more! I wanna see Saiyan-y, Aggressive Goku! ^_^
Loves ya!
Michael mercer (AKA Nyuushin)
If I was straight, or if I was female and gay, I would force you to marry me, just so I could see you when you wrote these masterpieces!
cause that\'s what this story is, and nothing short of it. I don\'t want to make you feel like some there\'s some lvl of expectation either...but it is.
I read it all in one sitting, because every time I would turn to close it or go away, I had to rush right back and continue. Took me about 6 hours......but I did it! ^_^
all I have to say, bascially, is that THIS is one of those you read about and they make you want to cry cause they\'re so beautiful. Seriousl.I c.I could barely read half ot his, I was sobbing so hard at points. Its such an AWESOME fic.....and I\'m a rabid Goku fan. ^_^
and you did what I didn\'t was possible. YOU MADE ME LIKE VEGETA!!!!!! XD
ya see, I used to HATE Vegeta. I was SOOO full of hatred for him. I dunno why, I jsut hated his char. Then you have to go and write this fic, and explain what his char is all about.....and it made SENSE!
so now I have no more anger.....just love. And 3-somes....*grabs Goku and Vegeta and carts them of_^
_^
well, that\'s all for now. Can\'t wait for more! I wanna see Saiyan-y, Aggressive Goku! ^_^
Loves ya!
Michael mercer (AKA Nyuushin)
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...nothing short of wow...t ret really say much else because of all of the hentai images of Goku and Vegeta \"Knitting and crochetting\" in the next chapter. MMMMMMM. rul rule, Your fics rule and your little char. notes remind me of the ones at the bottom of my InuYasha story..I have rambled enough...::Goes back to drooling at vegeta::
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes. You tell him Vegeta, sayian pep talk, I love it. *is holding pom poms* Give an S-... and A-... an Y-... an I-... an A-... an N, what does it spell SAYIAN.
Ah, I like it when Kakarott gets converted to sayian rather than when Vegeta gets converted to human.
Can I smile manically, even though I am not certain what I am smiling about?
*Sake induced Phylosiphy* (okay, I know that I didn\'t spell that correctly!) \'interesting\' is a very interesting word, isn\'t it. Most people think that \'interesting\' is a synonym for \'exciting\' which most would think of as a good thing, but exciting can be a sysnonym for chaotic, which isn\'t such a good thing. I am going to go with \'interesting\' lemons as the exciting kind, and not the chaotic kind, and I will just have to read and find out, won\'t I. (sadly this has nothing to do with reviewing the chapter and everything to do with your comments at the end of chapters.)
Ah, if my side note is disturbing, let me know, and I will try to leave them out.
Ah, I like it when Kakarott gets converted to sayian rather than when Vegeta gets converted to human.
Can I smile manically, even though I am not certain what I am smiling about?
*Sake induced Phylosiphy* (okay, I know that I didn\'t spell that correctly!) \'interesting\' is a very interesting word, isn\'t it. Most people think that \'interesting\' is a synonym for \'exciting\' which most would think of as a good thing, but exciting can be a sysnonym for chaotic, which isn\'t such a good thing. I am going to go with \'interesting\' lemons as the exciting kind, and not the chaotic kind, and I will just have to read and find out, won\'t I. (sadly this has nothing to do with reviewing the chapter and everything to do with your comments at the end of chapters.)
Ah, if my side note is disturbing, let me know, and I will try to leave them out.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and another thing *after reading other peoples reviews*
Getarian and MB really are gifted at giving reviews aren\'t they?!
(Please don\'t respond, I am just jealous of their abilities.)
Getarian and MB really are gifted at giving reviews aren\'t they?!
(Please don\'t respond, I am just jealous of their abilities.)
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sits quietly on pom poms while anticipating Vegeta\'s next \'Sayian Revelation\'. Keeps one hand over mouth so that I don\'t interupt* Yah, I think that had I really been cheering Vegeta would have turned around and blasted me. Goku is so easily distracted!
What HAS Vegeta gotten himself into? He knows that Kakarott was raised on earth, and now he is going to teach him to be \'more\' sayian. Ah, I can\'t wait to see what happens. (Do you think he\'s bitting off more than he can chew? It cinlyinly wouldn\'t be the first time.) So, we know that Goku was aroused by \'the incedent\', but was Vegeta? He hasn\'t let on one way or another.
I hate tasteless boar. Ew. Who can think about sparring and lemons when you have tasteless boar taste in your mouth? I liked the fact they both thought the same thing about the meal (or did I read that incorrectly?)
So Goku hasn\'t found a new hobby in twisting off boars\' heads? Ah, that\'s a shame. Maybe he\'d find it more intertaining if you greased the pig first. (o.O)
What HAS Vegeta gotten himself into? He knows that Kakarott was raised on earth, and now he is going to teach him to be \'more\' sayian. Ah, I can\'t wait to see what happens. (Do you think he\'s bitting off more than he can chew? It cinlyinly wouldn\'t be the first time.) So, we know that Goku was aroused by \'the incedent\', but was Vegeta? He hasn\'t let on one way or another.
I hate tasteless boar. Ew. Who can think about sparring and lemons when you have tasteless boar taste in your mouth? I liked the fact they both thought the same thing about the meal (or did I read that incorrectly?)
So Goku hasn\'t found a new hobby in twisting off boars\' heads? Ah, that\'s a shame. Maybe he\'d find it more intertaining if you greased the pig first. (o.O)
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Luuuv it, as usual. ~_^ Poor saiyans and their bloodless boar... ^^
^-^ I wonder if I\'m the only one who reads the author\'s notes at the end of the chptEFOREFORE reading the chapter... :D It\'s funny as hell and Goku ALWAYS lets u know if there\'s been sex or there WILL be sex... XD ...\"FINE! GO KNIT!\"
^-^ I wonder if I\'m the only one who reads the author\'s notes at the end of the chptEFOREFORE reading the chapter... :D It\'s funny as hell and Goku ALWAYS lets u know if there\'s been sex or there WILL be sex... XD ...\"FINE! GO KNIT!\"
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He had never backed down from so blatant an attack on him. Until today.--Well thats good. I lad lad Vegeta did back down, ot this could have turned into something much worse.
“Stop cringing,” he snapped. His voice was slightly messed up do tho the fact that his throat was bruising. --aww It\'s almost hard for me to believe that Goku did that. and equally hard to believe that they had this fight.
could he, Vegeta, handle all of Kakarot?--ooh wow I really loved that line. I think handling all of Kakarott might be just a little more scary than handling all of Vegeta. Never really looked at it from that perspective.
If part of that included ‘being held down’ as ire. re. --*smiles* whats wrong with that! Taht sounds very nice to me...*pictures it again*
“I am not ashamed of you Kakarot. I do not think you’re an idiot. And if I thought you weren’t worthy of me than I would have killed you years ago…”--I loved this thought that was very sweet of Vegeta to tell his mate that and I loved that he kept saying No when Kakarott said they should leave each other alone.
He was interrupted by Kakarot pointing out—helpfully—that “But you did try to kill me years aVegeVegeta--lmao!!!! Funny!
THEN WHY WERE THEY EVEN HAVING THIS ARGUMENT?! He swore to all the Gods that this moron before him thought like a WOMAN!--ROFL!!!! Poor Vegeta having to go through all of that...oh gosh they crack me up!
This is what he got for fighting with a victim of attention deficit disorder.--lol GAH!!! This couple is insane...hehe but I love them.
“You have no idea what you’re doing, do you?” Vegeta asked. “You really have no idea how to be mad?”--aww I guess that can be good in some ways and bad as in the example of Kakarott holdong Vegeta\'s throat...although I find that a very good thing...so maybe him not knowing how to be mad is a very good thing.
That means whatever happens to you happens to me as well.”--aww that is so sweet. Really, that was just..*wipes tears* beautiful
This got him raised eyebrows. “How do you accidentally twist off a boar’s head?”--LoL, yes how?
Somehow, this made Vegeta proud. Because he gave him that little smirking smile thing that meant he was impressed. --*dies* that is so sweet b/c Goku wanted him to be proud of him for doing that!
“You’re a Saiyan--I am so glad Vegeta said that, I really think Goku needed to hear that.
“When I…uh…had you pinned down” winced a bit here, “I was… You know…” --AHHH! *screams, cries, drools, faints, dies* I will never forget that moment when Vegeta was pinned down...I loved it so much *hugs moment*
“It better not be hningning with anyone but me,” Vegeta snapped back.--O_O hehe oh
Which made him grin, because he had actually made Vegeta JEALOUS. Or else suspicious. --hehe aww Good job Goku!
LMAO!!!! END NOTES!!!! *dies*
900 reviews!!! *dies more* that is awesome!
is interrupted by Goku : What’s hard? *--rofl!
I am so glad that you didnt scrap that fight...*smiles* I treasure it...really I loved it and not just b/c Goku pinned Vegeta down. I just liked the whole thing in general.
^.*
-MB-
“Stop cringing,” he snapped. His voice was slightly messed up do tho the fact that his throat was bruising. --aww It\'s almost hard for me to believe that Goku did that. and equally hard to believe that they had this fight.
could he, Vegeta, handle all of Kakarot?--ooh wow I really loved that line. I think handling all of Kakarott might be just a little more scary than handling all of Vegeta. Never really looked at it from that perspective.
If part of that included ‘being held down’ as ire. re. --*smiles* whats wrong with that! Taht sounds very nice to me...*pictures it again*
“I am not ashamed of you Kakarot. I do not think you’re an idiot. And if I thought you weren’t worthy of me than I would have killed you years ago…”--I loved this thought that was very sweet of Vegeta to tell his mate that and I loved that he kept saying No when Kakarott said they should leave each other alone.
He was interrupted by Kakarot pointing out—helpfully—that “But you did try to kill me years aVegeVegeta--lmao!!!! Funny!
THEN WHY WERE THEY EVEN HAVING THIS ARGUMENT?! He swore to all the Gods that this moron before him thought like a WOMAN!--ROFL!!!! Poor Vegeta having to go through all of that...oh gosh they crack me up!
This is what he got for fighting with a victim of attention deficit disorder.--lol GAH!!! This couple is insane...hehe but I love them.
“You have no idea what you’re doing, do you?” Vegeta asked. “You really have no idea how to be mad?”--aww I guess that can be good in some ways and bad as in the example of Kakarott holdong Vegeta\'s throat...although I find that a very good thing...so maybe him not knowing how to be mad is a very good thing.
That means whatever happens to you happens to me as well.”--aww that is so sweet. Really, that was just..*wipes tears* beautiful
This got him raised eyebrows. “How do you accidentally twist off a boar’s head?”--LoL, yes how?
Somehow, this made Vegeta proud. Because he gave him that little smirking smile thing that meant he was impressed. --*dies* that is so sweet b/c Goku wanted him to be proud of him for doing that!
“You’re a Saiyan--I am so glad Vegeta said that, I really think Goku needed to hear that.
“When I…uh…had you pinned down” winced a bit here, “I was… You know…” --AHHH! *screams, cries, drools, faints, dies* I will never forget that moment when Vegeta was pinned down...I loved it so much *hugs moment*
“It better not be hningning with anyone but me,” Vegeta snapped back.--O_O hehe oh
Which made him grin, because he had actually made Vegeta JEALOUS. Or else suspicious. --hehe aww Good job Goku!
LMAO!!!! END NOTES!!!! *dies*
900 reviews!!! *dies more* that is awesome!
is interrupted by Goku : What’s hard? *--rofl!
I am so glad that you didnt scrap that fight...*smiles* I treasure it...really I loved it and not just b/c Goku pinned Vegeta down. I just liked the whole thing in general.
^.*
-MB-
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! the boar thing has my stomach feeling kinda squirky...I haveierdierd thing when it comes to food...if it has been compromised in anyway I just won\'t touch it. Sad...I miss out on many interesting meals that way...
Yay, for Saiyan enlightenment...that sounds a lot more fun than anger management courses anyway.
Yay, for Saiyan enlightenment...that sounds a lot more fun than anger management courses anyway.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am hap happy that Vegeta is going to teach Goku about his Saiyan instincts... it should prove to be very interesting. ^_~
Though I\'m glad they\'re not fighting anymore.
I almost fell out my chair when Goku said, \'\"Oh. What\'s foreplay?\"\' - I actually felt pity for Vegeta.
\'- he swore to Kami if one mquesquestion came out of him he would beat him straight into the ground and CACKLE while he tried to dig his way out.\' - I was laughing so hard... although its mean.
\'He smiled. ‘episodes’ he had an ‘episode’ that was funny.\' - He makes me laugh so much, but he\'s so cute! ^-^
931 reviews!... soon it will be 1000
*cheers for Card and does a happy dance*
Though I\'m glad they\'re not fighting anymore.
I almost fell out my chair when Goku said, \'\"Oh. What\'s foreplay?\"\' - I actually felt pity for Vegeta.
\'- he swore to Kami if one mquesquestion came out of him he would beat him straight into the ground and CACKLE while he tried to dig his way out.\' - I was laughing so hard... although its mean.
\'He smiled. ‘episodes’ he had an ‘episode’ that was funny.\' - He makes me laugh so much, but he\'s so cute! ^-^
931 reviews!... soon it will be 1000
*cheers for Card and does a happy dance*
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, this is so exciting. I can\'t wait, and this chapter was so funny. Poor little anoyed Veggie. (sorry about the spelling) Well gotta go, Ja ne!