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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...took me long enought to review didn\'t it. I am actually taking a break from writing my final paper so I could get it in before tomorrow.
You know I love that a movie. \"Interview With a Vampire!\" Dammit, I should have known that! Louis was great wasn\'t he. \"Q of of the Damned\" was such a dissapointment...but we are getting off subject.
I am glad that you did Goku\'s POV after this fiasco...I was worried about the poor guy. He is very sensitive you know. I am glad that he is taking things well...obviously. And I am also glad that he found a way not to do his laundry. :)
*pouts and looks generally sad* This damned paper is taking up all of my writing time. I still haven\'t finished my chappies yet! Dammit. I will try to get them u tom tomorrow EVENING anyway. I hope.
You know I love that a movie. \"Interview With a Vampire!\" Dammit, I should have known that! Louis was great wasn\'t he. \"Q of of the Damned\" was such a dissapointment...but we are getting off subject.
I am glad that you did Goku\'s POV after this fiasco...I was worried about the poor guy. He is very sensitive you know. I am glad that he is taking things well...obviously. And I am also glad that he found a way not to do his laundry. :)
*pouts and looks generally sad* This damned paper is taking up all of my writing time. I still haven\'t finished my chappies yet! Dammit. I will try to get them u tom tomorrow EVENING anyway. I hope.
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a really excellent chapter...
Accepted him. --*sobs* this is such a beautfiul couple...*wipes tears* makes me so happy when Goku does stuff like that, but I knew he would accept him...
*bangs head on keyboard* Gosh I can not even begin to describe how much I loved this chapter. and the lemon...All oe the thoughts Vegeta had...his thoughts on Goku. Especially the part where he said Kakarott fights but not to kill and hated death but Vegeta had handed death out like candy..I mean that was f*cking poetry. I loved it soooo much. Brilliantly written.
and then the fool had thought he could defeat the Prince. --rofl, I Can\'t believe Tien actually thought he could defeat Vegeta. I was laughing very hard at the thought of this...and just remember how cocky Tien was when he was egging on the fight with Vegeta..hehe..pathetic...
I am very glad Goku doesn\'t feel bad for what happened to Tien...very glad. Because Tien was a total and utter idiot who deserves to dies over and over everday in hell. And I am just glad he let Vegeta, be who he is...let him defend his pride...let him show Tien what the real meaning of pride was/is...too bad someone had to die for the definition to be realeased...but not too bad that it was Tien who died b/c he truly deserved it. He didn\'t even try to coexist with them...just kept pushing Vegeta\'s buttons...
Or maybe they could just take the clothes over to Bulma’s and use her washer and that way he wouldn’t have to do anything but play the idiot and ask someone to help him get them started.--LMAO, ok..Goku is very bad...using his idiot-ness to fool ppl. I knew that guy was secretly intelligent.
Yes! He had once again successfully avoided having to do his own laundry. Smiled gleeful--*smiles* that is so cute...
Stink did have its advantages.--lol yes it does...only if that were to happen to me I am sure my b/f would head for the hills...
so you wrote this ficcy last, eh? Well I thought it was superbly written.
*reads end notes and digs hole, buries self and dies* That was TOO funny...I will never EVER forget those end notes...yamcha and the self esteem tapes...oh gosh the whole thing was hilarious though...
I like it when he gets all dominant sometimes. --so do I
OMG, I can not believe you would write 50 pages a night...
I took creative writing classes in high school and the most we would have to write was 30 pages a week ma many times I barely did that. Oh yeah I definately would have envied you.
Well I still do...
I have a short attention span myself, very short. I don\'t think you would like to watch a movie with me either..I get very picky..as in I pick it apart...combine that with a short attentioan aan and you have a very annoying person on your hands...hehe
oh, I don\'t think you were bragging at all...^.^
*Meanwhile, Trunks and Gina plot ways to get even with Mechanical Butterfly for insinuating anything about their mates. *--*gasp* Don\'t even think about trying to get even with me...or else I will get my Doppelganger Goku!!!!! I mean it I will! *smiles and waves at Goten and Vegeta* Yes...a \'good bad\' way can be very good, but oh so bad..and we all know how good, bad good things are...*is confused* Well you get the general idea...
Anyway I loved this chapter ght ght that the description from Vegeta\'s pov was just beautiful...and hilarious that Goku once again doesnt have to do laundry.
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Hey 4000 hits! that is great that is AWESOME!!!!!! ^.^
Accepted him. --*sobs* this is such a beautfiul couple...*wipes tears* makes me so happy when Goku does stuff like that, but I knew he would accept him...
*bangs head on keyboard* Gosh I can not even begin to describe how much I loved this chapter. and the lemon...All oe the thoughts Vegeta had...his thoughts on Goku. Especially the part where he said Kakarott fights but not to kill and hated death but Vegeta had handed death out like candy..I mean that was f*cking poetry. I loved it soooo much. Brilliantly written.
and then the fool had thought he could defeat the Prince. --rofl, I Can\'t believe Tien actually thought he could defeat Vegeta. I was laughing very hard at the thought of this...and just remember how cocky Tien was when he was egging on the fight with Vegeta..hehe..pathetic...
I am very glad Goku doesn\'t feel bad for what happened to Tien...very glad. Because Tien was a total and utter idiot who deserves to dies over and over everday in hell. And I am just glad he let Vegeta, be who he is...let him defend his pride...let him show Tien what the real meaning of pride was/is...too bad someone had to die for the definition to be realeased...but not too bad that it was Tien who died b/c he truly deserved it. He didn\'t even try to coexist with them...just kept pushing Vegeta\'s buttons...
Or maybe they could just take the clothes over to Bulma’s and use her washer and that way he wouldn’t have to do anything but play the idiot and ask someone to help him get them started.--LMAO, ok..Goku is very bad...using his idiot-ness to fool ppl. I knew that guy was secretly intelligent.
Yes! He had once again successfully avoided having to do his own laundry. Smiled gleeful--*smiles* that is so cute...
Stink did have its advantages.--lol yes it does...only if that were to happen to me I am sure my b/f would head for the hills...
so you wrote this ficcy last, eh? Well I thought it was superbly written.
*reads end notes and digs hole, buries self and dies* That was TOO funny...I will never EVER forget those end notes...yamcha and the self esteem tapes...oh gosh the whole thing was hilarious though...
I like it when he gets all dominant sometimes. --so do I
OMG, I can not believe you would write 50 pages a night...
I took creative writing classes in high school and the most we would have to write was 30 pages a week ma many times I barely did that. Oh yeah I definately would have envied you.
Well I still do...
I have a short attention span myself, very short. I don\'t think you would like to watch a movie with me either..I get very picky..as in I pick it apart...combine that with a short attentioan aan and you have a very annoying person on your hands...hehe
oh, I don\'t think you were bragging at all...^.^
*Meanwhile, Trunks and Gina plot ways to get even with Mechanical Butterfly for insinuating anything about their mates. *--*gasp* Don\'t even think about trying to get even with me...or else I will get my Doppelganger Goku!!!!! I mean it I will! *smiles and waves at Goten and Vegeta* Yes...a \'good bad\' way can be very good, but oh so bad..and we all know how good, bad good things are...*is confused* Well you get the general idea...
Anyway I loved this chapter ght ght that the description from Vegeta\'s pov was just beautiful...and hilarious that Goku once again doesnt have to do laundry.
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Hey 4000 hits! that is great that is AWESOME!!!!!! ^.^
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He knew the difference between pride and arrogance. --Love that. B/c that is where ppl make their mie. Te. Taking Vegeta\'s pride for arrogance...^.^ You are so..*thumbs up* you rock!
Let their worthless lives float away on the wind because only the planet itself could really mourn the loss of something so fundamentally stupid.--O.o oh wow that was funny but also true...
Hell, he should have handed out cards with pre-printed insults. --rofl...wouldn\'t thavehave been lovely. Maybe it would have saved time or brought on the fight a little faster.
My fist in your face, my foot burie you your broken chest, the dust of your body as it floats away—useless, the same way you were in life. That’s my fucking pride.--*is slightly scared* I would definately say you have the Vegeta mindset.
Pride was knowing that there was some purpose in your existence.--Oh gosh, that line and the paragraph before it was wonderful. I was so pleased with Vegeta\'s meaning of pride.Really, it was said exactly how I think it should have been said. That was so awesome.
“Uh…” Goten turned red, turned around so his back was to them. “Just…uh…making sure you two weren’t fighting.”--ROFL!!! I feel so bad for him his timing is ALWAYS horrible. Although I don\'t feel too bad b/c I would love to walk in on that! And they are definately not fighting...hehe...
“Alright,” Goten said. Didn’t turn around again, but managed to get up into the air (after a few stumbles)--ROFL!!! poor kid has been traumatized!
Held out one of his hands—the universal ‘hand me the lube now, please’—Lmao, I didn\'t know there was a universal sign for that.
You ARE trying to kill me!!! With these lemons! And I noticed a lemon theme...well I haven\'t read MLS yet, but in the other fics Vegeta was on top including this one. It\'s like Vegeta\'s dominant theme going on...^.^ I will soon see if the them is carried out in the other fic...that is if there is a lemon in it.
(And although I hardly believe anyone will believe this: I wrote this in twenty minutes. The whole chapter! WOW!))--you\'re right I don\'t believe it and I am highly envious! How do you do it?! It is a mystery to me. I couldn\'t write a chapter in 2 hours if someone paid me...well maybe if someone paid me... But I am amazed...
End notes were hilarious...
O_O I swear I will NEVER touch a dragonball...I don\'t want those twins after me in a bad way...that would be very unfun. Unless...it\'s a good \'bad\' way...*smirks*
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Let their worthless lives float away on the wind because only the planet itself could really mourn the loss of something so fundamentally stupid.--O.o oh wow that was funny but also true...
Hell, he should have handed out cards with pre-printed insults. --rofl...wouldn\'t thavehave been lovely. Maybe it would have saved time or brought on the fight a little faster.
My fist in your face, my foot burie you your broken chest, the dust of your body as it floats away—useless, the same way you were in life. That’s my fucking pride.--*is slightly scared* I would definately say you have the Vegeta mindset.
Pride was knowing that there was some purpose in your existence.--Oh gosh, that line and the paragraph before it was wonderful. I was so pleased with Vegeta\'s meaning of pride.Really, it was said exactly how I think it should have been said. That was so awesome.
“Uh…” Goten turned red, turned around so his back was to them. “Just…uh…making sure you two weren’t fighting.”--ROFL!!! I feel so bad for him his timing is ALWAYS horrible. Although I don\'t feel too bad b/c I would love to walk in on that! And they are definately not fighting...hehe...
“Alright,” Goten said. Didn’t turn around again, but managed to get up into the air (after a few stumbles)--ROFL!!! poor kid has been traumatized!
Held out one of his hands—the universal ‘hand me the lube now, please’—Lmao, I didn\'t know there was a universal sign for that.
You ARE trying to kill me!!! With these lemons! And I noticed a lemon theme...well I haven\'t read MLS yet, but in the other fics Vegeta was on top including this one. It\'s like Vegeta\'s dominant theme going on...^.^ I will soon see if the them is carried out in the other fic...that is if there is a lemon in it.
(And although I hardly believe anyone will believe this: I wrote this in twenty minutes. The whole chapter! WOW!))--you\'re right I don\'t believe it and I am highly envious! How do you do it?! It is a mystery to me. I couldn\'t write a chapter in 2 hours if someone paid me...well maybe if someone paid me... But I am amazed...
End notes were hilarious...
O_O I swear I will NEVER touch a dragonball...I don\'t want those twins after me in a bad way...that would be very unfun. Unless...it\'s a good \'bad\' way...*smirks*
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So beautiful....^_^ I\'m looking forward to the baby being born... do you think u\'ll be making a Pan/Bra side plot next to it if the story gose on that long? lmao. Btw i saw you updated this last, i kept tabs,lol. Anywho can\'t wait till the next update, ja ne!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was very happy to read that Goku had no regrets about what Vegeta had done, and still had none the morning after.
I still think that Goku needs to do Goku\'s laundry. I liked his thought process about abusing the machinery, and seeino woo would intervien to stop him from breaking it, LOL.
Oh, and because I didn\'t say it in the lastiew iew I will now, I was VERY impressed with Vegeta\'s definition of Pride. (I got side tracked when they took my ice cream)
And I did read your little author\'s paragraph right before Goku and Vegeta did their dialog at the end of a chapter. I am sorry to say I don\'t know all of those stories. I am on the computer a couple of hours just trying to keep up on the ones that I am current with. I will have to catch up on those during the weekend or something.
I still think that Goku needs to do Goku\'s laundry. I liked his thought process about abusing the machinery, and seeino woo would intervien to stop him from breaking it, LOL.
Oh, and because I didn\'t say it in the lastiew iew I will now, I was VERY impressed with Vegeta\'s definition of Pride. (I got side tracked when they took my ice cream)
And I did read your little author\'s paragraph right before Goku and Vegeta did their dialog at the end of a chapter. I am sorry to say I don\'t know all of those stories. I am on the computer a couple of hours just trying to keep up on the ones that I am current with. I will have to catch up on those during the weekend or something.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Right, just read all of it so far and I think I\'m putting it on my recs.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooo. *cries like a baby cuz there is nothing I can do about it* They took my ice cream, ate the steak from the barbeque fork, and didn\'t even stick around to have public sex. Dammit. *Kicks grill, then hops around on one foot until toes stop hurting.* Ah well, I guess the fanfiction forum is going to be the closest thing they have to public sex.
I like this chapter, and the depth it went into about Vegeta\'s Pride.
Sorry this is short, but I have to go to work.
I like this chapter, and the depth it went into about Vegeta\'s Pride.
Sorry this is short, but I have to go to work.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cackles at the endnotes before turning all reviewy serious*...wow!...a second review!...all in one day!...i\'m bing productive...hee!...ok...so...fist off...the three-eyed freek died in far too little pain...i think you should wish him back so that Vegeta can tear him apart again...and what\'s this impending fightness?...you aren\'t going to make something disasterous happen to our saiyajin are you?...huh?...huh?...\'cause...like...that would be mean...
oh yeah!...just thought you should know that i\'m blaming you...it\'s your fault...i\'m writing again and it\'s _your_ fault...*chibi\'s muse idly wonders why this is a _bad_ thing*
anyway...toodlepip!
oh yeah!...just thought you should know that i\'m blaming you...it\'s your fault...i\'m writing again and it\'s _your_ fault...*chibi\'s muse idly wonders why this is a _bad_ thing*
anyway...toodlepip!
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^ YEAH!!! NO MORE ASS CLOWN!!!!
Goten had always considered Tien to be one of those things that had gone out of style just about the time he got killed by Vegeta and Nappa the first time, and privately always wondered why the bastard thought he was still important. ---That is something I actually think for real!!! I hate Tien so much! hate him more than anyone on DBZ him and Chiatzu...
The fight that gave you ‘fuck the world’ rights and made you the real ruler of the universe because nothing and nobody could defeat you.*cheers* YEAH!!! That\'s the kinda fight I \'m talking about! *grabs popcorn*
“I don’t think Tien’s done yet.” --LoL, nice sentence from a long paragraph of words...but I guess it ended up being the same basic thought he was having anyway. But I am glad he didnt say mor as not to worry Trunks...
Life was beautiful and fragile, and he could destroy it all in a moment if he wanted to. --You know as true as that is, that is just damn sexy to know that he could do that! And just wonderful to know that he can control and always could.
And all that fight he had found, wrapped up in Vegeta, embodied in him. --^.^ aww! That\'s so sweet. I love their relationship...it kills me everyday, but it\'s death in a good way! ^.~
“Its not Goku that’s getting fucked…” A smirk on his face that would be the last.--- -_- Oh gods....I want him to die. How I want that to be his last smirk...his last everything! I can\'t believe he said that. I can\'t believe how ignorant he is..well I can, but it still makes me so mad.
Another smirk. Then the sentence that sealed the deal, and signed the death certificate: “Where’s youide?ide?”--- O_O!!!!!!!!!! HATE HIM!!! Didn\'t think that was possible, but I do I hate him even more...I really do. Ia m sooooo mad!!!!! AH! I want Vegeta to rip his head off...just worse anything..just kill him! Oh and that line was very cool....
Power doubled. Burst and crackled and Vegeta was burning alive insif itf it. --Well when you say like that...he just sounds unbleievably sexy...and very very very dangerous...and sexy...!!!
Didn’t want to even so much as pretend to be a threat to Vegeta.---So this must be some serious stuff!?!? but I knew that. I am happy that Goku is doing this..and supporting his mate, which I had no doubt in my mind that he wouldn\'t. But wow I love this aspect that a saiyajin becoming so angry could feel threatened by any \'readably high\' power levarouaround them.
at lat life did not last very long. Vegeta rose his hand, cracked a sadistic grin. “Good bye.” --*dies for a very long time* hehe..loved that so much. Loved the sadistic grin and could totally picture it...and loved when he said goodbye.
and especially glad that the wonderful beam of power destroyed the stupid \'ass clown\'!!!! YEAH!!!! *dances to really rad music* HE is dead!!! FINALLY!!!!!
Turned again, dented the earth under him, stood in the midst of the debris that churned and cycloned around him. Stared at him. ---*is scared* ooohh but he is just so sexy! *tries not to diethouthough for a second he was goinggo pgo psycho or something...hehe. glad he didn\'t.
ROFL to Goku swearing to wash his clothes and loved how that made Vegeta drop his power level.
Tien’s gravestone marker: “Here Lies a Truly Stupid Ass Clown.”--ROFL!!!!!!
Oh gods...if I even dared to set limits or boundaries for my brothers they would lau laugh in my face. My younger brother who is 16 can be quite an ass clown himself sometimes but what can I do? Absolutely nothing...*sobs* hehe it\'s actually not that bad...unless he comes into my room when I am gone..or he drinks my Pepsi..because he has died many times for doing that.
I accept that I’ve transformed him into the idea of ‘baseless prejudice’ and ‘meaningless hate’ and both of those things I have no problem with getting rid of.)--I agree and I am truly glad he is dead...*finds dragonballs to cause some trouble* or is he??? j/k seriously I am glad he is dead I hate that dude!
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Goten had always considered Tien to be one of those things that had gone out of style just about the time he got killed by Vegeta and Nappa the first time, and privately always wondered why the bastard thought he was still important. ---That is something I actually think for real!!! I hate Tien so much! hate him more than anyone on DBZ him and Chiatzu...
The fight that gave you ‘fuck the world’ rights and made you the real ruler of the universe because nothing and nobody could defeat you.*cheers* YEAH!!! That\'s the kinda fight I \'m talking about! *grabs popcorn*
“I don’t think Tien’s done yet.” --LoL, nice sentence from a long paragraph of words...but I guess it ended up being the same basic thought he was having anyway. But I am glad he didnt say mor as not to worry Trunks...
Life was beautiful and fragile, and he could destroy it all in a moment if he wanted to. --You know as true as that is, that is just damn sexy to know that he could do that! And just wonderful to know that he can control and always could.
And all that fight he had found, wrapped up in Vegeta, embodied in him. --^.^ aww! That\'s so sweet. I love their relationship...it kills me everyday, but it\'s death in a good way! ^.~
“Its not Goku that’s getting fucked…” A smirk on his face that would be the last.--- -_- Oh gods....I want him to die. How I want that to be his last smirk...his last everything! I can\'t believe he said that. I can\'t believe how ignorant he is..well I can, but it still makes me so mad.
Another smirk. Then the sentence that sealed the deal, and signed the death certificate: “Where’s youide?ide?”--- O_O!!!!!!!!!! HATE HIM!!! Didn\'t think that was possible, but I do I hate him even more...I really do. Ia m sooooo mad!!!!! AH! I want Vegeta to rip his head off...just worse anything..just kill him! Oh and that line was very cool....
Power doubled. Burst and crackled and Vegeta was burning alive insif itf it. --Well when you say like that...he just sounds unbleievably sexy...and very very very dangerous...and sexy...!!!
Didn’t want to even so much as pretend to be a threat to Vegeta.---So this must be some serious stuff!?!? but I knew that. I am happy that Goku is doing this..and supporting his mate, which I had no doubt in my mind that he wouldn\'t. But wow I love this aspect that a saiyajin becoming so angry could feel threatened by any \'readably high\' power levarouaround them.
at lat life did not last very long. Vegeta rose his hand, cracked a sadistic grin. “Good bye.” --*dies for a very long time* hehe..loved that so much. Loved the sadistic grin and could totally picture it...and loved when he said goodbye.
and especially glad that the wonderful beam of power destroyed the stupid \'ass clown\'!!!! YEAH!!!! *dances to really rad music* HE is dead!!! FINALLY!!!!!
Turned again, dented the earth under him, stood in the midst of the debris that churned and cycloned around him. Stared at him. ---*is scared* ooohh but he is just so sexy! *tries not to diethouthough for a second he was goinggo pgo psycho or something...hehe. glad he didn\'t.
ROFL to Goku swearing to wash his clothes and loved how that made Vegeta drop his power level.
Tien’s gravestone marker: “Here Lies a Truly Stupid Ass Clown.”--ROFL!!!!!!
Oh gods...if I even dared to set limits or boundaries for my brothers they would lau laugh in my face. My younger brother who is 16 can be quite an ass clown himself sometimes but what can I do? Absolutely nothing...*sobs* hehe it\'s actually not that bad...unless he comes into my room when I am gone..or he drinks my Pepsi..because he has died many times for doing that.
I accept that I’ve transformed him into the idea of ‘baseless prejudice’ and ‘meaningless hate’ and both of those things I have no problem with getting rid of.)--I agree and I am truly glad he is dead...*finds dragonballs to cause some trouble* or is he??? j/k seriously I am glad he is dead I hate that dude!
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, and you wrote it in that short amount of time? Youre a godess,lol. Poor Goten must be embaresed, hehe, and i liked the way you potrayed what pride means to Vegeta i thought it was perfect meaning. Can\'t wait till the next chapter, Ja ne!