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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter pleaz
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm normally not one for the angsty overloads, but you pulled it off well. It's a pity that by the end Trunks is still determined to kill Goten despite Goten having no control over himself. That and he'll have no idea why Trunks wants to kill him the following day.
In a way I like that though, too often these days you see fics there the N/C suddenly transforms into true love. In the end I found it to be a very satisfying read. Having a sequel oneshot would be neat, I can see you pulling that off fine as well. ;p Lovely fic.
In a way I like that though, too often these days you see fics there the N/C suddenly transforms into true love. In the end I found it to be a very satisfying read. Having a sequel oneshot would be neat, I can see you pulling that off fine as well. ;p Lovely fic.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
any more update
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please make a part 2 im begging you
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
but please dont kiill goten its the first ive read and its the beest i will ever read
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a good story but what happened with Goten I don\'t really understand what happened.!!!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don\'t kill goten!!! he\'s innocent!!!!!!!!! despite the fact that he did it. \"temporary insanity\"!!!!!!!it was well written though.