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It is possible. Maybe Videl didn't really love him but knew she needed to have some conection to the Eath's Special Forces or her and Hercule would be killed eventually. She reallized that when she was his friend she and her father were spared, so she made sertain she had a child with him to sacure a conection. Once Gohan found this out he seporated with her. But Pan's existanse saved them anyway. Continue the story it is good, and this is from a Gohan/Videl fan.

Good start, but do you plan to write more chapter? You beganning has a an adult theme without it being just sex, which is a rare find. I hope you add more.

your joking

This was a really interesting fanfic. Can\'t wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon

Good, Good, Good. What else can I say? You are very good at describing things like clothing. A talent I envy. And the sex, well.....mmmmmmmmmmmmm You describe that very well also.

Sugoi! I loved this pairing, I thought I wouldn\'t but... I also loved the way you made Bra act like Vegeta somehow, it would explain why Vegeta prefers her over Trunks. One little thing though, don\'t take it the wrong way, I loved this fic A LOT, but I think you could have milk Bra\'s obbsession a little more, if you get what I mean. I don\'t know what you have planned for the rest of the fic ( and I can\'t wait) but I felt it was missing something...I don\'t know maybe I\'m too much into detail. and since you write wonderfully well I kind of wanted more angst.
Keep up the exellent work! Blue Siren