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O_O OMG! Goku and...OMG! I read your last story Unconditonal Bonds and I loved it as well. This fic definitely does not disappoint. I love the extra drama in this fic and the pacing of the plot is spot on. I actually find the Goku/Trunks pairing to be refreshing from the common pairings (what can I say I like pairings that aren't as conventional). I can't wait to read what happens next.

TTYL ^.*

Wow, I'm glad I decided to read this series, even though it's unfinished and sadly looks like it will never be finished. And it was only out of boredom that I read it, because I'm usually not fond of any pairings involving Nameks at all. But wow! This was really awesome! And I'm extremely picky, too...I don't just toss out compliments like that randomly. I'm reviewing on this volume because it was undoubtedly the best of the three - the first was good, but fairly uneventful and....normal. The third was unfinished and therefore a bit disappointing. But this volume was Pure Win. The Goku/Trunks surprise was epic (though I really, really wanted a Goku/Trunks lemon and never got one), and the ending was just crazy. I'm a G/V fan, too, so it's amazing that I enjoyed it so much. I felt like you were teasing with the possibility of bringing Goku in on the P/V action in the beginning of this volume, and you probably did that on purpose, but wow, I didn't expect where it went - and amazingly, I was far from disappointed. Also, the amazingly kinky P/V sex in this fic was HAWT. I've seen so many people try to do split-form sex, and do it badly, but that was awesome - same goes for the violent sex from earlier.

If you ever revive this fic, I think I will gasm in happiness.

wow that was an amazing fic! So sad that it is over, and that Vegeta left ... but for some reason i do not feel truly sad that he left ... maybe as you said, it fits his personality ... it sucks, but no tears were shed ... Anwyho, just an amazing story ^__^

haha i liked Goten's and Trunk's mockery of Vegeta and Piccolo ^__^

i love your intro to this chapter - the whole crazy shopper malls and those damn annoying kids! God the bug me to no idea
Hahah Vegeta holdings grudges, no way ... hahah

wow what a steamy sex scene! I really cannot say more than that ... wow

I am SO glad I found this story too late to follow it chapter by chapter, because I think I would have died of a suspense-related breakdown...

To begin with the ending, I like it. I'm glad there's a sequel (gods, am I glad!), but I think it's very plausible and fitting that V would transform and rage, then regret and try to make amends by sparing Goku and leaving P. This last chapter was spectacular, a worthy culmination of all that had gone before. It did not disappoint, but it was heartbreaking to me, so very sad.

V wasn't the only one disturbed by the Goku/T get-together... For myself, it's a 'what in the hell does T see in him?' kind of questioning. It seems to be more of a distraction from his obligations/rebellion against his cloistered upbringing, more than a genuine 'found my soulmate' kind of relationship. Goku is obviously still totally screwed up by Chichi's death, so his falling for T is completely understandable. Might I say, I just don't like your Goku--he gets on my nerves, poor guy...

How in the hell did V take Nail and Kami, and where did they go? How do you kill or banish a psychic presence? That part just doesn't make sense to me, and I like to think that they aren't gone forever... I have to think so, for P's sake.

I can't believe Gohan! What a jerk! and poor Goten! He can't get a break, can he?

The lemons were, um, stupendously licentious and debauched. Bravo! Needless to say, I was almost too distracted by the plot to pay them much attention at all. But V and P and very good together, very good indeed. *fans self*

So, onto the third part...I am frankly petrified, knowing it's not finished. How will I cope, if it's anywhere near as good as this? Oh well, if I die of suspense, it will be a good death. :-) Thanks so much for this!

yeah i was just rereading this story and i remembered something i really wanted to know about...what did vegeta do to piccolo\'s cape and turban that he doesn\'t wear them anymore? u mention that it was a fond memory of vegeta\'s but i\'m so curious, i gotta know :P great story though i love it

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hay i revied ur last dbz fic were piccolo and vegeta go together. i loved it and this one too. its great all around i aplode u being a big dbz fan and fic fan myself. the male on male interaction was truly the best i have ever seen and i was completly greatful that my girlfriend was here to help out after reading some of them. i hope to see more fan fics frome u in the futre. thanks for the great stories it only took my 3 days to read them both.

colt