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Very disturbing. Left more questions than answers. What an aftermath.

The curse that Vegeta placed on his son...His mate Piccolo destroyed...The hatred of Gohan towards Trunks...and Goten\'s wrath towards his father? And what of that father, Goku? Does this fool remain the village idiot? Or does he turn into Kakarrot a true Sayian and avenge his mate? Vegeta cursed and disowned his son, said he won\'t enter into the Sayian version of the afterlife. Strange, one would think he would have cursed Kakarrot as well...instead he\'s just going to kill him. Oh! the possibilities! Confrontation: Part Deux!

...And what of Piccolo? How mad will he be driven? To have lost both Kami and Nail? They were his family! Sudden death plus losing a mate? If he isn\'t pushed to the brink of madness...Will he turn renegade and blow up the planet? Talk about devastion!

So many issues, so much angst. Trilogy, Sequel, Epic...Whatever you choose to call it, this SAGA isn\'t over yet. Please continue...this work is too important to leave unfinished.

[Safe Journey]

Very disturbing. Left more questions than answers. What an aftermath.

The curse that Vegeta placed on his son...His mate Piccolo destroyed...The hatred of Gohan towards Trunks...and Goten\'s wrath towards his father? And what of that father, Goku? Does this fool remain the village idiot? Or does he turn into Kakarrot a true Sayian and avenge his mate? Vegeta cursed and disowned his son, said he won\'t enter into the Sayian version of the afterlife. Strange, one would think he would have cursed Kakarrot as well...instead he\'s just going to kill him. Oh! the possibilities! Confrontation: Part Deux!

...And what of Piccolo? How mad will he be driven? To have lost both Kami and Nail? They were his family! Sudden death plus losing a mate? If he isn\'t pushed to the brink of madness...Will he turn renegade and blow up the planet? Talk about devastion!

So many issues, so much angst. Trilogy, Sequel, Epic...Whatever you choose to call it, this SAGA isn\'t over yet. Please continue...this work is too important to leave unfinished.

[Safe Journey]

yes you\'re right, this chapter was really strong for me. But i agree with you when you say it is Vegeta\'s reaction, i really believe he would react this way. Poor Goku! And poor Vegeta also, he might have suffered a LOT with the confession to trigger the SSJ4 tranformation and to snap at Piccolo the way he did. Even being a Goku fan i liked (weird ne??) the end of the story. hope to read more from you in the future.

see ya.

PS: oh! and you\'re rigth once again, i left my first review in one of the lists.

That feeling has overcome me. That swirling mixture of emotions that comes at the end of a truly great story. Sadness, relief, anger, happiness...they are all in there among others. So the first fic I ever stumbled across at this site has come to a close, but an ending was inevitable. You are a truly evil, yet brilliant writer. Thankyou for writing this fic. *showers Makota with gifts* Have fun in England. *prays Makota finds time to write while there and prays for sequel*

~Kira~

P.S.
I loved the ending. It kinda whacked me hard and knocked the breath out of me but, I loved it. I know this was the final chapter and all but, Post again soon. (for a new fic.)

Waaaa! The end?? Such a sad ending too. I do like the sudden ssj4. I wasn\'t even thinking about that as a possiblity of what coulda have happened. Oh poor Nail and Kami. And yes very sudden. But at least it dos leave it more or less open. I\'ve really enjoyed your fanfics. *cries* Well I do hope you find the time nspinspiration to write a 3rd part of this series. And I so will be sending you art ^^. And finishing up my V/P, S/P fanfics. But..*sniffles* Now I\'m going to have to searh the net forever to find more V/P fics to tide me over.
Hehee there\'s more I wanna say but I just can\'t think of it. Plus I have a feeling I\'d ramble forever ^^;;

When I first saw your update and the fact that the story was now complete I was in shock. I couldn\'t believe it. How in the world seeing how the last chapter had ended could the story be over...already. The first thing that came mind was that Goku had to be dead. And I got a bit excited at that. No one kills off Goku. Well I did in my new fic, but that is beside the point. My morbid self being, I wanted it to be true. But I understand that it is terrible mean to do so. *sigh* Anyway, the ending worked. I don\'t know how but it did. Vegeta has never been a good guy, let\'s face it. He just cared for his family and damn everyone else. But when Trunks went against the laws that the Prince had always believed in it was just too much I suppose. It\'s cool though, Vegeta did eventually become stronger than Goku. *grins*

I\'m sad that its over but all good things must end. I hope to see you around again. I really enjoyed myself.

AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are my favourite writter and now you stop? You can´t do that to me! Please continue! And if you continue in a few months it doesn´t matter to me , but please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Awesome ending, but is it really end?end? I mean, will Vegeta really abandon Piccolo? Will you start a new series after this one?

Wow, that was abrupt. I\'m so used to happy endings...ah well, you were right, it was realistic. (Although I personally adore Vegeta being kittenish and weak, it makes me think of tying him up and doing incredibly depraved things to him, he, he). I like your SS4 better than the one in GT as well. I totally anticipated him disowning Trunks, because that\'s what I\'d do and Vegeta\'s mucre cre concerned about pride than I am. All in all, good story, worth the time.

hummm... decided to review again because i feel the way i described Piccolo and Vegeta in my previous review was kinda harsh, i just meant to show that IF there are reasons for prejudice towards Gk/T relationship then there are also reasons for people (Goku\'s friends) to not accept V/P, specially \'cause they were the enemies before they got to the \"good side\" even if they proved their lty lty later... anyway, i think i said too much already. I\'m just trying to undo any bad feelings that comment may have created.

ja ne.