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ARGH!!!! cruel! update please asap!

hey! very nice story. i reviwed before right after goku and trunks got together, but that was by e-mail. Now i\'m here to say i kept reading more attentivelly after that because i just love the pairing (prefer Mirai Trunks/Goku). Well i can\'t wait to see how you will write the next chapter. How Vegeta will confront Goku and Trunks cause i don\'t need to wonder if he liked the \"confession\", the \"Booom!\" was clear enough. ^^ I just ask (beg?) you not make Goku and Trunks give up their love because of some dumb uncalled prejudice.

But seriously, all the fuss is because of the diference in age? C\'mon HOW can they (everybody) be creeped out by something so ridiculous like this? i believe seeing vegeta and piccolo, two gay aliens of diferent species, together would be much more disturbing (i have nothing at all against it) than a simple twenty years diference in the age of two people who love each other. Besides if people (Goku\'s friends) analize things better they will realize they were the first to say \"Goku never grew up\" so his mental age, in spite of having kids and grandkids, is younger than anyone i can think of. Anyway this was just a thought i fi hai had to register.

ja ne.

Woo hooooo! Updated! Lol. Man it was a really bad idea to bring Vegeta there ^^;;. *cries* Cliffhangers are evil. But excellent chapter, well worth the wait. Poor Piccolo. If he survived the blast and Vegeta is done beating Trunks down, he\'s probably in a a lot of trouble for lying to him. Oh man hope Bulma surs ths that O_o.

Er well I\'ve been working of fanart for your fic since I first saw Unconditional bonds at Smoochies. Of course I was gonna get your permission first ^^; But I put it away and I\'m not sure where it is now ^^; I need a scanner. So technically I\'m not hoarding ^^.

>.< Don\'t like cliffhangers! Well, I did until just then. I think this is my first review for this story. I just read it all at once and I have to say I love the smut where there are 3 Piccolos and 1 Vegeta. Mmmm.....

Ahhhh...*falls out of the chair and rolls on the floor in hysterics* Oh my god! I can\'t wait to see what happens next. You should try suspense novels. You have natural talent. :)

*BOOM* haha...reminded me of what happened to my dinner in the microwave last night. oh the lovely \'splosions. I wonder if Trunks actually told him or if Vegeta just erupted from impatience...I can definitely picture somethin\' like that with the giant mushroom cloud rising through the roof of Capsule Corp. into the sky. Hahaha...Piccolo\'s probably not going to get \'any\' for a month after this. Oh crap...I forgot about Goku...Vegeta is going to KILL him, wish him back to life, KILL him again, track him down in Other World, and kill him yet again. It seems I\'ll need more than a raincoat for this...maybe a metal umbrella to protect myself from Goku\'s bloody body parts that will rain from the sky when Vegeta\'s done with him.

On another note, I\'m glad you like my comments. Squee! *feels special* Update soon!

~Kira~

Oh wow .... BOOM ! I soooo saw that one coming because if I was Vegeta it would be much much bigger than boom. Wonderful wonderful fic ! Very well written, and I am surprised because neither of the pairings in it are pairings I am originally a fan of but you do them justice. I can not wait for an update (which is selfish bec you you just did one while I was in the middle of chapter 15) PLEASE email me and let me know when chapter 19 gets here.
~Angel

Uh-oh!! Judging by the way this chapter ended, Vegeta is pissed off! Hurry with the next chapter!!!

when the shit hits the fan i\'m running and ducking This is great update sooooon please i\'m one of your loyal readers i promise i am. I\'m eager like ne\'se\'s business to see whats fixing to happen.

This is the BEST DBZ storry I´ve ever read! PLEASE CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!