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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I actually felt the dread when Trunks phone rang ^^;;;. I\'m so happy you updated and yeah I\'d be surprised if your next chapter wasn\'t long. So everything comes out in the open then? Oh man poor Piccolo. More guilt and make up sex for him then ^^;.
I can\'t wait! I\'m so excited to see this. Oh and the fan art! Always have to check out the competition n_n.
I can\'t wait! I\'m so excited to see this. Oh and the fan art! Always have to check out the competition n_n.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it was short but it was really good. You write excellent dialogue. I was on the edge of my seat. I can\'t wait for more...update soon...please?
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Another beautiful chapter! I\'m also burning with anticipation for the next chapter. Yes! I love it when the shit hits the fan. AGH! I\'m so hyper after reading that chapter. I wonder just how Vegeta will react. Hmm..it might be scary *hides in corner*, but then again it might not. I would love to see Gohan get his for being a snitch. Grr...all tim time Piccolo spent trying to hide it from Vegeta and Gohan ruined it. Anywho, keep up the good work and update soon.
~Kira~
~Kira~
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, the moment of truth is about to arrive for Trunks! Goku better hope that Piccolo can hold Vegeta back when he\'s told the truth! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was just...wow. I cant wat to see the reaction vegteta is going to have to Goku and Trunks. of oourse there isn\'th heh he can do about it is there. I wonder if g/v chapters will become common or will you give them their own story?
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol! You know maybe I shouldn\'t read fanfics so early in the morning. I read the warning at the begining of 16 and thought, \"Orgy? Must just be kidding around.\" I somehow completely forgot he could use tri form. Very creative ^^. Vejiita does seem to have an overactive imagination.
Ah! Five more days still. I can\'t wait to see the confrontation. It should be a very powerful chapter.
Ah! Five more days still. I can\'t wait to see the confrontation. It should be a very powerful chapter.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story so far! Yours was the first fic I came across when I first joined AFF (which wasn\'t long ago). I loved this one so much that I went back and read the story that preceeded it. You are an amazing writer. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
~Kira~
~Kira~
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Trunks better tell Vegeta what happened before Gohan does! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was supercalifragalisticexpealadocious! Did I spell that right? Anyway, I loved seeing things from Goku and Trunks point of view. Wonderful. I am glad that there is another couple in this fic now. You never can have too much man on man action.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo. I hadn\'t checked your fic since saturday and already there\'s more chapters? ^^. This brightened my day. I\'m just itching to see Vegeta\'s reaction. Piccolo\'s was...Hm..What\'s the word. Oh yeah. Terrifying. I can see why they\'d pretty much cower from his rage. I\'m so looking foward to see how the next couple of chapters pan out. ^^.