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Thank you Thank you Thank you for letting me know. This is goood. but will Piccollo be getting revenge against vegeta or is he just going to let vegeta have his way. I\'m curious.

That was an especially evil chapter. I love when the Prince gets all devious. He was also good with Pan too. Ahh, we get to see all side of the loverly Prince. Poor Piccolo, I must say that he is getting a lot more than he deserved though. I can\'t wait for the next part. Great fic, by the way.

I\'m glad Goku is back to normal. Him being like that was creepy. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!!

ohhh likey likey. Is it going to become a V/P/K now? I\'m curious. Also what happened to Chi Chi. Or are we going to leave it as a freak accident. Could you email me when you update?

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*gigglegiggle* Cannot wait to read it!!!!!!!!I\'m sooooooooo happy!!!!! *hugs Makota*
I\'ll let U know my opinions!!!Anyway,I\'ve waited for this for sooo long!!!!
*smack*

Cool!! Totally awesome! It didn\'t take you long to post up the sequel at all. Hurry with the next chapter!!

I loved the opener. I must admit I went on a search for this story and found it archived somewhere else. I have made it throught the firsven ven chapters already but I reread the three chapters and i must say that I have renewed appreciation for the way you opened the story.

-A child’s kaleidoscope.

Red and sparkle and swimming with white shell and gray catching the light...all swirling together.

Peaking through the ribbon edged ice forming new facets, dimensions.

The snow coming down...falling on the water, catching on her eyelashes.

Like a china doll, glass eyes catch the sun, crimson floating from her hair… like satin.

Suspended in a tube held up to the eye; turn her and maybe more will appear.

The scenery is always changing.

... I never knew blood could preserve such beauty.-


It makes alot of sense now. Lovely and so sad all at the same time.